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A grave threat to the long standing peace of Equestria has surfaced, many years after the turbulent events surrounding Nightmare Moon. They call themselves "The New State" and they're hell bent upon overthrowing the Royal Diarchy. When their task is set in motion, Twilight Sparkle, now a mother raising a filly alone, is left with little choice, a decision is made, and her young filly is thrown into a tumultuous world of terror, paranoia, and pain, where life is controlled... monitored... where the law is strictly and efficiently enforced- and few have the strength to resist.

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An interesting combination of a story.^^ :heart: Though. I do have to point out that; this seems similar towards the "Hunger Games." I'm just saying with the peacekeepers in all; it's okay there's no threat. Where you inspired? It's okay if you were feel free to write whatever you want; inspiration of creation.c: :pinkiehappy:

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I've never actually read 'The Hunger Games', to tell the truth, so any similarity there must be coincidental. :derpytongue2:
(I'm probably be the ONLY person in the world who hasn't read that, it seems XD )

The story is inspired mostly by George Orwell's 'Nineteen Eighty-Four' and Ray Bradbury's 'Fahrenheit 451'. There's also a bit of Aldous Huxley's 'A Brave New World' thrown in there, but not much. For the most part, it's supposed to be a generalized Dystopia, incorporating most of the elements we typically associate with such a system. ^^

604142 Ahh okayXD I'm a fan myself of "The Hunger Games" I would especially request it for those who haven't read it. Or, of course go ahead and see the "movie", but there are "important" details that were excluded. I agree yeahXD :rainbowlaugh: No, I know plenty of others who haven't read it:DDD

Yes of course Dystopia the opposite of "paradise" just got done last quarter over a big lesson of "Dystopia" vs. "Utopia" in Language Arts. Ended up reading "Matched" another known Dystopia book. Actually you created the exact image for an "dystopia" story; everything is in order.^^ Good job:DDDD I can't wait to read more of thisc: I hope it becomes popular it's that good^^ :twilightsmile:

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Well, I guess I'll have to read it then. :yay:

Ahh, yes, 'Matched' is a great one too! To tell the truth, there's elements incorporated from a bunch of different dystopias, I've almost made it into a scavenger hunt of "Find the references". XD

At the moment I'm seeing how well this does here before I continue it, I've had it up on Deviantart for awhile but I only had a modicum of readers. I think it should do decently well here on Fimfiction, so there's a good chance it shall continue onwards! :pinkiehappy:

Anyway, thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.

604260 Okeyc: Yeah Hunger Games is a very good series:heart:

Yes, yes, I agree "Matched" is an great dystopia book. I can already spy a reference from it; "Department of Public Safety" reminds me of "Department of nutrition" that's in the book "Matched" and such. XD

I hope you continue I hate reading "incomplete" stories that can't go on any further. Yeah deviantart isn't a really good place and such when it comes to wriitng and all. I agree Fimfiction is a lot more suitable and helpful.^^

Your welcome^^ can't wait for more!! heheXD

Woo! I finally caught up! :yay: This is an cool story, I'm intrigued on what's going to happen next.

This reminds me of Half life 2. I really like it, and REALLY hope you continue it.

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