Reawaking
<First person POV>
“What where am I?” I asked myself as I saw only darkness. After about a few moments large blocks were appearing all around me. I wondered around the sea of blocks confused with each and everyone of them. I pulled one of them up, how I even did that I had no idea but I did. It showed me images and feeds of my life. That's interesting lets see costume conversion with a bunch of people random object bought and then a flash. My name is Allen Peirce but I'm known by something else in my new home. Something in my world is a name of evil but here is a name of good. Another box appeared right next to it. I saw a trip down memory lane.
(Flashback)
<Third Person POV>
“Sister how are thou going to fight Discord he just defeated us.” A blue Alicorn asked her older sister. The world around them was weird strange and in a word impossible. The ground wasn't grass but carpet the sky was green clouds made of candy, houses floating up in the air, and dogs and cats dancing together.
Celestia turned to Luna. “I don’t know but we can’t just let this set us back.” Celestia said. As the landscape changed around the trees running away it awoke something.
“Where am I?” The voice caused the two Alicorns to go into defense mode ready for a fight. “Whao whao whao look I don’t.” The thing was metal that much was known. They seen golems before made of it but this thing. It didn’t act, look, or even feel like any Golem they knew. There was no magic coming off it that was the biggest reason. Not only that but the way it moved was far to streamline for any golem.
“Who are you?” Luna asked she had her magic at the ready. The metal being held his hand out at this in panic. He actually had emotion which wasn't anything golems ever had.
“Look no need to try anything rash ok, lets just calm down and introduce ourselves I’ll even go first.” He said, Luna calmed down the metal being gave a sigh of relief. “Hello I’m…” he looked over his form. “Ultron.”
(End Flashback)
<Ultron POV>
Oh yeah now I remember. Ended up in this land called Equestria. Celestia and Luna the Alicorn sisters were the first two I meet in this new world. Turns out they were fighting this deity called Discord, after he decided to conquer the world. They fought him but he defeated them seeing it as a game. Turns out fighting a reality wrapper head on isn't a good idea at all. Though in their defense they were demigods and hadn't face a actual god before.
The next box showed us three with these gems called the elements of harmony. “Oh my you found a Robot? Why can’t I have one!” I reloaded that recording over and over again. For a reality warping deity he had the mind of a child, a spoil brat mostly. Anyway we used the elements to defeat him turning him into stone while he laughed.
The boxes each one of my memories and data came up. I remember me helping the sisters with rebuilding the kingdom as well as planning a few future projects. Magic was something I was fascinated by. After a few days I actually managed to find a way to power myself with it.
However my data base came up with my last memories. Luna was jealous of her sister and, she came to my forge one night. One of the last memory blocks flashed.
(Flashback)
<Third person POV
>
“Luna what's bring you here?” Ultron asked. He was just about finishing his new body. After years spent of researching magic he was going to upgrade his from.
“It is Tia I can’t stand it, the ponies enjoy her sun but not my beautiful night.” Ultron turned to her. His sensors picked up something wrong with her.
“What are you getting at?” He asked. His timer pointed out it should be sunrise. “Aren’t you going to lower the moon?” He asked. Luna turned to him.
“Well just a little longer?”
(End Flashback)
<Ultron POV>
Then she went all possessed called herself Nightmare Moon fought me. My memory banks were damaged with this. However seeing as how my body was mostly destroyed by her rampage I wondered how I survived.
However things turned black once again.
(Canterlot Garden)
<Third Person POV>
With Discord once again put back into stone Celestia wandered the garden for a moment to keep on her thoughts. She stopped as she came across a statue of a old friend. ‘Ultron I’m sorry I didn’t get there in time.’ She closed her eyes with regrets at losing not one but two friends that night. She found the wreckage of his body. She cried again tha night. She had his other body a project he didn’t finish to her knowledge placed right here.
“Hey Tia mind me asking why am I outside and you are crying?” She stopped looking up. Ultron looked down at her confused. She was shocked to see him? It couldn't have been no more then a week at most.
“Ultron?” She asked. Ultron looked over his body despite him not finishing it, seems the nanoarcotech must have fixed the designed based on the files in his mind after it was uploaded.
‘Must have uploaded my mind into the body before it was finished.’ Ultron thought. He got down walking up to her. “Well yeah.” Ultron looked around. “Where are we? What happened to Luna?” Ultron asked.
Celestia was about to answer but hesitated. “What did you last remember?” She asked. Ultron memory banks looked over for a moment.
“Luna calling herself Nightmare Moon while my old body was a wreck why?” Ultron asked with a raised mechanical eyebrow.
Celestia looked down. “Ultron, that was a thousand year ago.”
Ultron blinked. “Well…. That happened.” Ultron said, a thousand years. Well at least it wasn't a million years. 'I wonder what has changed.'
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Goddammit!
5941811 Beat you to it didn't I?
Instafave!
5941819 Nah, it's not that. That picture makes me come off as a complete douchbag! I could atleast crack a smile!
Vary interesting i like this ultron
Hm. I can see the appeal and I am quite interested. However, you really need to check your grammar, a little more pacing won't hurt either.
5941820 Thanks
The grammar is not strong with this description...
Word of advice, Read your stuff out loud to yourself before you hit publish. You'll find that you'll catch your mistakes...
I'm gonna show you something beautiful. Everypony screaming for mercy... You want to protect the world, but you don't want it to change either. You're all puppets... tangled in strings... strings... but now I'm free. There are no strings on me.
^rash
Luna was jeolpus of her sister and she came to my forge.
^I'm guessing the 2nd one is also an error unless it a word you made up
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Yes!!! I love robot theme Displaced stories
Hope his new body have a healing factor
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Hope you don't burn yourself out with all these stories
I would read, but since it's anthro... Just, anthro is one of strangest things to ever come out of this fandom. Yes, even stranger than the anatomically correct clop fics. I will never understand the appeal in having everyone be humanized, yet still be called ponies. It reminds me of how I felt about MLP before I watched MLP...
Great another ultron cool...well I think fun will be there
Okay.... one quote you HAVE to use.
You really really need a Beta Reader.
I want to say that you certainly have potential,
but your grammar is shit. I'm not a grammar nazi (actually I'm just a german), but this is realy painful to read, even for me.
There seem to be missing and swapped words, wrong conjugation and just plain grammatic errors.
If you fix these, hopefully through a proofreader or an editor, I see potential.
Is Nobody going to mention the description?
Supposed to be 'Bearers'
Why
5942933 Why what?
5942221 Trust me I will
At the very least a spell-check
I'll follow for now
5942634 Fixed it up
Wow, interesting, I'll follow. See were it goes.
Can you counted the story I getting really good
You might want to have another look at that preview text. You have Cosplayer spelt as "cross player" ... which doesn't make sense unless the character were quite upset.
5948232 Thanks
TWhen the dust settles the only thing left living in this world.... will be metal
delete that immediately. only amateur writers do that
5948232
Great thanks now I'm picturing Ultron in a god damn dress.
Liked/faved/followed :)
This story has great potential!
Sister how are thou going to fight Discord he just defeated us
Sister how art thou going to fight Discord, he just defeated us
The world around them was weird strange and in a word impossible.
The world around them was weird, strange, and impossible.
he ground wasn't grass but carpet the sky was green clouds
he ground wasn't grass but carpet, the sky was green clouds
Celestia turned to Luna. “I don’t know but we can’t just let this set us back.” Celestia said.
Celestia turned to Luna. “I don’t know but we can’t just let this set us back.”
As the landscape changed around the trees running away it awoke something.
Are Celestia and Luna running away or are the trees running away?
They seen golems before made of it but this thing. It didn’t act, look, or even feel like any Golem they knew.
They've seen Golems before made of it, but this thing, it didn’t act, look, or even feel like any Golem they knew.
Luna calmed down the metal being gave a sigh of relief.
Luna calmed down, the metal being gave a sigh of relief.
They fought him but he defeated them seeing it as a game.
They fought him but he defeated them, seeing it as a game.
Turns out fighting a reality wrapper head on isn't a good idea at all
Turns out fighting a reality warper head on isn't a good idea at all
demigods and hadn't face a actual god before
demigods and hadn't face an actual god before
For a reality warping deity he had the mind of a child
For a reality warping deity he had the mind of a child
I remember me helping the sisters with rebuilding
I remember helping the sisters with rebuilding
However my data base came up with my last memories.
However, my database came up with my last memories.
Luna was jealous of her sister and, she came to my forge one night
Luna was jealous of her sister, and she came to my forge one night
After years spent of researching magic he was going to upgrade his from
After years spent researching magic, he was going to upgrade his from
It is Tia I can’t stand it, the ponies enjoy her sun but not my beautiful night.
It is Tia. I can’t stand it, the ponies enjoy her sun but not my beautiful night.
“What are you getting at?” He asked. His timer pointed out it should be sunrise. “Aren’t you going to lower the moon?” He asked. Luna turned to him.
“What are you getting at?” His timer pointed out it should be sunrise. “Aren’t you going to lower the moon?” Luna turned to him.
Then she went all possessed called herself Nightmare Moon fought me
Then she went all possessed, called herself Nightmare Moon and fought me
However things turned black once again.
Things turned black once again.
However seeing as how my body was mostly destroyed by her rampage I wondered how I survived
Seeing as how my body was mostly destroyed by her rampage, I wondered how I survived
With Discord once again put back into stone Celestia wandered the garden for a moment
With Discord once again put back into stone, Celestia wandered the garden for a moment
She cried again tha night.
She cried again that night.
She had his other body a project he didn’t finish to her knowledge placed right here.
She had his other body, a project he didn’t finish to her knowledge placed right here.
She stopped looking up.
She stopped, looking up.
“Ultron?” She asked. Ultron looked over his body despite him not finishing it
“Ultron?” Ultron looked over his body despite him not finishing it
“Well yeah.” Ultron looked around. “Where are we? What happened to Luna?” Ultron asked.
“Well, yeah.” Ultron looked around. “Where are we? What happened to Luna?”
Celestia was about to answer but hesitated. “What did you last remember?” She asked. Ultron memory banks looked over for a moment.
Celestia was about to answer, but hesitated. “What do you last remember?” Ultron's memory banks looked over for a moment.
“Luna calling herself Nightmare Moon while my old body was a wreck why?
“Luna calling herself Nightmare Moon while my old body was a wreck, why?
Celestia looked down. “Ultron, that was a thousand year ago.”
Celestia looked down. “Ultron, that was a thousand years ago.”
Ultron blinked. “Well…. That happened.” Ultron said, a thousand years. Well at least it wasn't a million years. 'I wonder what has changed.'
Ultron blinked. “Well… That happened.” 'A thousand years. Well at least it wasn't a million years. I wonder what has changed.'