When Ponyville is threatened by a force that can only be stopped by one thing, it's up to six ponies to fix the s**t they started.
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Prince Luna
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heh... Daddy Pie...
I will admit; this is a pretty cool idea. You seemed to keep hold on the source material quite faithfully, but I can't help but feel that H.D.D's visual style doesn't really transfer that well into a textual format. That's just how I feel though. It's a pretty good piece overall. I didn't see any glaring mistakes or anything.
596149 Thank you! I did feel that writing 'Twilight said whilst her face spun in a circle' or 'Fluttershy said doing something questionable with her hoof' might be a bit out of reach for writing
What is this? I don't even...
596195 Have you never seen the .MOV series?
596198 I have but I greatly dislike it. But you earn this.
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What's truly hilarious is that General Mumble's "Crush. Kill. Destroy. Swag" (the song) came on just as I saw this
I think the internet is trying to tell me something
I express a serious hate for the .MOV series so I disliked this.
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596281 That's not cool.
596285 I.. just read it to give it a try.
I liked it.
Just to dislike again.
596292 Your popularity on this site hasn't changed because of. Congratulations.
596304 I Really don't care. I just don't like this.
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"I don't like it. I just don't like it."
That's adorable. How about some constructive criticism, man? Throw the guy a bone.
596341 Okay... I do really sound like a jerk, don't I.
I really don't know what to make of this, it is just ponies repeatedly doing out of line and disturbing things with seriously unnecessarily profane dialogue (Which is just another thing I hate.). Sorry, but I don't know what to make of this.
I don't dislike this, but neither I like it. it's a good piece of work, if you take count of gramatic, orthography, and stuff like that.
still, the .mov series are one of the most bizarre things in the fandom (at least that I know of). And I don't like them as much as for a work for fiction. they are ok if you want to laugh a little, and are not uncomfortable with the grossness of most of the jokes. I would encourage you to work on another kind of story, but that's your choice.
Peace out.
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Well, in the author's defense, that is basically the subject matter he's basing the fic off of. But I do agree with GingerNut up above; HotDiggityDemon's cartoon series is a very visual and slapstick kind of comedy, and it's pretty tough to pull that off in script form. I didn't really enjoy this fic, but it could easily be cleaned up a tad with the help of a pre-reader.
I also giggled at pretty much everything Spike said.
Would not read again, but would remain cautiously optimistic towards future efforts. Keep it up!
Hilarious, dont listen to evereypony else, just hilarious, swag
i need to read his...
596220 How can you hate the .MOV pony series? Its friggen hilarious!
Not perfect but nice.
Its hard to put the comics in text form.
Love PONY.MOV series, looks promising will read later.
Such an awesome writing! I lol'd every second of reading it
Too bad the mane six had to die
Regardless, this work was worth reading. I can clearly visual them. It's so faithful to H.D.D's series
Heres some moustaches
Dude, 90% of the time I can't fault you. But this .MOV cover...well I hate the .MOV videos, so I'm sorry, you're getting this.
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Like I say, everything else is amazing (In particular your Teenage Cutie Mark Crusaders series), but this was a let down. not your finest work.
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I quite enjoyed it. The .MOV series is very FUBAR anyway so...
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My reaction to anything .MOV
STAY OUTTA MY SHED!
also,
CRUSH. KILL. DESTROY. SWAG.
I FUCKING LOVE THE MOTHERCUNTFUCKING .MOV SERIES!
THANK YOU!
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*le clicks Read Later*
I like the .MOV series, BTW.
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Bravo. Good capture of the .MOV feel. I could easily picture this as an episode in the .MOV series.
Keep up the good work
Its funny my friend just gave me an apple.mov shirt today! 29.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lu93p7uvkr1qjqw9ko1_500.png
Beware Sane Ponyville, your about to be hit by a force worse than Discord and the Changelings working together.
In other words, can't wait fo teh next chapter
604884 Sorry, this is a one-shot. There most likely be a next chapter.
For now.
605310 Wow, this is embarresing. It appears I mistook the summary as the ponys from .mov getting sent to normal ponyville
Wow I look like an idiot, sorry for any confusion.
The story still be filling my head o fnck, prehaps I shall read it a second time.
Excellent!
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662895 a fanfic of the .MOV videos.
If people dont like the .mov series why did they come here? All in all, this was amazingly funny and true to the series. Many lols were had. Have a moustache
This is actually like the .mov series except Rarity is there, apple jack isn't in a coma, Fluttershy isn't in the nutehouse, and rainbow dash isn't dead.
but this was funny so i like 
What a fun short read, well worthy of its title!
If you like the .MOV series, that is.
WE NEED MOAR .MOV SPINOFFS.
you make weed sound like a bad thing.....
I have to admit I laughed out loud at this, great job