i liek were this is going

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PS first TROLOL1OL1OL1O1L

is there a flow to your story's like i should read one to read the other one to understand it.

will read later sleep now 2 am

Hmmm...........exploding cupcakes come to mind for some reason. Or cupcake cannon. Or cupcake rocket launcher. Oh god some many pranks to be had.

Oh God...

The picture, it's terrifying.

Lyra's attraction towards Humans is a bit disturbing, then again people say the same thing to me about being attracted to ponies. Anyways great as usal Swiper, this story is going to be fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun.

>>594682594682

They're related but not too chronological. There's references but it's not overwhelming.

>>594834594834

ok thanks i have read the one with nurse red heart and that was the story that made me like your writhing, Because you do clop but with good story, and a good plot in both sense of the meaning keep up the good work and keep putting out good story's your friend Andrew Smith.

okay the picture alone has my attention

http://pinkie.ponychan.net/chan/files/src/133602796360.gif

that is for the pinkie and the brain reference BRAVO!

ugh freakin broken link gotta go and ruin everything

I like it, Swiper! This isn't a style I normally see from you, but I like it. Light-hearted, and awefully funny.

"Oh, you silly-illy not-a-filly"

I laughed a little too hard at that

And as always, I'm here to ruin your day with minor spelling errors! Mwahaha!

"And that's nothing compared to what she said after I was romantically packing his lunch for him"

Pinkie is the Brain!

Ahahaha this is some good clean fun

mmmm... dat pic

You write a really good Pinkie, at least the most well-characterized of the Pinkies I've seen.

Also; the cover art will be forever in my nightmares... those eyes...

LOL Snoopy got the hots for some Pinkie

Is this in continuity with the other human fics you've been doing?

i trust pinkie being around chemicals as long as i ain't danger close.

>>597995597995 "Danger close" in this context meaning "within the same time zone", of course.

very entertaining

>>598232598232

more like in the same reality

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oh god.... Lyra's kinda creepy in this.... I LOVE IT!

It's so funny, I can't wait to see what she tries too pull off

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just gotta add the special ingredient for that explosive flavor

>>598232598232

Fun fact: Equestria only has one time zone. When Celestia raises the sun, it gets raised everywhere.

Mmm, better snacking through alchemy.

An enjoyable story thus far. I do hope you touch on how the humans found their way in Equestria. Sounds like a sudden, unexplained transition, but more explicit information would be nice.

Pinkie is going to invent ballistic cuisine! She's sure to prove her mousy worth by taking over the world with that in her arsenal

I can't shake the feeling that the first words of the next chapter are going to be "Pink. Pink EVERYWHERE."

Oh god, everypony duck. This will be worse than the Smooze.

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she's spotted you Snoopy

RUN!

oh no! the lyra-corn stalks her prey.

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>>600024600024

Thanks for the comments!

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>>600166600166

mine wasn't very useful was it?

>>600221600221

Well, whatever.

What do you want to see in chapter three?

>>600235600235

lyra does have shot to mate with the human

>>600280600280

For a second there, I thought that you said: "Lyra should shoot the human".

Which could be funny.

Assuming that she's hitting him with, I don't know, a sedative filled cream pie that will make him passive enough for her to drag him back to her place.

The thing is... this is not a clopfic. I don't want any mating to end up here, where it all ends up.

>>600285600285

doesn't need fap.

just end the story just before the porn part starts and it'll be all good

>>600309600309

Maybe... I'll think about that

>>600324600324

you know it should end with snoopy in lyra's house. the poor bastard tied to lyra's bed.

he's just freaking out because he has no idea what's going on.

lyra calms him down by explaining whats about to happen.

lyra slides a hoof down snoopy's chest towards his pants.

then end the story right there.

>>600338600338

Well that is... rape... which I'm not really so keen on writing.

>>600349600349

didn't you write that lyra stalks humans that arrive to equestria?

not a stretch to that extreme based on what you wrote.

since you don't want rape, pinkie could be involved to as well. make it semi-consensual i guess.

you know she would throw a threesome party.

I'm fine with more of Lyra being a complete creep and basket case, but how about we leave sex, like, entirely out of this story, both implied and explicitly stated

>>600429600429

What would you like to see next?

I've pretty much up in the air ideas wise now.

Well, that pot's gotta land somewhere. May as well make it somewhere important. The protagonist's gotta get de-pinkified, and I'd like to hear Lyra's explanation as to why she's on the roof. I'm sure we can all guess, but I'd like to hear it... straight from the horse's mouth.

By the by, I think you meant "aerial assault" where you wrote "areal assault".

"up in the air ideas wise". I see what you did there.

>>600480600480

Well that was, unexpected....then again Pinkie is involved so I suppose I shouldn't be surprised by ANYTHING that happens

Can't wait to see what happens next with the rogue pot of goop and the Pinkie twins...

...No idea why I typed that...

Pink. Pink everywhere.

I wouldn't be surprised if that rocket-pot never came down. Congratulations, Pinkie! You're responsible for the first artificial satellite put into Low Equestrian Orbit!

Also, coltfriends you say? Hmm. Wonder what else we don't know about...

Loved how Obsessed with Humans you made Lyra.

This is what I thought of the pot exploding

I think some more adventures with pinkie pie shold commence, and then maybe some quest on how to get back to looking like self, instead of being a male human version of pinky pie maybe? i dunno. this is good, so just decide yourself on this one

>>600491600491 gotta have pinkie pie and (pinkie-snoopy) dating