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Broman


A guy who loves to create stories and has a big imagination. Also wishes to become a famous Actor and Director.

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It's always difficult for a leader to lead his people. He must be responsible and caring and even show what is right from wrong. A leader is a teacher, helping the younger generations learn of the world. But what if there was never a chance given? Ahuizotl was never given that chance.

Follow Ahuizotl's past and witness what he learned to become a leader.

This was an entry for the April 2015,Writeoff Association 'Great Expectations'

I don't own the art work it belongs to ShadOBabe. Check out her art because I think it's awesome.

Special thanks to my Editor Epicken. Without his talent I would not know where this story would go.

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Comments ( 3 )
PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

I wish you'd gotten some help to clean this up before posting it. :/ It's a creative backstory, but the writing has lots of problems still.

5916651 I guess I was a little impatient. I was just so excited to post my first story is all. I'd be willing to give you or anyone else in the group access to my story and to edit the whole thing if you so wish.

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

5916675
I can't at the moment, or I'd offer. You can always check out some of the review groups on Fimfic, tho.

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