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    Vargras's Stories (9)

    • Hiatus
      Redeemed, Luna finds she must spend a year in order to recover. But how will she pass the time?

      36,710 words · 21,626 views · 1,021 likes · 26 dislikes
    • Stuck In The Middle With You
      Luna opens a summer camp, but the campers who sign up certainly aren't who she expects.
      36,913 words · 7,338 views · 526 likes · 16 dislikes
    • Unintended
      Applejack and Twilight discover that there's more to each other than what meets the eye.
      79,130 words · 5,909 views · 551 likes · 19 dislikes
    • What Must Be Done
      Curiosity leads to a recruit asking and learning about the tragic history of the Night Guard.
      5,667 words · 3,534 views · 269 likes · 10 dislikes
    • Forbidden Fruit
      42,052 words · 6,749 views · 411 likes · 18 dislikes
    • Triage
      10,986 words · 3,200 views · 244 likes · 16 dislikes
    • A Midnight Stroll
      10,550 words · 3,188 views · 171 likes · 11 dislikes
    • No Light
      31,622 words · 1,179 views · 115 likes · 8 dislikes
    • Little White Lie
      2,011 words · 990 views · 112 likes · 16 dislikes
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    After a thousand years, Luna finds herself finally freed from the form of Night Mare Moon - the ordeal has left her weakened, though, and she is ordered to spend the next year regaining her strength and getting herself up to speed on what has transpired during her thousand-year absence. Finding ways to spend that time? That... might be troublesome.

    Sequel to 'Hiatus': 'Stuck In The Middle With You' (Slice of Life)

    Featured on Equestria Daily and FiM Fiction! Thanks to everyone who has read, reviewed, and commented!

    First Published
    14th Nov 2011
    Last Modified
    17th Dec 2011

    Comments ( 443 )

    #1 · Chapter 2 · 79w, 2d ago · · ·
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    The July chapter is still a work in progress, and I'm gradually adding more and more to it. By no means is it finished.

    Keep that in mind when reviewing and commenting. :twilightsmile:

    #2 · Chapter 2 · 79w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Promising. I'll keep an eye on this and see where you take it.

    #3 · Chapter 2 · 79w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>29884

    Appreciate it. It's surprisingly difficult to come up with things a Princess could do for an entire year - still, I have some things in mind.

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 79w, 2d ago · · ·
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    ♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

    #5 · Chapter 3 · 79w, 2d ago · · 1 ·
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    lol

    #6 · Chapter 4 · 79w, 1d ago · · ·
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    September chapter is up, though more will be added to it.

    I'm actually very glad that I picked this time line for the fic. I get to cover Luna's physical changes between season 1 and season 2 (the darker coat and changed mane, among other things), as well as where she got the now-famous Royal Canterlot Voice.

    Hope you enjoy my interpretation of things.

    #7 · Chapter 4 · 79w, 1d ago · · ·
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    fantastic

    #8 · Chapter 4 · 79w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Luna is so adorable :heart:

    #9 · Chapter 4 · 79w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>30438

    Well duh, Luna is best pony! :twilightsmile:

    In all seriousness, though, her lack of appearances in the show gives her a lot of potential growth. She makes for a very fun and thought-provoking writing subject, and it's not often that we get to see the relationship play out between her and Celestia.

    #10 · Chapter 4 · 79w, 11h ago · · ·
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    Troll reviews are fun. I'm still above a 4, at least.

    Currently working on the October chapter. It'll either go up later today or tomorrow.

    #11 · Chapter 2 · 79w, 6h ago · · ·
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    so now luna tries to find twilight XD

    #12 · Chapter 5 · 79w, 5h ago · · ·
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    >>31194

    For the most part, yes. I eventually plan on having Luna finding out her mystery mare's identity (we already know it to be Twilight, of course), and from there, the two of them will write back and forth.

    Girl's gotta stay in Canterlot, of course.

    #13 · Chapter 3 · 79w, 3h ago · · ·
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    im liking this fic off to the next chapter

    #14 · Chapter 6 · 78w, 5d ago · · ·
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    The December chapter is nearing completion, and should go up later today. It'll certainly be the biggest chapter to date.

    #15 · Chapter 7 · 78w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Latest chapter is now up. I'm curious to see if anyone will be able to figure out why I chose that specific date for Luna's birthday.

    #16 · Chapter 7 · 78w, 5d ago · · ·
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    YAY for happy Luna!

    #17 · Chapter 7 · 78w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Hmm... My guess?

    December 21, 1968 was the date launch date of Apollo 8, the first manned mission to the moon, carrying  the first humans to leave earth's gravity.

    #18 · Chapter 7 · 78w, 5d ago · · ·
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    shortest day of the year/longest night

    #19 · Chapter 7 · 78w, 5d ago · · ·
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    "Oh my goodness. Luna, your mane... it's full of stars." -2001 references are always welcome.

    #20 · Chapter 7 · 78w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I just have to say that might first thought on reading Chapter 7 was 'Yes Luna. It has a flavor.'

    Other than that I'd guess you picked December 21st as Luna's birthday because it's the shortest day of the year in the northern hemisphere. Or to put it another way, the longest night.

    #21 · Chapter 7 · 78w, 5d ago · · ·
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    It's the Winter Solstice!

    #22 · Chapter 7 · 78w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>32654

    >>32716

    >>32750

    And everyone gets a cookie. Yes, I picked the 21st because it's the winter solstice. I'm aware it switches between the 21st and the 22nd, but December 22nd is my own birthday - to pick that felt slightly... narcissistic of me. So the 21st won out.

    >>32672

    Glad someone picked up on that. Considering how adorkable Luna can be, I just had to fit in a 2001: A Space Odyssey reference somewhere.

    #23 · Chapter 7 · 78w, 5d ago · · ·
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    ♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

    #24 · Chapter 7 · 78w, 4d ago · · ·
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    This is one of the most heartwarming things I have had the pleasure of reading. I look forward to the remainder of it.

    #25 · Chapter 7 · 78w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>33091

    Thank you for the comment. The relationship between Celestia and Luna doesn't get much attention, nor do we ever get to really see what they do in Canterlot on a daily basis. I tried to make up for both of those.

    #26 · Chapter 7 · 78w, 4d ago · · ·
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    January chapter will most likely be delayed until tomorrow. Currently behind on my school work, and then I'm going out with the lady friend.

    Apologies if you were looking forward to a new chapter today. :twilightsheepish:

    #27 · Chapter 8 · 78w, 3d ago · · ·
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    January is now up. Enjoy! :twilightsmile:

    #28 · Chapter 8 · 78w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Ponies why you no comment on this awesome story?:fluttershysad:

    Thumbs up bro!  :rainbowkiss:

    #29 · Chapter 8 · 78w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>34165

    Thanks. It's somewhat rare to get comments and reviews, so either is appreciated. :yay:

    #30 · Chapter 8 · 78w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Love this

    #31 · Chapter 8 · 78w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Woot, 5000 views. Thanks for reading, everyone!

    February chapter is being written as we speak. If you thought Luna's love-letter troubles were over, think again.

    #32 · Chapter 9 · 78w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Another good chapter, a little short and I felt a lack of character in Luna this time around.

    Luna is what makes this story great, so her character is the greatest importance.

    It was good, but not great.

    #33 · Chapter 9 · 78w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>34945

    Had to delete my previous comment because there's no edit option.

    I understand if you felt Luna was a bit lacking in character in this latest chapter. The story is predominantly about her, but I do try and expand it a bit so some other characters get some time (such as Celestia).

    I'll try to compensate over the next few chapters, however. Thanks for the comment.

    #34 · Chapter 9 · 78w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Come on! Post you meanings, this story deserves discussion!

    What was good? What was bad? What was AWESOME?

    #35 · Chapter 9 · 78w, 2d ago · · ·
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    love it

    #36 · Chapter 2 · 78w, 2d ago · · ·
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    you have my attention.  I hope you have somewhere good to go here.

    #37 · Chapter 9 · 78w, 2d ago · · ·
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    March is finished already, but I'll be saving it for tomorrow afternoon. Hope none of you will mind the wait. :trollestia:

    #38 · Chapter 10 · 78w, 1d ago · · ·
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    ♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

    #39 · Chapter 10 · 78w, 1d ago · · ·
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    March is now up. A small disclaimer: I take no credit at all for the second meaning of the prophecy. It was a comment I saw on the PMV "The Stars Will Aid In Her Escape (Cosmic Love)", and was a pretty big mind=blown moment for myself as well. I simply had to fit it in somewhere.

    Definitely check that PMV out, by the way. Amazing stuff.

    #40 · Chapter 10 · 78w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Made it into the featured box! Thanks to everyone who has read, reviewed, and commented thus far. Couldn't have done it without you all! :twilightsmile:

    #41 · Chapter 10 · 78w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Congratulations on being featured! You've definitely earned it. I've enjoyed everything up till now and can't wait to see how the last two months go.

    #42 · Chapter 10 · 78w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Good chapter, better than the last!

    Anyway, I guess it is over now, atleast the main "arc" of the story. Unless you have something up your sleeve...

    I am waiting and hoping for more.

    #43 · Chapter 10 · 78w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>35678

    This lack of an edit button is killing me. The meaning behind the dreams was a big part, but by no means was it the entirety of the story. This is about what Luna does during her recovery period, not about what her dreams mean. Still have three chapters (and the epilogue) to go!

    I'm not trying to go "OMG YOU'RE WRONG", I'm simply saying there's more to the story than just that. Rest assured, I have some things planned.

    #44 · Chapter 5 · 78w, 1d ago · · ·
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    WOOL reference. I freaken' love it.

    #45 · Chapter 10 · 78w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>35785

    Went back and read over chapter 5 again. As much as I love the WOOL video, I never intended for there to be any references to it. I can see why you might think that, though. :twilightsheepish:

    #46 · Chapter 3 · 78w, 1d ago · · ·
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    :twilightsmile::Hello Princess!  I just wanted to give you my report in pony today!

    :trollestia::Thank you Twilight.  Want did you learn?

    :twilightsmile:Well I-

    :twilightoops:

    :trollestia::Twilight?  What's wrong?

    :twilightoops:It just feels like somepony's... watching me...

    :twilightblush:I'm sure it's nothing.

    :trollestia:I'm sure.  *thinking*-I thought those assassins said they couldn't be detected.  Damn, guess I really WILL have to listen to those stupid weather ponies. -_-

    #47 · Chapter 10 · 78w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>35930

    ♫ I always feel like, somepony's watchin' meeeeeee. And I have no privacy, whooooaaa oh-oh! ♪

    Apologies, I had to.

    #48 · Chapter 10 · 78w, 1d ago · · ·
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    An incredibly well written piece. And I do recognise the picture, but I can't seem to find it. Could you link, please?

    #49 · Chapter 10 · 78w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>35939

    Certainly.

    "By Luna's Might", drawn by John Joseco - http://johnjoseco.deviantart.com/art/By-Luna-s-Might-207755868

    The playroom scene in the November chapter is inspired by that same image.

    #50 · Chapter 7 · 78w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Those cookies wouldn't happen to be freshly-baked home-made triple decker nut-crazy vanilla cream cookies, would they? :P :moustache:

    #51 · Chapter 10 · 78w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>35998

    Knowing Pinkie Pie and how random she can be? No idea.

    It shall be the world's greatest mystery. :pinkiehappy:

    #52 · Chapter 10 · 78w, 1d ago · · ·
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    MOAR!!!

    #53 · Chapter 10 · 78w, 22h ago · · ·
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    >>36006

    TOMORROW AFTERNOON! :trollestia:

    #54 · Chapter 10 · 78w, 21h ago · · ·
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    There's just something about checking your email and having over 50 notifications that your story is being tracked.

    Yeah, I know I can turn it off, but why would I want to?

    #55 · Chapter 1 · 78w, 13h ago · · ·
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    Why are there no comments...? :rainbowhuh:

    #56 · Chapter 3 · 78w, 13h ago · · ·
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    Just wanted to point out something. Near the beginning, this was written:

    "Few thought about going, and fewer still even knew it existed."

    How could more people think about going to a place they don't even know exists?

    #57 · Chapter 10 · 78w, 12h ago · · ·
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    >>36288

    Magic. *snort snort*

    I'll fix it. Thanks for the comment.

    #58 · Chapter 10 · 78w, 12h ago · · ·
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    MOARRRR MOAR please TwT!!!:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair:

    #59 · Chapter 1 · 78w, 12h ago · · ·
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    I like this Story. It is quite well written.:yay:

    #60 · Chapter 10 · 78w, 12h ago · · ·
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    Hmm, no offense, but that revelation seemed kind of weak. Okay, so she realized she escaped from Night Mare Moon, so what? It feels like there should be something where she explores what it means for her. It seems lacking. Why would she get so excited when all she's done is realize what is meant by this prophecy that by now has already happened?

    #61 · Chapter 10 · 78w, 11h ago · · ·
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    >>36345

    Hm. I can kinda see what you're saying, but think of it like this - you have a rubik's cube, and for the longest time, you simply can't solve it. No matter how you try to make sense of it, you never make any real progress towards solving it. One day, everything sorta falls into place, and you manage to figure it out. It took you months to figure it out, but you finally did.

    I see it more like Luna being excited simply because she figured it out, not because of the revelation itself.

    #62 · Chapter 10 · 78w, 11h ago · · ·
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    April is done, by the way, and will be published later this afternoon.

    LongshotLink - I went back and looked over the March chapter again, and everything I had written after the revelation definitely leans more towards Luna being excited from simply figuring out the meaning of her dreams, rather than the second meaning of the prophecy. Keep in mind, they had been bothering her for quite some time - since July. She was more or less excited and relieved to have finally figured it out.

    If my analogy from the previous post still confuses you, let me know.

    #63 · Chapter 10 · 78w, 11h ago · · ·
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    *Loves Luna and NM*

    WHY ISN'T THERE A LUNA EMOTICON?:raritycry:::pinkiesad2::fluttercry::raritydespair::applecry::

    #64 · Chapter 10 · 78w, 11h ago · · ·
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    >>36356

    Because muffins. :derpytongue2:

    #65 · Chapter 10 · 78w, 10h ago · · ·
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    Great story ill be watching this one closely :rainbowkiss: also >>36356 it really needs to be made wonder how they'd go about doing that?:derpyderp1:

    #66 · Chapter 11 · 78w, 9h ago · · ·
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    April is now up.

    #67 · Chapter 11 · 78w, 9h ago · · ·
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    Dooooooonuuuuuuuuuts  :pinkiehappy:

    #68 · Chapter 11 · 78w, 9h ago · · ·
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    interesting

    #69 · Chapter 11 · 78w, 9h ago · · ·
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    oh Luna, you so silly:rainbowlaugh:

    #70 · Chapter 11 · 78w, 9h ago · · ·
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    Luna now has a donut addiction.

    #71 · Chapter 11 · 78w, 8h ago · · ·
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    >>36480

    I'd say it's probably just sweets more than anything. She enjoyed s'mores far more than she should have in my other story.

    #72 · Chapter 11 · 78w, 8h ago · · ·
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    Well, I was certanly to fast last time, crying "IT IS OVER" way to fast.

    Objectively speaking, this chapter is about utter nothing, drawing and eating.

    But still, you manage to pull it off, to establish the character Luna in yet another setting, to prove that you have understood that using a character and  forcing character growth is two different things.

    Hats of to you.

    *Removes imaginary hat*

    #73 · Chapter 11 · 78w, 8h ago · · ·
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    >>36535

    Thanks. It's a fine line to walk, and I've often typed something out, only to go back and delete it because it simply wasn't necessary - either I was expanding Luna's character when I shouldn't, or I was doing something else equally silly.

    Still have two chapters (May and June) to go, as well as the epilogue. I might do a bonus chapter for Hearth's Warming Eve/Hearth's Warming, since that's already been announced as the Equestria equivalent of Christmas.

    #74 · Chapter 11 · 78w, 7h ago · · ·
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    On another note, I've already said this on my actual profile, but I'll say it here for some of the other readers: If you're a fan of Applejack, my next fic will most likely be about her. As much as I love writing Luna (and she is my favorite pony in the entire show), poor AJ is in some dire need of some attention.

    #75 · Chapter 11 · 78w, 7h ago · · ·
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    >>36452 hey i was gonna do that

    #76 · Chapter 7 · 78w, 6h ago · · ·
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    Wow Lunas birthday in your story is on Dec 21st just like mine :yay::heart:

    #77 · Chapter 4 · 78w, 6h ago · · ·
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    Ah shit, she learned how to yell.:facehoof:

    #78 · Chapter 5 · 78w, 2h ago · · ·
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    The size of the puzzle is a bit small for what you seem to want to convey:  My mother does a few a year and working alone a 1000-2000 piece is only a couple days of casual work, a super-skilled pair of solvers who are working fairly solidly would easily knock that down to a couple of hours.

    The one serious reason puzzles tend to top out in the low thousands is that that is where you run into issues of space and reach.  Neither of these apply to the princesses.

    I would suggest describing the puzzle as being in the 10,000 piece range, (I've seen a puzzle made of of six historic maps of the Earth, each of which is a ~10,000 piece puzzle on its own).

    #79 · Chapter 11 · 78w, 1h ago · · ·
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    >>36825

    A fair point, but I never intended for it to be some giant puzzle that they had been working on for weeks or months - just something to spend part of day on. With both of them working in tandem, and thanks to their magical abilities, I wouldn't be surprised if they could solve a puzzle made up of thousands of pieces in just a few moments.

    #80 · Chapter 11 · 78w, 1h ago · · ·
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    And by 'a few moments', I'd say at least half an hour but no more than two or three hours.

    They're good, but not that good. :trollestia:

    #81 · Chapter 11 · 78w, 1h ago · · ·
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    :pinkiecrazy:

    Needs more doughnuts! more doughnuts! SO MUCH DOUGHNUTS!

    #82 · Chapter 11 · 78w, 12m ago · · ·
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    The May chapter might end up being delayed. I've got a report I need to work on tomorrow (because college is fun like that), but I'll do my best to get it posted.

    #83 · Chapter 1 · 77w, 6d ago · · ·
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    5 stars for giving Luna raspberries!

    #84 · Chapter 11 · 77w, 6d ago · · ·
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    OM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM!

    (We need Luna icons:fluttershysad:)

    #85 · Chapter 11 · 77w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I'm not on the front page at all anymore, yet I still have 45 readers?

    What is this I don't even. :applejackconfused:

    #86 · Chapter 1 · 77w, 6d ago · · ·
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    where the heck is may?

    #87 · Chapter 11 · 77w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>37144

    Patience. I tend to upload chapters once a day, most often in the afternoon. The May chapter might be delayed until tomorrow due to a clinical report I need to fill out for one of my classes.

    #88 · Chapter 11 · 77w, 6d ago · · ·
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    DONNUTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :trollestia: luna belch :D DONNUTSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!

    #89 · Chapter 11 · 77w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I have a queston Vargras.... WHERE THE HECK IS MAY?!? Sorry it's just that I love this story sooo much 5 star rating I give it a ten if I can, In otherwords... MOAR!

    #90 · Chapter 11 · 77w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>37180

    Read my previous comment.

    #91 · Chapter 11 · 77w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>37181 Thx It's just I so love this story!

    #92 · Chapter 11 · 77w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Update on the May chapter: Canterlot now has a swimming pool. I'll say nothing more about it. :trollestia:

    #93 · Chapter 12 · 77w, 6d ago · · ·
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    May is up. Back to the clinical report!

    Confound these ECGs, they drive me to rage. :twilightangry2:

    #94 · Chapter 12 · 77w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Hmm.... so with May, that means Luna's out of home arrest.  But with that said, where does that leave the story?:rainbowhuh:

    #95 · Chapter 12 · 77w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>37275

    June is technically the end, since that will be a full year. There's an epilogue as well.

    I'll also likely write a bonus chapter covering Hearth's Warming Eve/Hearth's Warming.

    #96 · Chapter 12 · 77w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Also, June will NOT be up tomorrow. I plan on making it longer than normal, since it's more or less the last 'true' chapter.

    #97 · Chapter 12 · 77w, 6d ago · · ·
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    ♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

    #98 · Chapter 12 · 77w, 6d ago · · ·
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    :pinkiehappy:

    #99 · Chapter 12 · 77w, 6d ago · · ·
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    mee gusta.

    I sort of skimmed the first chapter a while back, and it didn't really reel me in. Eventually, I saw this story pop up again, and figured "ah what the hay it can't be too bad".

    I was wrong. It isn't just "not too bad", it's fantastic! You've done an amazing job with this fic, and I'm looking forward to see how this is wrapped up.

    #100 · Chapter 12 · 77w, 6d ago · · ·
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    :pinkiehappy:

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