Bonus Chapter: November 1st , Post-Night Mare Night
Another Night Mare Night had come and gone, and Celestia had already retired to her quarters. The Princess peacefully slept within her bed, her soft breathing the only sound that could be heard within the chamber. Slowly, the door to her room opened, a beam of light piercing the darkness - another being, also of royalty, quietly made her way in. Floating just behind her was a tube of whipped cream, glowing a faint blue as it glided through the air. Luna made her way to her sister's bedside, gazing upon her sleeping sibling with a look of disdain and mischief. She had spent months planning that night out to ensure everything would go perfectly, and her sister's 'helpful tips' had nearly ruined it - it had only been salvaged thanks to the efforts of Twilight Sparkle and her friends.
"So, dear sister, you wish to have some fun at my expense?" The young Princess grinned in the darkness, and just her smile seemed to give off a light of its own, making for a truly eerie sight. Slowly and carefully, she pulled the cap off the tube, pouring the whipped cream onto the side of one of her sleeping sister's hooves. She really did have to marvel at how ingenious this prank would be - it may have been childish, but it was so very worth it. With the full contents of the tube gone, Luna carefully set it upon the floor and moved onto the second stage of her plan. A feather flew up from the floor and over to Celestia's face, hovering just inches above her. Carefully and ever so slowly, it began to brush against the elder sister's cheek. Her face twitched slightly at first, but failed to elicit the reaction Luna was hoping for. Soon, however, it began to happen - Celestia's foreleg twitched, and she gradually brought the selected hoof up to itch at her cheek, spreading much of the whipped cream all over her face.
Luna's own snickers of delight were interrupted as her sister began to wake up. She warily eyed her sibling and quietly made her escape, giggling constantly as she ran through the halls of the castle. Celestia half-opened her eyes, and for the longest time, she stared at the whipped cream-covered hoof in confusion. It was only then that she noticed a rather odd feeling upon her face, and the Princess quickly put two-and-two together.
"LUUUUUUUUNAAAAAAAA!"
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Also, the actual bonus chapter I had in mind (Hearth's Warming Eve/Hearth's Warming) will be about the same length as a normal chapter, possibly longer.
In the mean time, have fun witnessing Luna's revenge.
So there will be more chapters? QUIT TOYING WITH MY EMOTIONS!!!!
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Hah, apologies. I had originally intended for there to be only one bonus chapter, and that was only after I heard about the Hearth's Warming Eve episode they have planned.
After another reader asked for a chapter covering Luna's confrontation with Celestia after the events of 'Luna Eclipsed', I decided to briefly write it out.
And then Luna was banished to the moon... again.
The End.
2 trolls in a family not a good combo
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Nonsense! It's all in good fun anyways.
41572 THE FUN HAS BEN DOUBLED!!!! no but really they need to come up with a luna emotion :( 41583 great work
Thank you really much! I had quite a good laugh on your extra bonus chapter
MOOMMMMYYYYY!!!! *sniff sniff* I-IT'S OOOOVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERR!!!!!!!!!!!
Makes you wonder how a country ruled by enormous trolls is even able to exist, let alone peacefully. :P
Thoroughly enjoyed this fic, it was wonderful.
Good one, I am looking forward to the next (and last) bonus chapter.
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Thank you for the praise so far, but you're not done yet.
Eat whipped cream.
Mess with the moon, you get the whipped cream.
There will be more? Yay.
I think you may have a bit of a plot hole in that she needed Fluttershy's help to STOP speaking in TRCV.
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Potentially. Though Celestia told her to ignore anything anypony in Ponyville told her, I may have neglected to include the Royal Canterlot Voice with that.
Why can't other stories be like this one?
Cute, Funny, Heartwarming, Entertaining and "Innocent"
That's what MLP is about, and this how fics should be..
Vargas- gaining a follower.
LOVE is born in the full moon light. High! Oh High, In the sky so bright.
This story brought me many hours of enjoyment and I must confess to feeling sadness at it's conclusion. That being said I hope to read more from you in the near future as you have certainly earned a place in my heart.
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Thank you. All of my stories are, at the very most, friendshipping for that very reason - if the show is this innocent and sweet, I see little reason to push it beyond what it already is.
I'm aware that some people like to write shipfics (and I'm actually following one myself, though that's mostly because I simply find it funny), but to each their own.
My only question is...
WHERE IS THE LUNA REACTION FACES!!!
But really, I'm a huge fan of Luna, and this fic really has helped that (now my head canon is Luna can draw and has some music experience)
*hits the watch button*
can't wait to read more
Never expected my story to get this big. Over 36k views? Dayum.
Appreciate everyone reading. Check out some of my other stories if you ever get curious.
Fannon Luna is the Best Luna. And here is FINE example of our Favorite Princess.
Came up with something earlier that certainly isn't original, but I want to try it nonetheless.
I dug out my tablet and I'm going to be attempting to draw the same pictures that Luna has drawn within the story. From there, I'll add those images directly into the story itself. It might take a bit, as I'm not exactly the best artist (but damnit, I'm determined).
Ta da! January now has a drawing! It didn't take me that long to do, and I know it's very rough-looking. Within the story itself, though, this is Luna's first 'true' drawing - don't expect anything spectacular out of her yet.
Curious to see what others think.
Started work early on the Hearth's Warming Eve/Hearth's Warming chapter. Already over 2k words and I've barely started.
you made me turn into a luna fan dam you <3
epic story so far hope to read more
Awww Luna has grown to be as much of a troll as her big sis
Submitted to EQD and it got accepted.
Brace yourselves, comments are coming.
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I'm aware of it. I probably should have gone into further detail about it, but I always felt that they moved to Canterlot while still young. Probably just artistic liberty, and I completely forgot to mention it. Durr.
Hmm... I liked this story enough to read it all the way through, but I felt that Luna felt a little... muted? I'm not sure if this interpretation of Luna is one I can really get behind. It's really hard for me to narrow down my criticism into specifics though...
this story is: nice. not great, certainly not bad, just nice. 4/5!
I wish I knew what this was missing, for me, at least, to turn this into a 5-star. I liked your writing style, I thought that Luna acted realistically, the pacing was maybe a little slow, but I just can't figure out what's missing.
Oh well!
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It happens. Though I appreciate knowing exactly what folks don't like so I can (hopefully!) fix it in the future, sometimes things just seem 'off' and we don't really know why.
Regardless, I appreciate the comment.
This is the first time I dared to read a FiM fanfiction and I really really really really loved each and every word you wrote!
0w0 Thanks for writing this story!
I had a laugh attack when I read the epilogue for Luna's first Nightmare Night and wondered why nopony has called Celestia "Trollestia" yet XD
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Thanks. Wasn't sure how well received that would be. I'm gradually getting better, but it's a slow process.
ROOOOOOOBOT HHOOOOOUUUUSSSE!!!!
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Honestly, I've seen both forms, and I've never had anyone raise an issue between whether it was "Nightmare Moon/Nightmare Night" or "Night Mare Moon/Night Mare Night". Indeed, the wiki actually lists both variations - they're largely interchangeable, and both are 'correct'.
Now THAT was a good read. I can't wait for any other chapters you add to it! Luna is best pony in my opinion, and this fic made me feel good, just all in all. Especially the "Luna is an awesome artist" bit. Vargras, You have gained my eternal respect.
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Appreciate it. And for the Anon poster, have a screenshot of the wiki.
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Sorry, but I'm not changing every instance of its use because of a single anonymous poster. Like it or not, it's still 'correct'.
The Great and Powerful Trix.... I mean Sock... should not have to bow to the annons. he should phase the Annons completely out of existence for their heresy!
The fact that Lord Sock would phase the annons out of existence no matter what happened is immaterial.
OMG This is such a good story make more!!!!!! .............
Derpy for President!!!!!!!!
This is brilliant xD
Absolutely one of my favourite Luna stories yet =D
One of the things that annoy me with other stories is often that the general populace is irrationally afraid of Luna; I love that you in this story have just enough of that fear for it to be believable, but not too much.
I also love the "slice of life" form this story has; I have always been a fan of such stories, and it's a really nice change of pace after reading stuff such as Fallout:Equestria.
Yeah, you heard me right; I just complimented you side-by-side of the legendary Fo:E. xD
The only thing bad about it is that it's over -.-
Maybe you could write more à la this? That would be lovely =D
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I do plan on eventually writing more. Luna is my favorite out of every pony within MLP, so I certainly won't be abandoning her. I'm currently working on an Applejack-centric fic, but once that's over, I'll likely return to our favorite Princess of the Night.
And thanks for the compliment. Seriously, comparing me to Fallout: Equestria? Awesome.
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A sequel then? Awesome. So far, you have been the best author of Luna I have read xD
I will be plowing through your gallery this weekend too. I just need to finish one of my finals tomorrow.
Yay, astrophysics -.-
ya know, i wanna read this on the bus to skool, but to download ALL chapters is quite a pain... I wish there was an option to download the entire story
So many comments agghhh.
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Yes, a sequel. I have another bonus chapter in the works for this story, but I need to see the Hearth's Warming Eve episode first. And by all means, for those of you that have read this and liked it, I have other stories too! My current work hasn't quite taken off like I was hoping it would, so if you don't mind some Applejack & Twilight, adventure fics, or friendshipping, go give it a read.
Hi again, twas really funny, I liked it a lot ! Thank you
Just marathoned my way through and loved it. Great interaction between the sisters, you had me cracking up more than once. Enjoy your gold stars!
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Thanks. Glad you liked it.