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Scootaloo's Dream Come True

Scootaloo Always Wanted To Be With RainBow Dash, But What Happen's if it Came True For The Little Pegasis

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BronyPonyMan

BronyPonyMan #1 · Apr 26th, 2015 · · ·

not bad, really. but if feels incomplete to me.

Speven Dillberg

Speven Dillberg #2 · Apr 27th, 2015 · · ·

Why the hell are you capitalising every single word!? It makes it painful to read.

RaylanKrios

RaylanKrios #3 · Apr 27th, 2015 · · ·

You need to change the title before I'll read this.

Scootaloo's dreams come true or Scootaloo's dream comes true.

If your title and description have errors, it makes me not want to read the story.

rillegas08

rillegas08 #4 · Apr 27th, 2015 · · ·

Although there are a few places where I felt a proper transition between characters' perspectives was missed, this was very well written! I'd like to know what the CMC were talking about, and how Rainbow deals with what's going on in the future, but I'm the kind of writer that likes to leave open ends, so it's not as big a deal for me as it might be for others. The characters are very close to how they're depicted in the show as well, which is something I like about fanfictions and adaptations. 9/10