I am an aspring fantasy author and a big fan of MLP:FIM
Apple Jack wakes up to an odd feeling. Something is wrong. The air feels thick with malice. She tries to figure it out when the magical map calls her and pony pals for another friendship mission. The mission that map has in mind is very personal for Apple Jack. Something precious to her was stolen. She has to get them back. By any means necessary.
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This is very interesting so far! Great work
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Thank you. :) I appreciate your feedback. I plan on adding chapters 3 and 4 this weekend. :)
5902285 Awesome, I shall be looking forward to them then ^^
Love this story!
This is a very good story so far, and I look forward to reading more of it.
Unfortunately, I have a bit a quibble with it, and that is how you write AJ's name: Apple Jack, like it was two separate words. Which it isn't.
It's one word: Applejack, and the "Apple" and "jack" should not separated.
As I said, it's just a bit of quibble on my part, but, being the staunch Applejack fan that I am, seeing her name being wrongly written bugs me as much as how Apple Bloom's is sometimes written as one word; Applebloom; rather than two; Apple Bloom; as it properly should be.
Anyway, that's pretty much my only gripe, and, as I said, your story is really, really good.
Keep up the rad work, okay?
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Thank you for telling me that. I'll make sure to correct it going forward. :-)
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Thank you! :-)
5915283 You're quite welcome, hon. Just doin' my bit to help my fellow authors.
