If you want to you can skip to Freedom and still have a general jist of what is going down.
Rainbow Dash, Applejack and the others find themselves traveling to a far away land to find a stolen statue. When Applejack and Rainbow Dash are trapped in a cavern and need to find a way out the others tell them there is another way out. Feelings will surface, but not be told. Advice will be asked for and given and then in a very long story will they find out they are made for each other? Join me and lets find out together.
Chapters (18)
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I'm glad you think so.
I really cannot wait to hear more, I was reading this a bit ago and just hoped to see more soon and welp.. an update =D
I am really glad to see everypony enjoying the story
,. Seeing it make me want to write more.
Thank you all for the kind words.
Yay, she finally asks!
It's really well written and I love how descriptive you are, but I feel a bit confused with what happened in the cave and what's happening now. Rainbow asked Applejack to date her, and Applejack said maybe, I understand that. However, now Rainbow is realizing she has a crush on Applejack? I feel like if you changed the scenes in the cave so the two talk about what they look for, and more into thier love life and family life it would work a bit better. Take the development a bit slower as thw two learn more about each other on a personal level rather than a bff's and competitors level. Although that's just my opinion and you don't have to take it if you don't want to
Where's the next chapter? I can't wait!
I do the pillow thing too!
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