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My lord can make you eat your own FINGERS!

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Telekinesis and pyrokinesis are both nice things to get out of a deal, no doubt about it. Due to some fine print finagling, though, we're now stuck here in Equestria, courtesy of 'the Merchant'. And by 'we' I mean Silver the Hedgehog and Blaze the Cat, or at least their lookalikes. No, I did not stutter. That sidewalk swindler of a 'wish granter' must think he's got a sense of humor, turning us both into characters right out of our favorite video games and then throwing us straight into the land of LITERAL sunshine and rainbows. We can't count on him to get us back, but since I can now bend spoons with my mind, that must mean the Emeralds should have the power to help us out... Right?

Well, there’s only one way to find out. If only the Royal Sisters weren't making this so much harder... Seriously, a thousand years in ice and they still can't forgive us for accidentally leveling their castle and afterwards causing a worldwide disaster? No biggie. That place was in dire need of renovation anyway; no plumbing, no fridge...

So, to put it short, I have Royal Guards after me (standard bit characters; useless), Mane 6 after me (tougher, like Agents from the Matrix out of a bag of skittles), Royal Sisters after me (more RAGEQUIT than Legend of Zelda’s water temple), and a sophisticated, irritable anti-pegasister loner turned Royal Cat with a fondness of slapping me in the face whenever I say something stupid (which means quite often).

Knowing my luck, next there'll be mind-boggling time-travel and epic boss fights with tons of QTE's along the way, all wrapped up in some big multiverse-evil-domination plot, with ground zero centered on this glorified gumball machine of a world that defies all logic. We've got our work cut out for us, especially since we seem to be the ones cast as the antagonists straight out of the ice. That didn't stop Sonic before, though, and it definitely didn't stop Shadow, and since I'm now the coolest (and only) hedgehog on the block, there's no way I'm letting it stop me!

Here we come, Equestria! You better have some brakes, because we sure don't!


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Just for clarity, I accept crossovers. Also, here is Google Docs version.

A little exercise in English before exams and an attempt to break my writer's block. It's not my first story, but first written in English. Also, I will probably continue even after exams - Sonic fandom is in a serious need of good fanfiction. Readers of my polish fanfics won't be pleased... Anyway, here are my proofreaders: Setokaiva, 0_0 and roker12. You guys are great, you made this fanfic at least 50% cooler. :twilightsmile:

I chosed my favorite characters as heroes. Blaze will be a lot like an original version from Sonic Rush, except more aggressive. Silver is going to be silly and reckless (his powers are modeled after those from Sonic Generations, so yeah, he is much more powerful than in Sonic 2006). Picture made be I, me and myself, but only after entire day of looking for good poses in Google and comibining them in Inkscape - I'm terrible at graphics.

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Comments ( 54 )

Awesome start.

Dawwkward Duo not the scariest of names. How the heck did they get a name like that?

I like this duo their interesting characters. Can't wait to see what chaos they stir up.

I also look forward to seeing how they affect and change the series.

When in the MLP timeline does this story start?

How DARE you remind me of that god awful Sonic 2006 game!?!

I hate this story now!

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Oh, screw it I'll give it ONE read, just so I'm not entirely a douchebag to you. It's not your fault anyways. I shouldn't be mad at you.

IT'S SEGA WHO I DIRECT MY WRATH AT! CURSE THEM! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO THE CHARACTER THAT INTRODUCED ME TO VIDEO GAMES!? DAMN YOU SEGA DAMN YOU TO HELL!

(continues ranting as other commenters look on in confusion and awkwardness)

5996114 ...I'm not going to defend this game. Yeah, it was awful. A shame too, with time travel plot and typical for Sonic good soundtrack it had a potential to become a great game. Unfortunately they made Elise a part of this... Ugh...
Okay, I will cut it here. I need to take my Sonic Generations medicine.

5995510 Season 2, after Discord's imprisonment. Of course it doesn't mean much - with Chaos (and Sol) Emeralds around Silver and Blaze will soon show a middle finger to physics and time itself.

5996144 No, no! Excuse me! Time travel rarely works out well in a video game unless that game SPECIFICALLY involves a universe centered around it. Sonic does not! The only time time travel has worked out in a Sonic game was Sonic CD and even then it wasn't really so much as time travel as just simply changing the look of the stage.

Elise is fucking boring. I mean, you can sort of defend her by saying she's bland because she had the Flames of Disaster in her and she couldn't show emotion less she release the Flames, I can agree on that to a point, but still - HOW FUCKING TIMES DOES SHE GET KIDNAPPED!? Seriously, she gets kidnapped, and then rescues, and literally she's kidnapped like, five minutes later, AND THE GUARDS DO ABSOLUTELY FUCK ALL TO HELP OUT!?!

You may think I'm joking when I say this bit, but I really honest-to-God tore out some of my hair over this game...but it didn't hurt me as much as this game did...can you give me a hug? I know I'm a dude but...I really need one and I don't care if you're a guy. Just so long as no one starts spreading gay rumors we'll be fine.

I SEE YOU, PERSON READING THIS ON THEIR COMPUTER SCREEN! DON'T YOU FRIGGIN' DARE!!!

5996144 Also, don't forget Sonic Unleashed. That was awesome too. Why did you change directions after that decent Sonic game, SEGA? Why!?! The HEDGEHOG Engine was doing absolutely brilliant for you there and then you had to ruin your streak!

Also, there are some things I wish to point out, before an avalanche of dislikes bury me and this story:
1. Silver and Blaze aren't real villains nor are they seen as ones just because of some accident. Yes, there was some... catastrophe involved... but overall this duo just doesn't care much for Equestria. Which is caused by point 2.
2. They just want to punch the Merchant. Hard. In the face. Nothing else matters much for them.

5996165 That's very good point. Poor Twilight is going to go nut's when she find's they can time travel. Really hope they get involved in the events of the It's About Time episode.

Maybe later on you could have ancient painting of Equestria's founders uncovered and have Blaze and Silver in the painting with them. The Princesses and the Mane Six would probably have some interesting reactions to that.

Oh you said you were accepting idea's for this story. I actually have quite a few if you're interested in them. Hope you like them.

Since it sound's like you're going have them hunting for the Emeralds. Why not have one or some them hidden in ancient temples. You could use this as way for them to meet Daring Do and Ahuizotl.

One of my favorite parts of stories like the Displaced stories, is seeing what kind of relationship the character or character's in this case have with MLP character we know and love. Seeing who become's friend and who becomes foe. Whether the MLP character in question is a villain like Discord and Chrysalis. A hero like one of the mane six. Another character like Trixie or Derpy. It will be interesting seeing what MLP characters they meet, and seeing how they will feel, and think about the duo.

Anyway here's some ideas for how the duo could either befriend or make enemies out of Daring Do or Ahuizotl.

Daring and Ahuizotl could both become enemies to the duo. With both of them also after the emerald Blaze and Silver are hunting. Daring wanting to keep it out of the wrong hands/hoof. While Ahuizotl wants to use for his own evil plans.

Another path you take is just one of them turns out to be a enemy. While the other turns out to be a unexpected ally.

I figure you could either have them befriend Daring Do who at first wants to stop them from getting the emerald. The duo could save her life to her shock. While at first wary of them she end's up befriending them. This is kind of cliche i know. But i'm having trouble thinking of different way they could become friends with Daring Do.

Now as for they could instead befriend Ahuizotl. He could actually turn out to be a huge fan of the duo.

From what i can guess from the summary. Blaze and Silver caused a worldwide disaster, and have as result become some of the most infamous villains in Equestrian history. Probably in some of the other countries history as well since it was a worldwide disaster. Hmm hope we find out how their regarded by the other species that live in the world.

Anyway in this universe the legends of the duo's exploits could what have inspired Ahuizotl to become a villain. After all even feared villains probably had heroes growing up. He could be after the Emeralds because he know's their connected to the duo. He could hope that retrieving and presenting them to the duo will impress them.

Actually this gives me another idea. Diamond Tiara could become a huge fan of Blaze. While i haven't really played Sonic Rush, and it's only been one chapter so we don't know much about this version of Blaze. From what i've read i can't help but think Diamond Tiara would probably look up to Blaze after she meet's her. Sort of like how Scootaloo look's up to Dash.

Finally i have a idea regarding the Dazzlings from Rainbow Rocks. What if Blaze and Silver met a trio of orphaned sisters a while after they came to Equestria. The sirens could have been the around the CMC age's or younger. Anyway the duo could have ended up adopting and raising the Dazzlings. Now i know Silver and Blaze aren't a couple. Heck from what i've read. If you are planning on pairing them together. It won't happen till much later in the story. If it happens at all. Anyway the Dazzlings could have come to see Silver and Blaze as their parents. Even if Blaze and Silver weren't together. Maybe the Dazzlings could have tried to get them together though. The duo's defeat and imprisonment could have been the reason the sisters spread chaos in Equestria. They we're planning on avenging their defeat and freeing them.

That's all the idea's i have for now. What do you think? Any you like?

5996584 I actually like very much one of those ideas! Which one? I won't tell, I need to surprise my readers.:pinkiehappy: (that is, if I'll use that idea).

5996873 Glad to hear you like one of my idea's. :pinkiehappy: Hope you are able and like some of my idea's enough to use them in you're story. But it's cool if in the end you decide not to use any of them.

This story may have just started. But something tell's me i'm going to really enjoy it.

"characters right out of our favorite video games"
I didn't know Sonic '06 had made anyone's list of favorite games. :V

5999369 Silver and Blaze weren't only in the-game-that-we-shall-not-mention.

Sonic 06 did have good music and story. Gameplay sucks though horribly. Anyway keep'er-go'in cause its goooood!!

the Dawwkward Duo DAWWKWARD DUO?!
CEEEEELEEEEESTIAAAAAAWHEN WE GET OUT OF HERE THERE WILL BE A RECKONING FOR THIS DISGRACE, CELESTIA! I WILL RIP OFF YOUR HORN AND SHOVE IT AS DEEP INTO YOUR FLANK AS HUMANLY AND INHUMANLY POSSIBLE! YOUR FATE WILL GIVE A BIRTH TO A COMPLETELY NEW TYPE OF HORROR MOVIES AND POP CULTURE REFERENCES! AND ALL OF THEM WILL BE STARTING WITH A PINEAPPLE OR CHEESE GRATER!

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Another awesome chapter.

I'm curious to find out what they meant when they said summon something nasty from the void.

Look's like Blaze and Silver we're able to escape because of some help. But question is who helped them, and why.

I'm looking forward to seeing what things from Sonic will show up in this story.

Any chance of Angel Island showing up?

Also any chance of Chaos showing up? Would be interesting to see how the citizens of Equestria take and handle Perfect Chaos.

douse .....she 'like' sliver !?...nope!

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And really important ones, so you read this at your own risk.
There are several things that Merchant teleported to this Equestria beside S&B. Among them are at least two important enemies from the games and Master Emerald. Soon heroes will encounter their first boss.

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It's on my list of favourites to force people to play for the same reason that people hate it. Because

It's no use

Fighting the troll game.

Also, sonic rivals was nearly as bad and had both of them

Silver and Blaze my two favorite game characters in a displaced story.
NNNNNNNNNNNNNIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy:

Here comes the third chapter. I hope you like it despite my... let's call it "inferior knowledge of english".

This seems like a good story, haven't read it yet. I really hope it doesn't give that random "I quit this story" plot that confuses my ass off. (I think it might have this due to the random 30 dislikes. But oh well, I won't let that bother me.)

6549020 Random 30 dislikes mostly because Sonic and Displaced. Both groups of fics have a very bad reputation.

Another awesome chapter. Really happy to see this story is still alive. I hope you don't let any haters get to you. I personally think this is a great story.

I thought my hope was gone for LoHAV, but you brought it back. Keep on writing, you magnificent bastard.

Silver and blaze are too fast for simple ponies! Physics be damned!

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Oh yea... try searching "Sonic" on Fanfiction.net...... I still have nightmares.

Where did you get the picture? I tried looking but couldn't find it.

6556338 There are actually some good Sonic fanfics (after all there's over 35 k of them on fanfiction.net), though they are buried under rubbish - my favourite author is The Pen VS The Sword. But yeah, this section of fanfiction is nightmare.

6562252 It's all in description - Silver and Blaze's poses are based on those I found with the help of uncle Google, however I drew them myself in Incscape. The background is, if I'm not mistaken, from the show.

6572839 It looks awesome, but I was hoping for a gallery on deviantart or something.

6575325 Sorry to disappoint you, I made the cover image only because I wanted it to be unique. I don't have skills when it comes to graphics. It took me several hours to made it, while a real artist would do so in two hours max and much better.

WHEN WE GET OUT OF HERE THERE WILL BE A RECKONING FOR THIS DISGRACE, CELESTIA! I WILL RIP OFF YOUR HORN AND SHOVE IT AS DEEP INTO YOUR FLANK AS HUMANLY AND INHUMANLY POSSIBLE! YOUR FATE WILL GIVE A BIRTH TO A COMPLETELY NEW TYPE OF HORROR MOVIES AND POP CULTURE REFERENCES! AND ALL OF THEM WILL BE STARTING WITH A PINEAPPLE OR CHEESE GRATER!

i wanna join i wanna join ill mutate her to be in pain forever scar her forever and.. hmm 1 year without a soul.. yeah seems about right

6065368 may spoilers fingers go CHOP CHOP CHOP!

BECAUSE SCREW LOGIC

It's nice to see a displaced story with my two favorite sonic characters.:pinkiehappy:

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