• Member Since 14th Apr, 2015
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AmpUpHeart


A 16-year-old, a lover of music, and a vivid daydreamer. The thoughts turn to art, and then words.

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She was right.
It wasn't over.
The real threat still remains.
And now they've made an experiment that could give them an edge.
If it wasn't for her free will.
This is a much larger web than any of us could have imagined.
The fate of Equestria rests on our shoulders.
One wrong move?
Equestria could fall.

Note: This is a sequel to Five Nights at Freddy's: Body vs Mind. Do NOT dislike this story just because it's another FNAF/MLP crossover.

Chapters (23)
Comments ( 34 )

I just realized that I should have put, "My racing talent has little to do with flight." Oh well. People make mistakes, right?:facehoof:

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Thanks for letting me know. I'm rather new to Fimfiction and am still trying to get my bearings.

Yay, new chapter! While I feel the chapter was short and didn't explain much, it's probably a neccesary evil so that 99 Streax can do more next chapter. Overall, a good setup chapter.

-ThisGuyReviewsPonies

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I know. This chapter felt short to me, too, but I felt that it was necessary for laying the groundwork for the story. Unlike FNAF: BvM, I didn't pre-write this story, so I'm trying to get everything down in a decent manner. I'm not the best with the mane 6 interacting with self-made characters, so this chapter was also a way to help me get my (Faz)bearings in terms of the direction I want this story to go.

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Yeah, I see what you mean. I could never come up with any lasting situation with my OCs and the Mane 6 in one spot. My brain just locks up.

Also, good pun.

A robotic alicorn, you say? This is gonna be interesting...

Yeah, it is about time you made a Scott pony.

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You can probably guess who it is.
I'm too lazy to look up what Scott looks like (plus I don't want to be a stalker) so I basically went by name.

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I can understand. I don't wanna be a stalker, either. Also, let me add this is another of those "neccesary evil" chapters to explain what happens later. I have nothing against them, it's just that it gets my hopes up. I mean, keep making them as intros and stuff, that's fine. I'm against the filler stuff. Overall, a good intro chapter.

-TGRP

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I know. This was supposed to be an action chapter but I developed Infra and Spark into characters. To add the action into this chapter would have felt unnatural to me. But don't worry! I'm already working on Night 2!

P.S. Did you figure out the Scott pony?

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Seeing as you made it into an intro chapter, I see why you took out the action. I mean, imagine the ponies introducing themselves, only to have a wall bust down behind them with Cerberus next to them! That would be over-the-top weird.

~P.S.~ I did figure out the Scott pony. It's Spark Chopper.

I'm not sure what to do for night 4. I'm going to sailing camp again, so hopefully it'll refresh my mind.

I'm starting to get back on my feet in terms of this story. I'm everywhere right now, especially since I'm putting pressure on myself to finish 'Clarity,' another one of my stories. However, after taking a small break from writing this, I'm starting up again. I'm hoping to publish Day 5 either today or tomorrow.

I also noticed how far I was straying from the original FNAF game. Considering that I want to make a story for FNAF 4, I'm trying to re involve the elements of the game in this story.

6032679 you are doing great so far. Hooves up and favorite! :pinkiehappy:

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Glad that you're enjoying it!:twilightsmile:

For anyone disliking because of the fact that this is another FNAF/MLP crossover: Did you not see the warning in the description!?

For those disliking because it's straying far from the initial game story: I'm sorry. It ended up spiraling like this before I knew it.

For those who disliked because of other reasons: Let me know. No one dislikes without a reason. Just please be polite about it. I got some nasty comments on FNAF:BVM when I asked this question.

Playing dark and disturbing music...:pinkiecrazy:

(Hits play, 'Tiptoe, through the window, by the window, that is where I'll be:trollestia:

Hits pause)

Different kind of disturbing.:applejackunsure:

I'll ask again: if you have a suggestion as to how I can improve the story, could you please let me know? And I'll ignore any comments that simply say "It's another boring FNAF crossover." Plus, I'll probably delete any rude comments, primarily if they contain swearing.

And in case you're wondering: No. I'm not shipping Tripwire with Twilight.

6131911 I'm now reading this.
And I have to say, despite not having read the first one, I wasn't confused about what was happening. I like it.

6251304 I honestly don't understand why there are so many dislikes. It's a good story.

I was laughing. GG, pinkie, GG.

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At least there are people like you who do enjoy it. I'm glad that you liked the story. If you want more background information on Hazard and a more elaborate backstory, I'd read the first fanfic. And I'm currently working on my next one. Out of curiosity, how did you find my story?

5894764 FazBearing. I love you.

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I love you, too. (Figuratively. Not, you know, the other kind)

Where's Bonnie?:applecry:

6944270 Are you talking about in the prank? Cause that's Amplitude

Looks like the haters didn't read the description. Oh well. Don't let it get you down.

6983524 I edited it a long time ago. But yeah

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