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Desolate


In the pursuit for peace, violence is necessary.

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Something that bothered me greatly about this chapter is just how much of a pushover Jason is. I don't mind him beeing forgiving and regretting his actions, but when Celestia and Luna accused him of commiting a crime even though Big Mac Held the majority blame in this situation. Celestia and Luna understood this situation was about an innocent beeing attacked, the problem beeing that the misunderstanding was on Big Mac for attacking the more innocent Jason, and that Celestia and Luna failed to realize this makes them only look like speciesist cunts and not like rational rulers.

What should have happend is that after Jason explains that he was attacked, Celestia and Luna should have apologized for Big Macs aggression and understan the misunderstanding. Then they could have offered Jason working at the farm so that he could have somewhere to live and a way to make bits and Jason could have showen his forgivness to Big Mac by taking the job offer and taking over his chores while he is hospitalized. That way Jason remains kind and foregiving and Celestia and Luna would be more understaning rulers.

So in conclusion: my problem is that Celestia and Luna are acting high and mighty and looking down upon Jason, even though Jason was the more innocent one in this situation. I don't mind Jason helping out on the farm out of kindness, but i do mind him doing it for community service
So Fuck Celestia and Luna in this chapter

But overall i am interested in the this story and will continue reading :twilightsheepish:

jurassic measures

Did you mistake it with drastic?
Never heard of jurassic measures before.

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Drastic measures = Doing something pretty severe to punish him
Jurassic measures = Jason gets eaten by a T-rex

I prefer the latter as a method of instilling fear :pinkiecrazy:

well that escalated really fast :pinkiegasp:

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You have no clue how hard I facepalmed.

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Think of it this way, you're a peaceful happy animal, and something that is covered in in black smoke has your little sister and her friends on its sholder, not only do you not know what it is, but you've encountered your fair share of monsters from the forest you live by, and you don't want to take a chance on your sibling's life.

And about the high and mighty statement, I tried to make them seem fair in their judgement, with good reason Jason pummeled Big Mac, now that he can't work on the farm they might as well have the person that injured their best worker help out so that the family doesn't have to hire another worker on the farm and then they potentially get to become friends with Jason because she knows the nature of ponies, I was trying to make that more transparent.

It felt like a hangover, it probably was considering I couldn’t remember the day before... come to think about it, I couldn’t remember the last week.

If he can't remember it, then how did he know it had been a week? It's impossible to give an accurate timeframe to any blank-spot in your memories, because no matter how long it was in reality the blank-spot itself would always be just that, blank. No memories means no frame of reference, which in turn means that -aside from changes to your physical form and surroundings- you would have no clues telling you if it's been an hour, a day, or even a whole month.

I was all black, like a blanket of darkness wrapped around my entire body, swirling like smoke, the darkness covered everything except for my eyes, which were a disturbing milky white. My grin made me look terrifying, my teeth were stark white and my canines were longer, giving me a maniacal look.

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Then a jackhammer pummeled the back of my skull, knocking me unconscious.

Goddamnit, Rainbow Dash!

She was eyeing the tattoo on my left arm, it was the tattoo that covered my upper right arm,

...So which is it, left or right?

“INCOMI-”

My world went green, and faded.

...Green?

I know the feeling of pure rage directed at someone. But I'm so looking forward to seeing Jason rip that changling bitch a new one. My ex wife nearly ruined me and she took everything from me. So I hope adon makes the changling queen suffer.

Gasoline? You sure about that, I prefer lighter fluid myself.

Also I like where this is going.

HALO REFRENCE !!!

Anyone remember Pumpkin Scissors? Yeah he's that guy , just wait until he catches up.

TÖTEN SIE!
TÖTEN SIE!
TÖTEN SIE!

I want more chapters NOW!!!!:flutterrage:

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