FiM and Pkmn, the best of two worlds, I'll read this later on, for sure.

The ending made this story. I probably should have seen it coming, but it was still hilarious.

rofl.

GUMMY used VACANT LOOK.

Pretty awesome but I demand a gym fight and an everfree forest trek.

Very clever story, just another day for Pinkie

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Business as usual for Pinkie.

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Actually, forget my last post, I felt that this needed to be here instead, as it popped into my mind while reading this.

>>585497585497

Oh boy, i agree with that one, we want another chapter, please!

Yeah. This was really hard to write. I was trying to avoid any actual descriptions of battles because I couldn't get them to mesh with the big reveal. Anyway it's just a first draft. I may come back and revamp it when I can figure out how to get everything to mesh better.

>>585617585617

Yep. Those Pinkie the pokemon trainer comics were my inspiration.

LOLOLOLOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

A few errors here and there, but not anything that deterred from how hilarious this fic was. Keep up the good work!

Crossovers are very hard to do.

mixing Pinkie and Pokemon, and its all in her head, was genius. Mad props to you, sir.

I loved this, a lot, the ending may have been the best part but it was the storytelling that led up to it that kept my interest, I hope that you enjoyed writing this because I loved reading it.

This is beautiful.

You deserve a feature box for this.

You're all too kind. It's just a one-off short. Nothing special. That being said, BOW DOWN BEFORE ME! YOUR GODDESS DEMANDS ADULATION! Your humble servant. -Shiloh

WTF is this?! I wake up and Shiloh's already written AND posted a new story without me? *Le Sulk* -Tawny

Ha. Comedy.

I laughed so hard I cried

Bravo good sir

My lolz, they reach critical mass!

Gummy used Vacant Look!

It's a One-Hit KO!

Wow! this was really funny, but I  have one question...

"Are you a Girl? Or Boy?

I've got eyes problems, so shut up."

-Professor Oakly of a random spin-off parody of Pokemon.

>>586121586121

We're actually 2 girls sharing an account. seems fitting since we write together.

>>586097586097

Vacant Look > Horn Drill.

You single handed  managed to tear through what could have been 7 chapters in one chapter

i don't know weather to congratulate you or flick you on the nose and say "no bad writer bad writer"

then again the surprise ending would not go over so well after being so invested

>>586193586193

I'm not sure whether to be offended or proud. It was never supposed to be an epic story. Just a short gag fic.

Nice one my friend, pretty funny to see that this is all something Pinkie Pie is imaging.

>>586227586227 You could have dragged this out and then pulled a M. Night Shyamalan on us that would have been fucking hilarious

Feeling pinkie Keen!

The professor took a long drink from her mug before responding. “I have good news. We finally got rid of the crazy little thing. And she took the alligator with her.”

>>586253586253

Damn you beat me to it. XD

I thought that this sucked until I got to the end. Then I realized it was Pinkie's imagination. I just thought you were being lazy.

>>586378586378

Yeah. That was the tightrope I had to walk throughout the story. It was really tough. I couldn't figure out how to incorporate any actual battles without blowing the surprise so I had to just gloss over them.

I'm gonna call it now; this looks like it's going to make the feature box. And it is definitely the funniest "PonyMon" fic I've read to date. And I read a lot.

          ~Signed, InfiniteBrony

>>586557586557

From your lips to the mod's ears.

>>586160586160 Vacant Look equals Stare/Leer!

Dafuq in a good way.

I cannot comprehend this fanfiction for the awesomeness has blown my mind out of my head, onto the wall to which it slid down onto the floor and then proceeded to walk off and out the front door.

So yes... I enjoyed it.

-sees title-

POKEMON FUCK YEAH

>>586065586065 Oh my gosh! When Chuck Norris finished his thumbs up, my entire screen flashed white. I'm kinda scared now

>>585617585617>>586253586253 Source please?

Also, this fic is awesome. Guess Shy got the better treatment from the three.

>>587219587219 I agree we need a source

Oh and btw amazing fic keep it up

Ok. I've decided. If this makes the featured box, I'll submit it to EQD.

>>587397587397 It's right under the fifth featured. Might achieve your goal a lot faster then you'd think.

No No No No. WHY!? It's too good for me to say anything bad!

Eighty-odd likes for such a story? That's ridiculous. It needs MOAR!

This was hilarious. Truly, just hilarious. A couple minor errors, but they didn't detract from it. I love this to pieces. Take this thumb and these moustaches.

5/5

Dang it! Someone beat me to writing a pseudo-crossover with Don Quixote! Ah well, good story anyhow. Nice work.

Too much? Anyway, you have made what I believe to be one of the funniest fics on this site. You managed to put what some people would've stretched out into a massive story into a little one-shot, still keeping it wonderfully written. Hats off to you.

>>588057588057

That. Is. The. BEST feedback I have ever gotten. you spoke right to me there. I was so worried that it was stretched too thin and that it really was better suited to being a longer fic but I was just a hack with no inspiration. (I'm neurotic about this kind of thing) And then you come along and actually praise me for keeping it as what I originally wanted it to be. A short one-off gag fic. Thank you so much. You have no idea what this did to my mood.

Wow. 66 favorites. 46 comments. 579 views. And talk of making the featured box. All under 24 hours of when I sat down to start writing this. You guys sure do know how to make someone feel awesome.

This is awesome. Everyone else pretty much said what I might have said...if I knew how to put Chuck Norris approving. Oh well..this was GREAT!

of all the best things, this is the. best. Possible. THING!!!

Aaaaaand it's in the feature box. I totally called it.

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          ~Signed, InfiniteBrony

>>589040589040

Um. You sure? I don't see it there. Wait. Are you from the future? Do you know something we don't? Are you a time-pony?

>>589070589070 No! My secret has been revealed! I'm actually a 300 year old cyber-pony form the post-apocalyptic future, sent back in time to learn about the magic of friendship!

But seriously, click the feature dot. It's there.

            ~Signed, InfiniteBrony

>>587219587219

Done and done!

Gym Leader Apple Jack, Professor Sparkle, Nurse Shy. Who is Pinkie's Rival?

Ha Ha yeah Right

But I don't wanna tread in tall filthy grass

The Great Trixie... got better things to do

Luna said something about double the fun

>>587397587397

I thought this was absolutely hilarious.  I was laughing so hard my mom asked me if I was ok.  But I think EQD has a 2500 word minimum.

Gratz on the feature. An entertaining story while it lasted.

I liked the part where she got her Pokemon, hurr.

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Anyone else still have the original games. Plus 199(yes I know random number) if you do and another 350 Nerd Points if you have an Original GameBoy. I love the games and anime.. This was amazing. I thumbed and favorited before reading.

I mihght need thisahem FLAME SHIELD UUUUUUUUP: Pokemon is best RPG Franchise EVAR!!! Sorry FF fans.

This is awesome. Have a star and a thumb.

Awesome cross-over. More Pinkie is stuck in her crazy delusions. Haha

Where can I find those comics?

you my good sir, are a genius... i applaud you

also...

TROLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOOOOOOOOOOO

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! Too much WTF!!!

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A wild PIDGEY appeared!

Go! GUMMY!

GUMMY used VACANT LOOK!

Wild PIDGEY looks into GUMMY's eyes!

Wild PIDGEY is paralyzed with confusion!

Wild PIDGEY is questioning it's own exsistance!

Wild PIDGEY spontaneously cumbusted!

Wild PIDGEY fainted!

GUMMY gained 61 exp.!

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!

This is SO. AWESOME!!!

If the story had gone on much longer past Applejack's part I think I would have gotten fed up at your skipping over things.  But as is, I think it's pretty good, and the reveal caught me completely off guard.

>>586227586227 he has a slight point, but I understand where you're coming from. I for one as an English teacher feel that you sold yourself a little short. But it was good none-the-less. Well played.

Ponimon, Ponified monsters, Ponimon are the Champions!

HOW DARE YOU SKIP THE EVERFREE FOREST! That was the most memorable pert of my childhood. When i first walked my blocky ash into the forest and pissed my pants when a Weedle popped out of nowhere.

You won the internet

Havn't read yet but just the name made my brain explode m

Playing lets pretend is so fun!

>>589485589485 Yeah! Pokemon is BEST RPG EVER!!! I'm a Nintendo fanboy! But duh, they are awesome.

This, I didn't read it yet, but just dropping off. I think I made Pokemon crossover first. Just it isn't a morph crossover, it's one where the two series interact. But, I'm sure this is better.

Creepy...I started playing ponymon just yesterday. Will read this later.

cant wait for more

Absolutely hilarious!

What? I just don't even know... Great though

i have one thing to say "rofl"

Nurse Shy is best nurse.

Well done, Shukumei.

You have made a good story. However, there could be some changes though.

Yesh

That is all

>>590122590122

I also thought of Mother/Earthbound but that is niether a franchise, something with three games is not a franchise its a series, nor is it as good as Pokemon.

Thought progression:

Professor Sparkle.

All Pokémon professors are named after trees.

Twilight lives in a tree.

Said treehouse resembles an oak tree.

Symbolism FTW.

Yay! Very funny, loved the way you wrote Pinkie, especially the fourth wall break, plus that ending had me lol. Grats on your feature box, you earned it! Please keep writing, I'll keep reading.

So Pinkie has a big imagination. And here I thought I would read something that was new. <.<

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take all of Scootaloo's love

TAKE IT!!

along with my thumb and star

Well done good sir. I chuckled throughout the entire thing, and I tend to not even crack a smile when reading stories.

KS Sidenote: Pinkie would remind me of Rin if she wasn't so Emi-like in her energy levels.

Dat ending. LOVED IT!

FUCKING AWESOME!

>>586566586566 Oblivion player? becuase "your lips to his ears" is a shivering isle line... just wanted to point that out...

>>589070589070 no he aint but i know "the doctor" quite well... I SHALL RETURN!!! *hops into T.A.R.D.I.S and escapes*

now the story...

sounds like something pinkie would imagine..

Whats next...flutershy in skyrim? rainbow in ace combat? (that fighter jet game) twilight in harry potter? who knows nowadays...

>>586253586253 I defy your logic of gummy gummy would not respond to hyper beam by using a club he would use chomp (last I checked that was a move)

>>590823590823

I actually am an oblivion player. And modder. But I wasn't making a reference.

Wow. Featured story. I couldn't have done it without you guys. Thank you, every one of you who up-voted. You're all rockstars and I love you! You all deserve the praise every bit as much as I do. I look forward to writing more for this site.

Beautifully well done. I loved it. Almost actually had me laughing very loudly in the middle of class. Almost.

That was pretty hilarious is what I'm trying to say. The ending made it excellent. Makes you wonder just what kind of drugs Pinkie is on. And I want some of them.

>>590959590959

"Hyper beam - hyper = beam, beam a structural element -> structure, wood structure, bat made of wood.

There you go." -NightJack from ponibooru.org

>>591294591294 again chomp

Cool Story Love Pokemon And My Little Pony :D

>>590502590502

I must correct you not ALL of them are named after trees.

>>590966590966

Me Gusta Mucho.

>>591408591408

All major professors (the ones who give you your first Pokémon), are named after trees. Oak, Elm, Birch, Rowan, and Juniper are all types of trees.

Another thought: Fluttershy wants to be a tree, therefore her life's goal is to become a Pokémon professor. Rainbow's first Pokémon was recieved from Fluttershy; she picked a Squirtle.

>>591490591490

So do you know to Whom i was referring to then?