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    ChaoticHarmony's Stories (41)

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      Colgate's cutie mark is of an hourglass, but what exacly does this mean?

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    • The Party is Over
      What happens when Pinkie runs out of party?
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    • Keepsake Apples
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    Rainbow Dash has finally achieved her dream of joining with the Wonderbolts.  But will this turn out to be a dream come true, or a curse?  Follow her as she journeys across Cloudsdale and Ponyville in a story of riches, dreams, depression, but above all, love.

    Special thanks to masonalcat for the editing help!

    First Published
    15th May 2012
    Last Modified
    5th Jan 2013

    Comments ( 156 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 57w, 9h ago · · ·
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    I'm intrigued. Will the ship be DashFire or SoarinDash?

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 57w, 9h ago · · ·
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    You will just have to wait to see won't you?  :pinkiecrazy:  I will just see where this story takes me.

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 57w, 9h ago · · ·
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    :rainbowhuh: Ow.

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 57w, 9h ago · · ·
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    Tell us more about your OCs. I don't know anything about them, and thus I don't really have any empathy as to what might happen to them. Also; it isn't a good idea to suddenly change tenses in the same chapter, let alone the same story. It ruins the flow and rhythm that you're trying to cultivate.

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 57w, 9h ago · · ·
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    Backround is coming.  Brace yourselves :raritywink:

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 57w, 9h ago · · ·
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    >>596621

    Then I'll wait with reading this until somepony can tell me, 'cuz if it's SoarinDash, I'm staying the hell away.

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 57w, 9h ago · · ·
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    What kind of mess has Dash gotten herself into this time? :rainbowderp:

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 57w, 9h ago · · ·
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    A big one, I can assure you.  Though you'll have to wait until thursday for the next chapter.


    More than likely anyway

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 57w, 4h ago · · ·
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    Yay! Another good story to follow! :twilightsmile:

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 57w, 4h ago · · ·
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    Stalkers.... all of you!  :pinkiehappy:

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 57w, 4h ago · · ·
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    I really like your writing style, but you should try to get rid of the sudden time changes and repeatings as they're just confusing...

    Despite that: Let's get ready for some serious shipping! :rainbowlaugh:

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 57w, 3h ago · · ·
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    Yes, let the shipping COMMENCE!  :rainbowkiss:

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 57w, 45m ago · · ·
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    I'm scared to read this story. 3 paragraphs in and Dash already broke her wing? :rainbowderp:

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 57w, 31m ago · · ·
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    It wont be THAT bad.  I promise!

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 56w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Please be SoarinDash, please be SoarinDash, please be SoarinDash!

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 56w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Please be SoarinDash, please be SoarinDash, please be SoarinDash!

    #17 · Chapter 1 · 56w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>600671 I'm with you! Please be SoarinDash! :rainbowkiss:

    Super excited for the next chapter! :moustache:

    #18 · Chapter 1 · 56w, 6d ago · · ·
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    It will be released tomorrow!  Hopefully.....   I have 2 major projects due Friday.  So yeah, no idea if I'll have the time to do it after all.  I hope I will though, I'd hate to leave FiMFiction hangin :rainbowdetermined2:

    #19 · Chapter 2 · 56w, 5d ago · · ·
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    :ajbemused:

    #20 · Chapter 2 · 56w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Err..... that doesn't tell me much. >>607346

    #21 · Chapter 2 · 56w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Hmm... this story is turning out to be pretty good. Do you need an editor right now? I'd gladly do this for you, if you want.

    #22 · Chapter 2 · 56w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>607444  Not really,  I have one.  He is just busy with my OTHER story that I'm writing.  It's on my page too, if ya wanna check it out <Shameless Advertising>  :rainbowlaugh:

    #23 · Chapter 2 · 56w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I like how tihs is turning out, let's hope Rainbow Dash's wing can be fixed. :twilightsmile:

    #24 · Chapter 2 · 56w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>607645  I should HOPE that it's turning out well.... I spent a good 2 hours writing this chapter!  I already have ideas for my third chapter.  It's gonna be good!  :rainbowkiss:

    #25 · Chapter 2 · 56w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>607380 I'm not sure I like the direction where this fic is headed.

    #26 · Chapter 2 · 56w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Poor Cuts, having his heart broken and such. :fluttercry:

    But then that may leave open other possibilities.

    Orrrrrr... she may return the love? :pinkiegasp:

    I shall force myslef to wait and see. :raritydespair:

    #27 · Chapter 3 · 56w, 3d ago · · ·
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    KEEP GOING! :moustache:

    #28 · Chapter 3 · 56w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>613895  Allright allright!  I'm releasing another chapter tomorrow!

    #29 · Chapter 3 · 56w, 3d ago · · ·
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    For everyone trippin bout dash, she's kind of Nitro she'll be fine

    #30 · Chapter 3 · 56w, 3d ago · · ·
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    love the third chapter, can't wait for the next one!

    #31 · Chapter 3 · 56w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I love it too! Favorited, liked, and...commented XD

    AND I READ ALL OF YOUR OTHER STORIES SO YOU NEED TO UPDATE XD And I loved those too!

    Keep up the good work! :raritywink:

    #32 · Chapter 3 · 56w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>603945 Same here. OTP!! :rainbowkiss:

    #33 · Chapter 3 · 56w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>614683  Well, I updated them ALL yesterday....  :ajsleepy:  I'll try to get some more updates out this weekend.  This story gets the first update today though.

    #34 · Chapter 3 · 56w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>614865  /)(\

    #35 · Chapter 3 · 56w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Good news to all those who are waiting eagerly!  Chapter 4 is on it's way right now as we speak! :rainbowdetermined2:

    #36 · Chapter 3 · 56w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Nice to seem some added depths to Soarin. :rainbowdetermined2:

    One question though is Soarin in love with Spitfire, Rainbow Dash, or neither one? :applejackconfused:

    #37 · Chapter 4 · 56w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>616747  Well, just wait and see!  Mwhahahahaha!  I LOVE writing this thing so much!

    #38 · Chapter 4 · 56w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Um this chapter seemed to be rushed, but this is still great. :applejackconfused:

    #39 · Chapter 4 · 56w, 3d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowkiss:

    #40 · Chapter 4 · 56w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Waaaahoooooooooooo!!!!!!!:rainbowkiss:

    #41 · Chapter 5 · 55w, 5d ago · · ·
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    So there is a hint of Spitfire+Soarin. :heart:

    Also I fear that Rainbow's position on the team could be in danger from her friend. :unsuresweetie:

    #42 · Chapter 6 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Good story so far. WANT MOAR!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

    #43 · Chapter 6 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    :moustache:

    #44 · Chapter 6 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Really everypony?  No comments at how I'm throwing in another love interest?  Hm......I sometimes wonder about you all  :trixieshiftright:

    #45 · Chapter 6 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Hey! You're throwing in another love interest!

    I've forgotten what Cloud Chaser looks like. She's an actual background pony, right?

    Anyway. Jolly good show. :moustache:

    #46 · Chapter 6 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #48 · Chapter 6 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Uh oh, why do I get the feeling that something will happen to Rainbow Dash's suit? :pinkiecrazy:

    #49 · Chapter 7 · 54w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Some party that turned out to be. :rainbowdetermined2:

    #50 · Chapter 7 · 54w, 4d ago · · ·
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    lol

    shits goin down

    oh wait...it already went down

    ITS GOING DOWN AGAIN

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