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    • The 7th Element
      A young high school musician is transported to Equestria by Celestia. RD x OC

      84,773 words · 4,197 views · 388 likes · 34 dislikes
    • A New Dawn on The Horizon
      10 years after the events of The 7th Element, Blazing Dawn must face a foe that has resurfaced.
      58,042 words · 1,751 views · 156 likes · 11 dislikes
    • The Return of the 7th Element
      /2nd Installment of the 7th Element series/ Dan returns to Equestria after 15 years on Earth.
      38,766 words · 3,156 views · 256 likes · 28 dislikes
    • The Way It Should Have Been
      200 Follower reward story in which it is detailed what would have happened if Ace remained in Equestria.
      6,000 words · 874 views · 47 likes · 8 dislikes
    • The Creed
      3,896 words · 571 views · 40 likes · 7 dislikes
    • Rainbow's Dilemma
      2,979 words · 407 views · 19 likes · 2 dislikes
    • One Last Chance
      10,765 words · 266 views · 22 likes · 3 dislikes

    /2nd Installment of the 7th Element series/

    After 15 years on Earth, and making a name for himself as a successful actor and musician, Dan returns to Equestria, only to find that much has changed and the family he started could very well be shattered by the immense time that he was gone.

    First Published
    15th May 2012
    Last Modified
    15th May 2013

    Comments ( 250 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    FIRST hehe

    real comment later

    edit needs some epic intro music

    Note used for epic picture intro too!!! :D

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    THERE IT IS.

    You're welcome, Dan, for getting this up for ya! Lucky Poultron talked. :P

    Anyways, I'll read this later. :3

    >>594348 OH U

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>594356 yes i see so many 7th element story i dont bother to ask which one anymore

    and there always about love

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    There appears to be much trouble in Equestria.

    I'm interested in seeing more. :)

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>594356 oh hey, you read this story too. :D

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #7 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 22h ago · · ·
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    I saw this first on Fanfic.net. Already his chapter has us on the edge of our seats.Still, we'll have to wait and see what happens...

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 22h ago · · ·
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    :yay::yay::yay::yay:

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 21h ago · · ·
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    Chainsaws...... wat..... now lets wait to see how the ponies deal with global warming after years of pollution.....

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 11h ago · · ·
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    ...

    beautiful

    EDIT: Oh, forgot to make this stupid joke because my heart melted.

    Portal 5? Valve can't count to 3!

    ...Ok, stupidity over.

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 52w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Blue "Ace" Bass is fricken back yes! WB to Equestria, if you can make me cry this time I will be very happy.

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 52w, 6d ago · · ·
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    heeee'sss baaaccckkk

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 52w, 6d ago · · ·
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    wwwwwwooooooooooooo dan is back!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 52w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>600058 i already cried when he started praying and when he realized he forgot about them.......

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 51w, 5d ago · · ·
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    WHEATLY!?!?!?!? I THOUGHT HE WAS DRIFTING THROUGH SPACE!?!?!?!? WHAT THE F****** HELL!?!?!?

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 51w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I need to stop posting comments before I'm done reading the story....

    #17 · Chapter 1 · 51w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>642406

    Haha, I was just about to say...

    You're cool, bro. :twilightsmile:

    #18 · Chapter 1 · 51w, 4d ago · · ·
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    When are you gonna continue the story?

    #19 · Chapter 1 · 51w, 3d ago · · ·
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    moar

    #20 · Chapter 1 · 51w, 3d ago · · ·
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    You need to continue this right niow!!!  PLS!!!:fluttershysad::fluttershysad::fluttershysad:   :applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry:

    #21 · Chapter 2 · 51w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Man, this was so bittersweet! I love it! I love this story so much and I can't wait for the next chapter! :pinkiehappy:

    #22 · Chapter 2 · 51w, 2d ago · · ·
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    YES!!! I KNEW YOU WOULD BE BACK!!!! yay:yay:

    #23 · Chapter 2 · 51w, 2d ago · · ·
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    ... OH Shit...

    #24 · Chapter 2 · 51w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Ah.... I forgot Dan had his own Wheatly running everything.... So, when does the A.I. wind up in Equestria as a robot pony, and start freaking the hell out?

    ...Yeah, made a prediction there. Felt like a good moment to.

    #25 · Chapter 2 · 51w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I kept a straight face the entire time. Exept for Wheatley. Thats when I started to laugh.

    #26 · Chapter 2 · 51w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Oh gawd time didnt freeze this time?!

    #27 · Chapter 2 · 51w, 1d ago · · ·
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    My eyes were welling up from the happiness and surprise Dan must have been feeling. I'd be happy to see someone I loved after 15 years too. :fluttercry: SO BEAUTIFUL

    #28 · Chapter 2 · 51w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Yay! Another chapter!:pinkiehappy:

    Mmm, will any OC's make a return I wonder?

    #29 · Chapter 2 · 51w, 1d ago · · ·
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    OOh no frozen time this time. interesting I assume he could stay forever on that basis :P

    #30 · Chapter 2 · 51w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I'm smiling like an idiot now... :rainbowkiss:

    #31 · Chapter 2 · 51w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Why the HELL isn't the earth frozen again?

    #32 · Chapter 2 · 51w, 4h ago · · ·
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    Lol, you so stupid wheatly, you Artificial Idiot. What? It's true. In the game they made him to be an idiot so technicaly he is an Artificial Idiot.

    #33 · Chapter 2 · 50w, 5d ago · · ·
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    update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    #34 · Chapter 2 · 50w, 3d ago · · ·
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    well, there goes the cando. He has his own crazy AI that is as snide and sarcastic as the original.

    #35 · Chapter 2 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    WHAT! WHY IS THE EARTH STILL GOING THROUGH TIME WHILE HE IS IN EQUESTRIA?:rainbowhuh: so much feel. great story but please finish faster.:rainbowderp::rainbowdetermined2::pinkiehappy:

    #36 · Chapter 2 · 50w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>690735 That just means that he won't have to go back......I think.

    I was kind of expecting this to happen with him and his family but it's still sad.  Love it so far, just like the first.

    #37 · Chapter 2 · 50w, 14h ago · · ·
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    Whoo! Always love a good sequel.

    #38 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 2d ago · · ·
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    BUCK IM GOING INSANE OVER THIS FAN FIC i cant take it WRITE MOAR NAO

    i loved the original i bawled my eyes out im hoping to do the same on this one

    #39 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 2d ago · · ·
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    BUENO :D

    #40 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #41 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Ok I just realized that this was up a few minutes ago but was set up in May man I've got to start paying more attention and dang going to have to read this later!

    #42 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 1d ago · · ·
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    No frozen in time guess that means that he can stay there this time! :D

    #43 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 1h ago · · ·
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    coming back here every day waiting for the next chapter LAWL!!!

    #44 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Moar plox!:pinkiehappy:

    #45 · Chapter 2 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I

    LOVE

    YOUR

    STORIES!

    I mean it

    I LOVE THEM!!!!!

    and the bittersweetness of it all makes it even better for some reason

    #46 · Chapter 2 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #47 · Chapter 1 · 46w, 4h ago · · ·
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    Dan should have sang this song

    Bitter Mourning Taste

    but the song he sang when he got back is good to

    #48 · Chapter 2 · 46w, 46m ago · · ·
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    excuse my language but....


    FUCKIN YES BITCHES!!!!!

    #49 · Chapter 2 · 45w, 6d ago · · ·
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    before he was outside Rainbow's house, before she saw him, he should have started singing either this song or this song

    #50 · Chapter 2 · 45w, 4d ago · · ·
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    i just whant to know, are you ganna finish "A New Dawn on the Horizon" before continuing this? or are you ganna go back and forth with the updates?

    #51 · Chapter 2 · 45w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>869695

    I am finishing ANDoTH now.

    #52 · Chapter 2 · 45w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>870075 how many more chapters? Cuz I am on the part right now where Nightmare is in the streets and BD and Dash are in the library with the others. I thought to myself when I was reading "the suspense is killed cuz '7th element' sequel has Dash, Lunar, and Blaze being ok"

    #53 · Chapter 2 · 45w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Why doesn't Lunar just teleport himself and Dan somewhere he knows Blaze won't walk in on him? I guess Lunar isn't THAT quick on the spot then...

    #54 · Chapter 2 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>884807 Because then there wouldn't be a plot.

    #55 · Chapter 2 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>906918 there still would be a plot, why would Celestia bring him back to Equestria if it's not in danger? which i dont see why she didn't when the Nightmare incident happened, but thats beside the point and it's the author's choice. So, oh mighty author, Thunderhawk, when will we find out what said plot driving force is? Celestia said it was in danger again

    #56 · Chapter 2 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>908885

    How about patience, Dralen? :twilightsheepish:

    Remember, there are prologues for ANDoTH that are currently being written. The last one has Dan in it! :pinkiegasp: OMG, right? It explains EVERYTHING.

    I've seen you commenting a LOT on the same thing lately. So remember, Dralen:

    All ponies commend patience, although few are willing to practice it. :scootangel:

    #57 · Chapter 2 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>909341 i was simply trying to make a point to the person i was replying to. And with me patience is very hard to come by because i like to do things fast and with my sort of philosophy: I'll live while I'm alive and sleep when I'm dead (WOOHOOOO BON JOVI!!!!), i stay up to do things and when i get done i am bored out of my mind :pinkiecrazy: so i dont have that much patience.

    and sorry for so many comments, the first half are just songs that he could have sung/ played the rest well... yah... it gets you a bigger comment count... so... keep writing gold!

    #58 · Chapter 2 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>909341

    Do you mean epilouge? Cause I'm pretty sure a prolouge comes before the first chapter, either that or I missed some blog post or my brain is already failing me...

    #59 · Chapter 2 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>945942

    Yeah, my bad. :twilightsheepish:

    #60 · Chapter 2 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>946213

    Lol it's okay. We all make mistakes.

    #61 · Chapter 2 · 43w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>657426

    I don't think Celestia wants to break time again... yet.

    #62 · Chapter 1 · 42w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Dude I litterally freaked out when i saw this!!!!!!!! Please, write more chapters soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1:pinkiehappy:

    #63 · Chapter 2 · 42w, 3d ago · · ·
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    :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:: I NEED MOAR! :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::

    #64 · Chapter 2 · 42w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>733844>>658261>>693233

    nope  celestia said he needed to go back because the  earth had gone to long frozen AND  she said they used energy from the universe i think to give him  his pegasus form and they had used the energy to long.

    #65 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Hm i just wonder Dan what would happen if dash was with some one else at this time i think i remember they were never married in the story so yeah i just wonder what kinda story it would be if he found out she was with some one else i swear it would add a lot of emotion but you can take it either way my friend.

    P.S sorry been reading a lot of sad/tragedy stories lately.

    Sincerely,

                   Prince Ace Rainstorm

    #66 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Is this going to be continued anytime soon?

    #67 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 2d ago · · ·
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    YESYESYES!

    OMGOMGOMG

    IT'S HERE!

    FIRST!

    I love this story SO. SO. MUCH! :pinkiehappy:

    LUNA SHALL USE HER ROYAL CAPS LOCK TO EXPRESS GRATITUDE.

    #68 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 2d ago · · ·
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    YAYYYY A NEW CHAPTERRRR SECOND

    Have a moustache, monsieur :moustache:

    This story is my second favourite all time.

    #69 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Now you made me sad, DAMN YOU!!!! :raritydespair:

    #70 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 2d ago · · ·
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    YES! NEW CHAPTER!

    Now that i got that out of the way. :derpytongue2:

    Hm... kinda cool. Suprising how RD Cheated on him. Kinda breaking her element when you think about it. But who am i to complain. :eeyup:

    Overall, i think it was okay. Not stellar but nothing that sets me off.

    #71 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 2d ago · · ·
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    YAY! NEW CHAPTER!

    #72 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Back in action, I see! Good to have you writing again, Dan.

    Been a while since "Rot7E" has been updated... but you haven't gotten rusty! Looking forward to more!

    #73 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 2d ago · · ·
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    loved it

    #74 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 2d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowderp: that was just such an...*tears starts appearing*:fluttershysad: emotionally...beautiful and sad chapter :fluttercry:

    #75 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #76 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I vote he finishes this story, then does his other stories. WHO'S WITH ME!? (Rainbow's Dilema is ok for your comic relief)

    #77 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 2d ago · · ·
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    [youtube=http://youtu.be/P3ALwKeSEYs] about time my man. All I can say is sompony is about to go buck wild

    #78 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    HOW DID I KNOW SHE WAS CHEATING ON HIM HOW!?

    NE CHAPTER IS AWESOME BUT WHAT HAPPENS IF DASHIE LIED ABOUT BREAKING IT OFF THAT WOULD BE KINDA ADD A SERIOUS EMOTION TO THIS STORY BUT OH WELL TAKE IT WHAT EVER WAY BRO!

    Sincerely,

                    Skywind

    #79 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Aww yeah! Awesome chapter, can't wait for more. And the mere excitement of reading my OC's name Fyre Bolt in your story, was so awesome!:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

    #80 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Bloody hell, such a sad chapter for me.:pinkiesad2:

    Still, looking forward to see how things might go here in this story.

    #81 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #82 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    .....yea I demand faster updates.

    THIS SHITS GOLD!

    #83 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Dude. It's a great story. But you need to update more often. please.

    #85 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1078787.....that is fucked up creepy man

    either way good job!

    I'll keep reading this as long as keeps being good

    so MAKE IT SO!

    #86 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1080982 dude i know

    #87 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1081076WHY THE HELL DID YOU POST THEN?!

    #88 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1081082 it told me to (help its possesing me)

    #90 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 18h ago · · ·
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    Well isn't this a dramatic start.

    #91 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 8h ago · · ·
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    Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

    #92 · Chapter 3 · 39w, 13h ago · · ·
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    I wonder if this is still going... I'm on chapter 26 of the first one and I can't wait to read this. It looks amazing.:derpytongue2:

    #93 · Chapter 4 · 38w, 4d ago · · ·
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    er....First?

    #94 · Chapter 4 · 38w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #95 · Chapter 4 · 38w, 4d ago · · ·
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    In the words of one of the most awsome male pegasi to ever live

    Snowflake - YEEEAAAHHH!!!

    #96 · Chapter 4 · 38w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Hahaha, about time! I've been waiting for this!

    Nice to see Dan put Filthy in his place. I was getting sick of him.

    Also nice to see that people actally care that Dan's gone back on Earth. Maybe they'll come to Equestria?

    I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, as usual. A couple of grammer errors here and there detracted from the experience, however...

    Looking forward to more!

    #97 · Chapter 4 · 38w, 4d ago · · ·
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    :yay:yay

    #98 · Chapter 3 · 38w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Bull shit!

    Rainbow is Loyalty so she would NEVER cheat!

    NO SHITTY EXCUSES FOR THIS ONE BRO!

    #99 · Chapter 4 · 38w, 4d ago · · ·
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    yea as happy as I am to see shit go down it's been far too long :fluttercry:

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