What a pony donut joe and trixie ship!?

I can get behind this.   

Megusta

>>594325594325

Agreed

This intrigues me. definitely me gusta. Will read tomorrow too late right now

I'm liking this Idea! Keep the crackshipping commin'!

wow this really is a crackship, this is about as random as it gets, but i like it!

This is actually really good. I demand more!

Crack pairing are the best pairings! going to enjoy this one!

Crack pairing, yes, but that cover image makes it a cute crack pairing, if still a bit abrasive.

Con Mane never forgets his swag. Seriously, I favorited this fic based on the cover art and premise alone. Now that I actually read the chapter I can't wait to see what happens next.  

Image: http://chzbronies.files.wordpress.com/2012/04/my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-brony-joe-bond-swag.gif

Peace Out.

Oh by the way, the description says "Great and Powerful Triana" but the cover image says "Trina".

dear ourthor is the pic some forshadownig .

also i dawwed so hard at that pic.

in actualaty this seems feesable so far.

Well to tell you all. Some things that may appear in this fiction maaaay reflect my own frustrations in retail and service. Just saying.

i really like this concept, plz more chapters my good ponie

Interesting concept. Will track for future readification.

This concept sound great. I really like the cover too. Definitely gonna read this.

>>597543597543

Go for it dude as someone has worked retail I feel your pain.

I like it.

were did you find that pic at

>>607413607413

From a...guy. Who got it from Ponibourou

The great & powerful trixie demands updates!

>>597543597543 I never had to run a register but I get how frustrating retail can be. There are way too many people who feel they're entitled to free stuff, and a surprising number of crazy people out there.

Maor!  Um, if that's okay with you.  

I would love to see what this grows into. Trixie could learn a thing or two from an honest hard working stallion like Donut Joe just as much as he could use some of Trixie's patented excitement in his life.

Love the art! Cute and Cuddly Trina is more like it.

Hm. Been a month. On hiatus?

You still wiriting right?

>>776305776305 >>777041777041

No not on Hiatus. Just me being really busy at work which sucks out all creativity, and joy, and sometimes my blood.

>>779601779601 oh ok. yeah work tends to do that so does school.

>>779672779672

In school I can actually think of ideas and even write bits and pieces. Some of my best work came from classes where I was supposed to be paying attention. I graduated anyway.

>>779764779764 yeah i can see that happing its just my professer finds it funny to give us a shit load of hw and im like ffuuucccc all i want this weekend is poines.  

Okay, the cover image is several brands of adorable on its own. I have to read this now.

Hmm.....

Damn...you did very, very well on this...Trixie is one of my most favorite villains on MLP: Fim, and I'm very mpressed by how you created her personilty, I really enjoyed how she belived everything had to be about her or perfect, normallyI would very much hate that but with Trixie it's seems to fit right....I'm hoping to read ore of this, and I'm glad that I was given a laugh...I liked how Pinkie pie appeard out of NO WHERE!!! You doing perfect, keep writing more please, I'll be tracking.

Sir, if there is a picture, then it's not a crack pairing.

On the chapter, I have a feeling that,

Wait, where did I put that gif?

Oh here it is. Anyway, as I was saying,

Image: http://www.gifsforum.com/images/gif/dis%20gon%20be%20good/grand/this_gon_b_gud_gif.gif

I like the premise and they way you're setting it up, but you might want to find an editor. I stopped halfway through because of the constant run-on sentences and missing pronouns. That might not bother everybody, but you're going to lose a fair number of readers unless you address that.

Decided to read the story because of the great picture. I liked the first two chapters and will track the story. I noticed a month between releases, hopefully it's not that long consistently.

>>815311815311

.Yes, I've had this issue before. I did have a editor but he hasn't been around at all lately.

Multiple tense changes in a single chapter? Ugh

Some issues of verb tense here, but overall I enjoyed this. The Fantasia nod had me rolling!

Pinkie Pie is there and she does crazy things at crazy times.

I couldnt stop thinking "Spinoff!", "Sitcom" and hearing laugh tracks in my head, i loved this

I smell a sitcom....

Image: http://i50.tinypic.com/2427ndu.jpg

Yeah, trying to reenact The Sorcerer's Apprentice is never a good thing Trixie.

Also, if Twilight ever came back in while Trixie was working I could see the manure hitting the fan.

>>815327815327 you really need to update more often this is a great story

Insta-faved.

Warning! Discord imminent!

Please evacuate reality in a calm and orderly fashion.

>>817451817451

Quick to the Q Continuum!

'Think about those wondrous holes'....could not stop laughing...I know I know, I'm a prevert but hey...you were thinking it to Damn...I have to read more of this...you doing very well.

>>817493817493

Success. The exact response I was looking for. *Makes a Check on his Checklist*

>>817513817513 Hahahahahah...glad to get one of your ideas checked off.

>>815759815759

Heh hopefully I don't get flak for using a Pinkie Plot Device. Or is it called a Pinkie ex Machina?

"Think about those wondrous holes...."

Image: http://t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTTvW9Cve-pqjH3xVK7k6AvyorfZs90LMdU6soT1XOarTcaNdjA

>>817710817710

It IS Pinkie Pie, i don't think you will get flag for this.

How did she come back to Canterlot? And why? It is Pinkie Pie questions invalid.

I bet she appears all over Equestria as soon as a shop has some free sweets (even though the free bakers dozen where a lie, but she she still got 2 dozen so it's all right)

Well, that was fast.

>>817710817710

i think its more deus ex pinkemina

>>819000819000>>818947818947

Well remember, this is the night after the Grand Galloping Gala so I figured some of the Mane 6 would still be around.

Yes, as soon as I thought of it I couldnt resist writing about it!

Joe and Trixie ship?

hang on a minute...

You know, I thik I might like this, mate. Moustache to you

And then Discord made everypony crazy and Trixie saves the day.

Wait. That's only my mind.

(Still not a crack pairing!)

Donutopia HA! HA!  I just Love the dream sequence. It's really well written and creative.

Also:

"Think about those wondrous holes"  - I'm gonna use that one as my new qoute

:Is it wrong that gave me a wingboner?

: Yes...

: Swag.

Some stay dry, when others drink it through a giant swizzle straw.

I would've laughed aloud if she got the card trick wrong.

Yes, it seems Trixie is learning that giving the crowd what they want is a good thing, and it's probably a good thing her insult to Lyra got cut off.  She just drew a crowd, she wouldn't want to lose them due to insults.

Also, incoming Discord!

Chocolate rain, Trixie starts to woo the crowd again. lol Also Lyra hitting on Trixie = PURE WIN!!!

In case of Discord Event:

If you cannot locate your nearest inter-dimensional portal, place your head between your hooves and kiss your flank goodbye.

Fuck yes as soon as i saw the romance tag i favorited. Ok if this is a doghnut joe+triky story i will read it could you message and tell me because i am super exited please tell me it is. REPLY! PLEASE!!

>>825766825766

De will make de love magik...and donuts.

Im still a little fucking confussed i was looking for yes or no. And i feal a little sad. Are you making fun of my horible spelling? Wow thanks.

>>825801825801

Eh? Oh no I just tried to imitate 's way of talking whenever I use . 'Love Magic' They will make the Love Magic. As in yes. Yes it is a Trixie-Joe ship.

>>825721825721

You said it wrong. It's:

Image: https://encrypted-tbn3.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQZ4CC0Sh70lAGztaTT_8x-S9tYuFUCnszdeEsMikonUaFrKGRvQw

>>817493817493 do you mean pervert?

Lyra and Trixie teaming up to entertain Cantorlot . . .

>>825832825832

I was just fucking with you i knew what you were doing sorry about that i just had to see what you would say. Again sorry couldn't resist.

>>825859825859 Damn, knew I did something wrong! Thanks.

>>819898819898

It's raining moustaches!

You can bet Discord is dancing and singing about em

>>825870825870

>>825728825728

>>825721825721

Well I am sorely tempted to add Lyra to the cast as a reoccurring character. Sort of like Fez on That 70's Show.

>>826095826095

Don't worry. Lyra can be pervert enough for everypony

>>828366828366I LOVE FEZ!!! He's is the BEST character on that show.

>>828366828366

I'm not sure who that is, but do it!

Huzzah for random pairings!

At least it is not another Twilight/Trixie story.

I tip my hat to you, good sir.  A very unexpected pairing that actually seems to be written well.  Write on, sir.  Write on.

>>828380828380 True, very true.

>>828380828380 Kyra and Trixie huh? I am so down for this...also, can we chose a different villian, I mean sure we already have one of them being the main of this story but Discord and Nightmare Moon, you know what...never mind, I'm here for  the amazing humor!!!!

>>829784829784

Crispy Creme isn't a bad enough villian?

>>829959829959 Who? Nah, I meant Trixie bro.

So far... I'll keep reading through. HOWEVER.

Past tense. PAST TENSE. Past Tense.

Seriously. Man, you're like a block of marble and you need an editor to free a statue out of you. There are moments where your prose is good and then it just gets killed by "Trixies asks" or a bizarrely punctuated/truncuated sentence or one that should be two sentences.

>>833455833455

Working on finding a editor.

*Grins and claps* Very cool stuff, I can't wait to read more. I especially like your summary of how you decided or her personality as it's very in depth and fascinating to read.

Ouch one contact? Have you gone the pirate and eyepatch route to cope? That works well but make sure your parrot is housebroken as bird poop all down your back is unlikely to impress the ladies XD

Hi King of Malta, I am aware that you apparently got this off of Ponibooru, which is terrible at crediting the artists properly, but I would appreciate it if you would put a disclaimer that the image you're using (without permission, mind you) is drawn by http://askburningash.tumblr.com/ I'm glad my drawing inspired a fanfiction, and I do look forward to reading further when I have the time, but please either remove the cover if possible OR again, credit me in the description. Thanks!

>>891831891831

Aha! Thank you indeed for this inspiring piece of art. Now that I have a name to it I will most certainly credit you. Might I suggest adding a small stamp or marker in the corner to your pictures that includes your name or tumblr address?  

>>892841892841

Thank you very much for adding the credit then. :3 And I suppose I'll have to start that as a just in case measure. Anyway, thank you again and looking forward to your next chapter! Trixie/Joe may be crack, but it's a fave pairing of mine.

>>892891892891

The more I wrote this the more the shipping grew on me. I'm doing what I can to express it in my writing.

I like where this is going.

Well, this looks like a good start!

“Wheee!” Pinkie Pie shouts as she rides down a pile of plates and out the door.

Typical Pinkie. :D

The present-tense writing style is very hard and awkward to read after one has read stories written in past-tense.  Stlll, I'll keep reading.  This story is getting fun, and you're doign a neat job with Trixie's inner-person(pony?)ality.

Well, that was entertaining. :D

So that's how Screwball came into that episode.

okay... Lyra what is wrong with you? giving the God of Chaos and Enemy of your Country information about the Elements of Harmony?

Not sure if Lyra is best pony or dumbest pony, but she is definitely a funny pony.

Why would you doom the country Lyra! WHY! You freaking idiot!