Wow this is a really unique shipping fic. I like the way its going so far keep it coming.

>>584592584592

Thanks.

cant wait to see whats happens next

Interesting so far. Looking forward to see how this falling in love takes place. Very unique pairing. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

Faved

Iron Will x Applejack? That's a first. I can actually see him building a mansion the guy is loaded with all the motivational tapes, seminars and energy drinks he sells. Iron Will would be the type of guy to put his name on a lot of products and market himself. Also kudos on making Will likeable. It's gonna be funny when Rarity and Spike are overdressed for what is gonna be the equivalent of a high-end frat party. I'm gonna track this fic.  

KEEP GOING!

nice dude, looking forward to more

very good!

Why do I have a feeling that pinke's law will be the death of us all?

MOOORE. MOOOOOOOORE. MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE.

I like how you keeping the the story at a regular pace it seems the only crazy part was pinkie pie and that was to be expected

good job

>>592760592760

You got here just at the right time.

>>593054593054

Generally my stories are pretty rushed in terms of pace. I like reading fast paced stuff, so that's what I write. This story might be paced a bit better though.

I'm glad you like it

Iron Will shouldn't have too much of an issue getting Applejack's attention. He's rich he could probably pay to get Granny smith's hip fixed, build a new barn or hire some one to steal the blue prints to Flim Flam's cider machine. That being said I really lie how you handle the characters in this fic and my favorite part is who Will invited to his party.

Screw the rules I have money.

>>593363593363

Stealing blue prints for cider machine? That's a good idea for a fic.

Garble and the other dragons are in this fic? Insta fave!

I'm interested in seeing how this turns out!

Like this. There should be more fics about Iron Will. And you included Garble and his dragon-friends too. Keep it up, I'll be watching.

Oh come on! You have the living embodiment of communism in a pony and you don't even bother giving it a funny accent. For shame

A communist pony huh? AWESOME!

thsi is getting good cant wait to see what happens when when iron will appoligies

dang I did not expect a update that fast let alone one this good

I see two Twilights.

Other than that, this is pretty derned good.

Smooth move Ex-Lax. Well that begins our plot, but really had Will had any more human parts he wouldn't have been able stick his foot in his mouth any further than it is right now..

>>598942598942

Thanks, let me see if I can fix that. Love what you did with the emoticons too

>>599043599043

Just doing my job as a concerned citizen.

In Soviet Equestria...I'm sorry I don't have a good one right now. Anyway, MOOAAARRR. Seriously this is awesome.

I wasn't expecting Vinyl to get the blunt of the damage. It does show off Will's character to save our favorite DJ.

The story gets 20% cooler each time I read the newest update good job

I wish I could have been there to see the mosh pit!

This fic is awesome! Keep 'em coming!

I wish I could have been there to see the mosh pit!

This fic is awesome! Keep 'em coming!

Friggen' you and this and stuff and GRRAH YES.

I like this so much.

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The author made me break my rule. I always wait for a story to be completed, but then, I lacked the willpower to NOT read this.

I laughed so hard when when smashed the his horns against the drywall on the hospital ceiling, I don't know maybe it's because I can relate having had to install drywall one summer, plus a little slap stick is always welcome.  The low ceilings is also a nice little detail because Iron Will stands at about 7-8ft tall since the general consensus is that most ponies are about 3-4ft on all fours and 5-6ft tall on their hind legs and Will is about twice that height of the former.

I thought the ending of this chapter was d'awww and just pleasant in general.

Peace Out.  

this made me smile

I love this story. Made me d'awwww. You, kind sir/madam, deserve a mustache.

Thanks for all of the support everypony . It's made me very happy to come home from work each day and see what things you liked about the story. I'll get the last few chapters up soon. I'm having a lot fun reading and writing fan fics here; it's hard to balance that with Diablo III being out this week though.

>>606055606055

Yeah, I've done drywall too. My dad and I put in two back-to-back 14 hour days of it when we built the family house.

>>606960606960

I'm a dude . I just assume everyone online is a dude, but there seem to be a lot of pegasisters, so you never know in this community.

Honestly, I really like how Iron Will is acting in your story. When I watched his episode he never really felt like a jerk, mostly he just felt like he hadn't really interacted with people much; I mean he took Fluttershy's rejection at the end of the episode pretty darn well really.

fuck communisiom now lets argure

>>610686610686

I agree. In that episode Iron Will was loud and obnoxious, but not really a jerk. He's a business man and by demanding payment he's only protecting his investment.

As for Will's House problems, I would imagine being as smart as he is, he would have home owners insurance. I can't think of a reason why he would have a rhyme about not having insurance. Worst case scenario he'll do what a lot of celebrities do when they need quick cash: do voice over work for a Dreamworks film, do commercials, appear on a game show, make a guest appearance on a sitcom, etc.  

Great story. MOAR!!!!

Dang I like where this is going and how its getting there. Keep it rolling.

So, I don't know if the story should end here or not.

What do y'all think?

Well, I made the feature box for about 60 seconds. I never thought that would happen and it probably won't happen again.

Maybe I should write some sarcastic meta-fanfiction.That seems to be the way to get a lot of views.

>>616451616451 Mark my words, all those meta-fanfics are going to loose their push, since EVERYONE is starting to make them. Heck, I find them annoying now.

Also, I liked this story. I don't usually read shipping, but this was interesting enough to catch my eye.

>>616551616551

I'm a bit new here, what's Meta-fiction?

Also I personally wouldn't end it here and now, you could probably put out one last chapter to cover the date for Applejack and Iron Will, maybe another on Fluttershy and Big Mac. It's completely optional considering that finishing it here is perfectly fine.

>>616710616710

Meta-fiction references things outside the show, specifically the FIMficion community and it's various trends. The top story on the site (as I'm writing this) is a meta, because it makes fun of romance (shipping) fics written on this site. The second to top story makes fun of stories about humans going to Equestria and of course the guy who wrote it named himself "troll."

There are a few meta things in my story here, but that's not my main focus.

Yeah, I've got more content for this story, but it might be a bit longer before I could get them posted if I decide to.

>>616836616836

Hahaha, I actually read troll's story. It's worth checking out if you havn't already, though i'm sure you have.

And that's perfectly fine, i'm pretty sure everyone around here knows what patience is.. Or atleast I hope..

This is a great story! I like the gentle pace it's taking for being a shipfic. It actually has plot and character development.

Please do continue!!