Discord and Chrysalis attack Equestria and after the magic of friendship and the magic of the goddess of sun herself fall,Twilight decides to search the library for a spell that might be able to bann the evil beings. She finds a spell with no discription just an odd Image of a claw small-and index finger stretched out. Once returned to the battlefield she uses the spell and turns into a god of metal. With this new power she is able to defeat the villains and destroy ponyville during the process.
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yea... The concept of the story is good but your spelling and grammar is bad
You need a bit more practice and more use of the dictionary.
Good luck old chap
I personally thought it was a wonderful piece of trollfic.... That was a trollfic right?
Die For Metal - Manowar
You misspelled Ozzy, therefore, you are not metal.
But this was an obvious (And kinda cool) trollfic.
Oh buck people are reading this piece of 4 am brain diarreah