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Orion97
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Darn you author I was hoping to see Spikes reaction to Twilight finding out his secret. Oh well, faved! by the guy with the hat.
The story was good.
Okay, the ending was a bit predictable (at least for me), but still a good, solid story.
5849387 I haven't decided if I want to continue along this train of thought or what exactly but I wasn't sure if I should do that because I couldn't think of what would make a good ending point after if I did that. Even though its' complete I could add another chapter, or do a sequel.
5849427 Glad you liked it, and yeah not exactly a top-notch Sherlock Holmes story but still an amusing twist I hope.
5849589 Aye, but it'd be raisins!
kinda quick to the punch and didn't really explain why he chose that challenge... but an enjoyable read none the less...
I really wish there were more stories with this premise: Spike's secretly a great/famous (erotic) author and his friends find out... Thank you for writing it
How to describe this fic...
One word: Railroaded.
The entire premise and plot line is nonsensical. There is absolutely no reason for most of the decisions that are made by the characters. Okay, I can see Twilight considering trying to write a story, but why did she involve Spike? Why did she make it a competition? Why did Spike agree? Why did he make it Clop?
There are a ton of reasons that none of this would happen. In fact, each and every one of those decisions would default to the opposite action if you consider their canon personalities. I'm not saying that such things can't happen, but there has to be some build up. Give us a reason to believe that these characters would do this. Something more than: Spike walks in -- "Hey Spike, let's have a write-off!" -- "Okay! Lets write clop!"
5849793 I know but it would feel odd if the story dragged on, and it would make sense for him to pick that topic because it'd be something he happens to do well (showed by the numerous romance novels he had written)
5849836 well, I consider it a spectrum, where the details go from non-existent (almost solely seen in author notes and things like that) to so much detail that it's a bother to read, and I don't think you were anywhere close to that end (if I might relate "dragged on" to the latter end of the spectrum) , I think it was on the former's side of it, though not to the extreme
But from the perspective of someone reading the story, it might seem that he's only picking the genre because she was reading about it... and that the first part sounded like she might be the one to make the wager, not him... but I'm just rambling about it
5849907 I know it's not perfect, I agree, and it will get edited soon. Like I said. It hasn't seen any proof-reading or editing so the fact that it's not being ripped apart completely is a good thing. I'll try to get a full proof-read tonight and do some serious editing.
Sequel? There's not enough secret-skilled-smut-author-spike-stories out there and I think that would be a good premise.
5852766 I'll definitely continue that idea but the decision for a sequel is a bit uncertain at the moment. Like maybe if I wrote another smut I would contain in the premise of being one of Spike's stories. I'm still bouncing the ideas around.
I like this a lot. Well done.
5880253 Thank you. The idea just kinda popped into my head while writing something else and I just felt like doing something a littl different as well.
YES! That ending tho. I was so hoping that'd be the case!
Most excellent fic.
5969203 Glad ya liked it. I wasn't going for anything too complicated but just a short entertaining story. There won't be a sequel but I'm not promising that you won't see some kind of reference to it at least or maybe a mention.
Aside from the unnecessary words, and lack of proper placement for commas, THAT WAS BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!! the plot twist! The the....WOW! Yeah! The wow! Omg! That completely caught me off guard at the end! The whole time I was like, Twi's gonna win! Then I was like, SPIKE CHEATED! Then I was like, WHAT!!!! NO BUCKING WAY!!!
well done. You earned a like!
7811539 I'm quite glad you liked it! And thank you
This deserves a sequel in the future. I mean after an ending like that it deserves a sequel. Please do keep up your creative work on future stories.
I demand a sequel!!! (Just kidding; seriously, this needs a sequel)
What a Twist!