Twilight Sparkle invites Rainbow Dash in from a cold, rainstorm. She discovers something wonderful about her brash pegasus friend.
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One shot story that I wrote while in bed some time ago.
Was thinking of writing 2 more like this, just to pair up the remaining of the Mane 6.
Not bad. I wish Dashie would sing me a song!
Not bad, but short, a little open-ended, and slightly rushed with little build-up.
There's room for improvement, but it is half-way decent in this form.
583176 Author has dyslexia and no prereader if I am informed correctly just saying
need a proofreader?
583430 You are correct. I think I've been doing remarkably well for keeping down the number of potential spelling errors on my own, just using the spell checker... sadly, it doesn't always catch everything.
Also, Dimondium has been smashed with the ban hammer (I blocked him). I don't mind some help, but when ppl pretty much just smash me in the face with my mistakes, I pretty much loose all my patience.
583644 I would love a proof reader. I'm fairly new to this site so I still don't know how everything works.
583191 This was written somewhere around... episode 4 or 5 during season one. I don't get to write as much as I'd like too.
583704 if you need a proofreader, I'd be glad to help. Just pay me with a like and a fave on my story, e-mail yours to me at twallin@students.barrie.org, and I'll email it back to you with edits. Fair?
I am not all into song fic's but this one was rather sweet.
well that was a nice little story before my german revision, well done
You based Rainbow's song on this one, right? Either way, it was great! My only advice would be to put a link to the song somewhere in the story. Like:
"Passing the bathroom, she heard singing and some light splashing."
Actually listening to the song while reading the lyrics for it improves the experience vastly.
620085 Actually, I don't even know HOW to create a link like that.
620739 Above the comment screen you should see several different buttons: B - U - I - a colored ring - a boat anchor - and a small picture
Use your mouse to select the part of the text you want to edit in the following ways:
- B turns all your text bold and thick, like this.
- U gives the text an underline, like this.
- I makes the text italic, aka makes the letters go at a small angle, like this.
- The colored ring lets you paint the text in different colors, including silver, red, orange, yellow, brown, green, olive green, blue, light blue, purple and pink.
- The boat anchor is the one you use to put a link in your text. When you press it, a small window will open up where you can enter the URL for the website you want to link. For example, in my previous comment I selected the word "singing" and then clicked the anchor. Then I entered the URL for the song on Youtube (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QhL_lRzobYs) and pressed OK. The selected text should then appear like this.
- Finally, the small picture lets you put images into your comment.
img.ponibooru.org/_images/6f3a4a77405fc20bc4282c2aed0db758/74718%20-%20caption%20episode_30%20Ha!_Ha!%20lowres%20luna%20luna_eclipsed%20macro%20meme%20season_2%20the_fun_has_been_doubled.JPG
Just enter the URL for the picture you want (don't post the URL for the page the picture is FEATURED on, just right click on the picture and choose SHOW. That will take you to another page where only the picture is viewed. Use that URL.)
I hope all of that helped. Good luck with your future writing!
620978 This is awesome, thank you ever so much
bit short but awesome none the less i really liked how you described rainbow dash's voice i can almost imagine it, truly amazing. Would aprecciate sequel very much, just to wrap up the story nicely, just found it a bit of a cliffhanger.
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This hasn't gotten a comment in.... 98 weeks, and I don't know how I didn't find this sooner (I've read close to every twidash I can find on this site) so have a comment from me.
That was adorable but the pacing was a bit fast and the over all descriptions were lacking/non-existent.
Still cute as hell though.
It was very cute I enjoyed it
