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Snails is a loner, he always has been.
Nopony could ever love the so called "ugliest" colt in class.
Which is probably why he yet has no Hearts and Hooves day cards.
But a twist of event's causes Snails heart to flutter and his future to be questioned.
Will he get the girl, or will he still be lonely?
(Haha! Twist! Get it? Hahahaha...ha........ha......... ugh just read the story)

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Oh, this has to be one of the most romantic SnailTwist stories I've ever read! :heart:

Hey, dude? You know your average lisp slurs the S sound in words, right?

So "Are" and "Alone" wouldn't be lisped?

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I felt as if it was necessary to use the 'th' in some other words to make more twist like

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Awww thank you!

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Glad you like it!:twilightsmile:

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I know right?
SO KAWAII!!!!!:heart:

OH MY GAD THAT WAS ADORABLE!!!!!:heart::twistnerd::heart:

So cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:twistnerd:

Awwww, so adorable. I love stories that bring a smile to my face :twilightsmile: :heart::heart:

Thanks guys!
:twilightsmile::pinkiehappy::twistnerd::heart::heart::heart:

HOLY SH**:pinkiegasp:
100 VIEWS ALREADY?!?!?:rainbowhuh:
IN 1 DAY????:rainbowderp:
AND 20 LIKES?!?!?! :derpyderp1:
Thanks everybody!!!!:rainbowwild:
:twilightsmile::pinkiehappy::raritystarry:

wow... them being together is genious
great story

Of coarse today was a disaster.

Course.

After his parents got a divorce..... he had to move with his father. His mother wanted nothing to do with Snail's.

Poor kid.

He didn't have any real friends.... or a fillyfriend, unlike all the rest of the colts in the class.

We all know that feel bro.

He was stupid, ugly, and had the dumbest cutie mark in the world.

I know this filly who has a special talent for wearing fancy clothes. How's that for dumb? And useless?

"Go away! You are not'th wantedth here!" She shouted.
"Make me! I don't have to go anywhere! I can stay right here if I want to!"

Is she going to piss off Twist? She will Rampage her into the dirt.

Even though she was a nerd, she was one of the cutest fillies snails knew of.

Curly red hair? Thick glasses? Nerd? We saw her short temper earlier. She is going to be a bombshell when she grows up.

"You will always be special to me! XOXO!"

Could have been done in Red. You know how to use the color wheel right?

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thanks for your feedback! But back then..... honestly i didn't know how to use the color wheel..... or any of the text editors...
I do NOW..... but i will be sure to edit that course as soon as possible :twilightsmile:

DAAAAAAAAWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I used to not ship these two, but now I can totally see them together!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :twistnerd:
Also, CONGRATULATIONS, TWIST!!!!! YOU'RE A NERD!!!!!!!!!!!! :D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Omg! I can not thank you enough for that comment! Ever since my reading of Bride Of Discord DisneyFanatic I started shipping different couples then before i read the story, because the story was literally so good, it made me CHANGE my ships! I do hope that you read the story, as well as its few sequels, prequels, and side stories, for it truly is a beautiful work of art. But, as I was saying, I could never IMAGINE doing the same to others! My stories.... affecting others interpretation? AMAZING FEELING. So again, THANK YOU for that comment! It might have just made my day!:twilightsmile:

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Oh my gosh! I LOVE Bride of Discord!!!!!!! It's my favorite fanfic, story, and book in the universe!!!!!!!! And the author, DF, is my favorite author, person, you tuber, pegasister and EVERYTHING in the universe!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

This is cute. ^^ But as mentioned, for Twist's voice, you only need to lisp words with S-sounds in. If you randomly add "th" to the end of words, it just makes it look like Twist can't speak English properly. :)

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I actually spoke most of the lines aloud in a twist voice to see which words would have the lisp. I might have gotten a few wrong though.

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What? Surprised maybe? Didn't think I could write little cousin? Lol I'm just joking. Thank you for reading my story though!!!!

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