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Sliske


I'm Doug. Not much else to say. I like to read fics, and one day, I might write one or two.

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((Note: This story uses characters and places from an online game called Runescape. I do not claim to own any part of Runescape, Jagex, or its affiliates))

The World Gate- the portal in which most races entered Gielinor through. With a new threat to Gielinor in the Dragonkin, Arwan and Azzanadra go looking for the world gate, to see if there's anything they can do to save their world. But while looking for the World Gate, they find themselves in Ponyville. How will they get back? And what of the Dragonkin threat? Only time will tell...

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Comments ( 29 )

Wow.. I've been off of that game for too long. So many new terms lol. 2007 and earlier was the best time for runescape.

OMG! runescape and MLP! I f**king love you!

You sir have made me a happy Brony, add me in game I might just hug you somehow.

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Comission for Mod Moltare by Bladespark

582955 Words cannot describe how much win is contained in your photo.

Technically its Mod Moltares but he shared it on the Runescapes MLP forums and I stole it because relevance.

omg...mlp AND runescape :pinkiegasp: could this day get eney better?!?! :pinkiehappy:

Glad to finally see someone brave enough to post a runescape/mlp crossover fic here.

Seems like an interesting start, though it'll probably only draw a small niche audience if this first chaper's anything to go by, given the amount of prior knowledge of runescape lore needed to understand half of what's going on.
Also, the dialogue of Azzanadra and Rarity could use some work, their casual manner of speaking in this seemed a bit OOC (particularly for Rarity, not much you can do about Azzandra with limited canon character development).

Keep up the good work, and hopefully this will turn out amazing, if only for us 'scapers to enjoy :twilightsmile:

602613 I was half asleep when I wrote the second page, lol. I planned on editing it later on.

Okay, this is it. I'm going to make that crossover I've delayed for ages now.

Now for some (hopefully constructive) criticism.
Being (or at least, liking to think that I am) fairly well versed in Runescape lore, this was a great read. But for any non-scapers out there, you left a little too much unexplained. For example, how'd they know what a mahjarrat is? Or the frostenhorn? Sure, that knowledge may or may not be important to understanding the story (probably not, but I wouldn't know), but still I suspect not understanding these constant references might make non-scapers feel left out.
Oh, and remember Chekov's gun. Although the less crucial references to various parts of the game, such as the TokHaar invasion and the death of Xenia, provide some nice background, you simply don't put a gun on the stage unless someone is going to fire it, so to speak. Unless those events get more significant later on, the mention of those just slows down the story and adds more information for the reader to remember "just in case it gets important"

Either way, I really like both the idea and the story :twilightsmile:

I'm surprised at how many positive things have been said about the story- given I wrote it when I was half asleep. Dunno when I'll get started on the second chapter. I'm away from my computer momentarily.

*screams* TELL ME WHEN NEXT CHAPTERS COMING!!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

Hmm... Looks like I really gotta get started on the second chapter... I've been mulling over a few ideas, but the problem is... I have a really active imagination... So chances are, I'll end up deviating from the original story. Just a forewarning though. When my mind wanders, I write and see where that takes me.

Twilight is going to be a Zarosian :pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:

Best pony just got even better!

3am? fuck sleep ive got THIS to read. one question is arwan a player or a npc in the game?

906005 I'm pretty sure Arwan is a player.

Runescape and MLP? That's new, I'll try it when i have some free time.

looks over quest book odd just last quest old xena was still alive and kicking.

infodumps are bad! remember that.

Keep in mind, this story is set in the future of all the events that have happened. Also keep in mind that my character has a quest cape. (Both in game and Arwan in the story).

I'd post more chapters more frequently but I tend to be preoccupied with RS, ya know? Add me on game if you'd like, or join my friend's chat. T0phBeiFong.

Was wondering when will a RS/MLP story come up. You sir, deserve a favourite and thumbs-up from me.

Hmm... This story really did much better than I thought it would, in all honesty. Cool to see how many bronies play the game. As of future chapters, it's more of a "when can I get around to writing this" kinda thing. I've been busy on Runescape, as well as actually writing other things (mainly songs and such). It's been a while since I've even picked this story up to give it a second glance, so when I get the time to do so, I will churn out a few more chapters. Honestly, I'm not even sure I know what I want to happen to our heroes. I've really just been writing it chapter-by-chapter; we'll see if I can't write something to top the first two chapters. Also note, I don't have a team of editors or proofreaders or anything like that, nor do I have anyone to bounce my ideas off of. So I'm alone in this. Like I said before, if you'd like to speak in-game, add me or join my clan chat. I'm Da_mong00se, and I belong to RS Addicts.

New quests in rs kinda make Zaros OOC in this :\

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