The story tells a tale of a new filly and her adventures. Much power lays behind this foals mane, and under her coat.
Love reading non-tragic fanfics and stories.
The story tells a tale of a new filly and her adventures. Much power lays behind this foals mane, and under her coat.
Sorry for the short chapter, but I just wanted to see what you guys think. If you want more, comment or like or let me know somehow :). Thanks for reading!
It's really good, can't wait to read more of it :). On a side note you misspelled maybe in the third paragraph "mabey if I try again, I'll be able to stand up." But other than that there's nothing wrong with it.
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Thanks! There will definitely be more!
MOAR MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry for the huge dialogue, but I had to develop the story.
i want to know so
MOAR MOAR MOAR DAMN IT
The previous chapters have been a bit dull, so I thought I'd spice this up a bit ^-^ Hope you enjoy
MOAR MOAR DAMN IT WRITE MOAR
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Thank you very much for your feedback! There will be more, I promise.
MOAR MOAR I LOVE IT MOAR
MOAR MOAR MOAR GOD DAMN IT WRITE MOAR
oh snap
D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Man, this deserves a ton more views! Can't wait for more.
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Thanks! I'm thinking since school's going to be out soon I'll publish like a long chapter thing. That way I can say I celebrated the beginning of summer break.
D'awwwwwwww read this b4 i hav to go to work at the hospitle
I thought of the Dark Side of the Force when she talked about making it more powerful.
I wish you would make a new chapter
Hey guys. Just letting you know I edited part of this and will be editing the rest of the chapters, if you have any stories you want edited or revised I can definitely help you.
Yours,
freakned13
PS
It is a good read. Thumbs up.
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*Might be editing the rest
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Wish granted!
(Sorry it took so long)