• Member Since 8th May, 2012
  • offline last seen Feb 19th, 2019

BananaPeeler


Love reading non-tragic fanfics and stories.

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The story tells a tale of a new filly and her adventures. Much power lays behind this foals mane, and under her coat.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 21 )

Sorry for the short chapter, but I just wanted to see what you guys think. If you want more, comment or like or let me know somehow :). Thanks for reading!

It's really good, can't wait to read more of it :). On a side note you misspelled maybe in the third paragraph "mabey if I try again, I'll be able to stand up." But other than that there's nothing wrong with it.

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Thanks! There will definitely be more!

MOAR MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sorry for the huge dialogue, but I had to develop the story. :twilightblush:

i want to know so


MOAR MOAR MOAR DAMN IT

The previous chapters have been a bit dull, so I thought I'd spice this up a bit ^-^ Hope you enjoy :pinkiehappy:

MOAR MOAR DAMN IT WRITE MOAR

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Thank you very much for your feedback! There will be more, I promise.

MOAR MOAR I LOVE IT MOAR

MOAR MOAR MOAR GOD DAMN IT WRITE MOAR

D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Man, this deserves a ton more views! Can't wait for more.

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Thanks! I'm thinking since school's going to be out soon I'll publish like a long chapter thing. That way I can say I celebrated the beginning of summer break.

D'awwwwwwww read this b4 i hav to go to work at the hospitle

I thought of the Dark Side of the Force when she talked about making it more powerful.

I wish you would make a new chapter

Hey guys. Just letting you know I edited part of this and will be editing the rest of the chapters, if you have any stories you want edited or revised I can definitely help you.

Yours,
freakned13

PS

It is a good read. Thumbs up.:pinkiecrazy:

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*Might be editing the rest

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Wish granted!
(Sorry it took so long)

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