I am Altoid and I demand to have the First Post for the first time in my life! If it is okay with you...

>>579550579550

You get the exclusive right because no one else has access to the story yet except the mods

Also before I forget, to all that read this, it is a WIP at the moment we haven't gotten to the second chapter yet.

Well i have absolutely no idea were this is going but i cant wait to find out!  

Keep it coming!!!!

>>581330581330

I know where its going

But if I told you it would ruin the story, as is I'm working on the second chapter.

The objective for this is to be 12 chapters, with 3 Acts. right now you've just read Act 1 Chapter 1, which gives very little if much info wise other than who causes all the trouble that is going to evolve in the rest of the story.

And when me and Altoid and me finish this you'll find that a new ship will have been created, even if it is a bit light-weight on details.

And Don't you just LOVE cliffhangers. :3

I do but its killing me oh so much!

>>581411581411

If its any consolation I should have the second chapter up by the end of the day, its all a matter of getting it written.

>>581427581427

Well, I'm going to have the sequel to The Adventures of Vampire Cheerilee up by the end of the week.

>>581648581648 Yay

>>581427581427

And I managed to do accomplish that, I feel very happy right now

It's all going way too fast. You really need to slow it down.

>>585040585040 If you mean her being turned into a vampire and such then yes, it is going fast because we want it to. We don't want to center the plot of this story on her vampirism, but instead the struggles of her life after she gets it (and other things that I will not say because of spoilers). It will slow down greatly once we get to chapter 3 or 4 because that is when the true story gets going.

But thank you for your critique.

>>585040585040

It may seem fast at the moment but this you've only read Chapter 2 of Act 1, while the vampirism is a major plot point, we don't feel a need to make it drawn out and boring, if you read the tags you'll find that its going to evolve over time.

Just give me and Altoid some time to work on it, it'll get there.

oh shiz dude shes a vamp and whens the next chapter?

>>587327587327

Next chapter should be out by just before tomorrow begins or sometime tomorrow, it all depends on how much me and Altoid get done, if its not uploaded tonight then it'll be uploaded sometime after 2PM EST.

ah tanks

OH MY! This is going to be epic beyond belief!

I love love love love love love love love it.

You guys are genius's!

>>589474589474

Thanks for the vote of confidence

Just need to finish up Act 1 here, then see about how were going to do Act 2, because at the moment I have no idea...

HAHA well good luck! I'm sure it will turn out great~!

Ohhhhh yea...... BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD (please continue, I love a good vamp story where the vamps DONT FUCKING SPARKLE and have a Thirst for blood )

>>618223618223

I may have liked reading those books, but for the life of me, some of those concepts were stupid. What exactly is supposed to make them sparkle in the first place?

>>618302618302

Teenage girls..... teenage girls....... theyre doing it to zombies too

>>618308618308 Oh dear God!

The third chapter has finally been completed, 4 should be around sooner or later.

Just gotta be patient, I have finals this week and I need to get those straightened away.

& ,

~Mines5

>>620747620747 lol, love and kisses!

>>620791620791

yep, its my new trademark for anything I'm posting on here, it'll usually be accompanied by this story most of the time

oh my Scoots killed Diamond never liked her anyways nice chapter

>>620883620883

Even then, it is something horrible...

I really hope Diamond Tiara is all right. She might be a bit mean sometimes but deep down there she must have a good side as well.

Beside, Scootaloo would have an even harder time to return to ponyville or ever forgiving herself otherwise.

Poor Scootaloo. Poor Dimond Tiara.

Maybe Twilight knows something that could help. Or Zakura.

FICTION

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Y U NO BE LONGER

>>621575621575

I'll just correct you on Zakura being Zecora, anyways...

Not sure if I'll bring back Diamond Tiara or not, depends on where it goes.

Also on a side note:

The vampires in this are highly similar to the Twilight saga, BUT they are not sparkley or mary sue-ish

>>621619621619

I would love to make this longer, but as writing comes this is pretty long for me.

And I wrote at least 60-65% of chapter 3

I love this so much!

I have mixed feelings on whether or not i want scoot to change back or not though.

Good luck on your Finals!

>>624434624434

Who said anything about changing back, the "Change" in the title refers to something different, I'm going to give you guys some suspense for now though.

I have a few things in life I need to finish up before I get back to this.

ugh like Twilight she drank Deer blood but still good chapter

>>632884632884

this is equestria, I'd prefer not to end up killing a town, OR one of my main characters before we make it that far

going the hard-as--to-kill route are we?

>>632933632933

Well she's not THAT hard to kill, but she does have some qualities that make her a bit of a bad arse

I really liked the "no air required" idea.  It could be pretty badass to have vampire Cheerilee in my story do some underwater work.

>>633213633213

Well yeah, who wouldn't want to be able to walk underwater without needing to breathe.

I really don't see much resemblance to twilight here. Many other stories involving vampires before that led to them drinking animal's blood. I think the thing about twilight was that the vampire was shiny gay and his love is stronger then his urge to kill the girl he's around all the time. Which Dracula proves is not so true.

OH! and i love this!

Madam Pufeltop’s Orphanage + Manehattan? is that a reference to ''Ruby Eyes and Echoes''?

please sir may i have more blood

>>635545635545>>635597635597

why yes it is, how'd you guess

and all in due time my faithful readers, all in due time

>>635545635545 I couldn't resist.

>>636664636664 I was right. Now i claim my prize

Answer to your question: I read the fic

oh crap Scoots is gonna get caught why didnt she accept and cant wait for the next chapter

It's... interesting. I'll give you that.

Tracked for curiosity's sake...

i'm finding it hard to picture  a young mare version of scootaloo

also what her cutie mark

>>644317644317

Just use one pf those teenage cm pics for reference, and as for the cutie mark if she had one would just be a blotch, you'll understand why I say that by reading the first chapter

This is a great story. I can't wit until the next chapter.

oh yeah

>>644598644598 oh yeah

>>670423670423 Aww, Scootasad.

This is what I would envision Scootaloo doing eventually

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Is the changeling a flashback?

>>11435171143517

No, this is all present time, unless I decide otherwise.

>>11435311143531, thanks, I will assume the changeling is the ship until proven otherwise.

Also I want

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Excellent. I simply love how we have yet another epic outcast here.

Good luck on.

>>11435531143553

He just might be

MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

I'll see if I can finish chapter 7 before college starts, but no guarantees.

>>11435681143568

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>>11435951143595

I'm glad you like it

>>11436041143604, I'm getting them from here

If she's on the edge of the Everfree forest does that mean that she might visit Ponyville?

Also, FINALLY!

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You forgot to indent each paragraph and dialogue. Otherwise, I like how you finished it.

>>11454051145405

How did I manage to forget that I mean that is the WORST. POSSIBLE. THING!

Dude, I've been watching this being written since you uploaded the last chapter (May, was it?)  Worth it.

>>11508931150893

I'm not the best writer so I prefer to make people suffer through long periods of time while I work things out

good chapter cant wait for the next