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Joined March 2012
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    Owlor's Stories (21)

    • Cool Jazz
      A stallion is trying to get Twilight's attention. It isn't going so well.

      1,823 words · 440 views · 45 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Sky Matron
      In a world where two of the three tribes died out, Rarity turns to the sky as a sky pirate.
      33,435 words · 528 views · 36 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Fiddle Made of Gold
      Discord went down to Ponyville, he was lookin' for a soul to steal...
      2,464 words · 260 views · 15 likes · 0 dislikes
    • What you sat on...
      Octavia sends Pinkie Pie a letter laying down some facts about history, music-making and her personal life.
      1,979 words · 323 views · 26 likes · 2 dislikes
    • The Derpy Report
      16,151 words · 489 views · 24 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Silly Assumptions
      1,101 words · 287 views · 22 likes · 2 dislikes
    • S1LENC3
      3,007 words · 373 views · 16 likes · 1 dislikes
    • In The Business of Making Ponies Happy
      1,543 words · 208 views · 10 likes · 0 dislikes
    • That Play
      11,275 words · 252 views · 10 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Dysphoria
      12,763 words · 273 views · 38 likes · 8 dislikes

    The times are a-changing in Equestria. In recent years, technology have progressed at a frightful rate. A few brave pioneers are working on magitek, combining magic and technology, but several opposing factions are trying to ban this practice before it takes off.

    The first Equestrian World's Fair is seen by many as the potential tipping point, and Celestia has therefore made it a point to attend personally.

    Twilight is working on a device to help a friend regain flight, a device that might hold the secret to unlocking the true potential of magitek.

    From the lowest rung of the social ladder comes a pair of buisnessponies and engineers whose actions for better or for worse will shape the future of Equestria, for good or for bad. A tale of technology, flight and imagination.

    First Published
    12th May 2012
    Last Modified
    12th Jul 2012

    Comments ( 14 )

    #1 · Chapter 2 · 54w, 15h ago · · ·
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    A story by Owlor... *reads*

    #2 · Chapter 2 · 54w, 15h ago · · ·
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    I love magictek, everything seems linguistically correct, and the character tags have me intrigued. Needless to say, you've earned a track.

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 54w, 13h ago · · ·
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    a few verb tense errors, but i'm diggin' your style bro

    carry on :twilightsmile:

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 54w, 12h ago · · ·
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    still quite a bit of errors, but i've resolved to track. the story is completely sound, and i'm eager to see what happens :pinkiehappy:

    #5 · Chapter 2 · 54w, 12h ago · · ·
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    I haven't even read the story yet... but still this looks really promising!

    Lets have a look inside shall we?

    -The Hoofed Ghostwriter

    #6 · Chapter 2 · 54w, 11h ago · · ·
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    Oh wow!

    Totally worth the read, I really enjoyed it!

    While reading this I couldn't help but celebrate a bit. This seems to be practically dripping with Pre-Raphaelite context, and I really enjoy that sort of stuff!

    So I liked this story before I read it, plainly off of the description you gave at the beginning (the idea was something fresh, I couldn't help but to jump on the bandwagon) . I took a guess, and I was right.

    Great job here, and I will defiantly be following the progression of the book!

    ~The Hoofed Ghostwriter

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 54w, 9h ago · · ·
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    One word - awesome sauce, nice work :pinkiehappy:

    #8 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Shouldn't Rainbow-shine be Rainbow Dash...????????

    Also Spiek needs to be corrected to Spike.

    #9 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    #10 · Chapter 3 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    The kind of painting the 4th wall I used in this really didn't translate well to fim-fiction, I got really tired fiddlnig around with the colors to make the letters look plasuibly invisible, so I just screenshotted my gdoc :twilightblush: eventually I'll go back and replace it, but for now itll work as a gettho solution :trixieshiftright:

    #11 · Chapter 3 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    It's actually better that way, about the gdoc screen shot, because one, it looks cooler and two, no one could highlight the message to read it. No spoilers for them!

    #12 · Chapter 3 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>900531

    Maybe I should do something similar with all the letters instead? :trixieshiftright: It wouldnt take long in photoshop to create a typewritten letter that looks good, and it would make for soem delicious 4th wall-painting. :trixieshiftleft:

    #13 · Chapter 3 · 45w, 13h ago · · ·
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    I have absolutely no idea what is going on anymore. :pinkiecrazy:

    #14 · Chapter 3 · 45w, 13h ago · · ·
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    >>911671

    This chapter is really just here to set the stage for some of the conflicts later on and to flesh out the themes of the story. :twilightblush:

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