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    • Motherly Touch
      Princess Celestia comforts Twilight during some nights.

      3,430 words · 2,202 views · 186 likes · 3 dislikes
    • The Truth About Scootaloo
      Scootaloo comes to reveal the truth of her lineage
      2,013 words · 874 views · 123 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Pegasi Introspection
      Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy ponder certain feelings
      22,199 words · 2,712 views · 222 likes · 7 dislikes
    • A Little Nudge
      The CMC set up Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy
      7,341 words · 2,247 views · 151 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Expressing Feelings
      1,803 words · 987 views · 100 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Snuggles and Nibbles
      4,775 words · 2,177 views · 117 likes · 5 dislikes
    • Worry
      3,936 words · 1,061 views · 102 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Moonlight Flight
      3,801 words · 1,497 views · 98 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Crude Misconceptions
      7,109 words · 2,961 views · 173 likes · 10 dislikes
    • Perfect On Paper
      96,304 words · 1,222 views · 110 likes · 5 dislikes

    As a filly living in Canterlot Castle, Twilight Sparkle either wakes up from a scary nightmare, as well as missing her family, or a thunderstorm, Princess Celestia comforts her. Just because she was her mentor didn't mean she couldn't offer a motherly touch.

    First Published
    12th May 2012
    Last Modified
    12th May 2012

    Comments ( 40 )

    #1 · 53w, 4d ago · 1 · ·
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    I enjoy these kinds of stories, brings light onto the mother-daughter relationship Celestia and Twilight share, rather than the sexual one.

    Moustache for you :moustache:

    #3 · 53w, 4d ago · 1 · ·
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    >>579571 The latter type is just plain weird, I agree.

    A neat little heartwarming story. Very nicely done.

    #4 · 53w, 4d ago · 1 · ·
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    Well, that was sweet.

    #5 · 53w, 4d ago · 1 · ·
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    Very cute. Filly Twilight!!!! :twilightsmile:

    #6 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    imaclosetbrony has it dead center. This is the type of relationship that would develop

    #7 · 53w, 4d ago · 1 · ·
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    Now here's a story that I wish more fictions would explore, the development of Celestia's relationship with Twilight during her student years. The story you got here is a heart warming one, to be sure.

    Perhaps a bit to repetitive in some places. Like how Twilight's reaction seems largely the same to the things she's afraid or saddened by, but that doesn't detract too much from the overall theme and quality of the story itself.

    Great Job!

    #8 · 53w, 4d ago · 1 · ·
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    that was real sweet.  props!

    #9 · 53w, 4d ago · 1 · ·
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    ...Son of a bitch. I never thought I'd have some bloke here mess with my paternal instincts like this. This is disgustingly cute, criminally cute... just. Cute.

    That being said, I actually really love you've given Twilight and Celestia the relationship that I've always wanted them to be portrayed as having. No sex, no illogical romance, just a really sweet mother-daughter connection. My only complaint with this story is that Twilight herself isn't always acting like a child of her age would, prodigy or not. That's a small nitpick though, and it all goes down to character interpretation in the end.

    Have all my thumbs and favs. You've earned them.

    #10 · 53w, 4d ago · 1 · ·
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    That was adorable. I love how you showed Twilight's first night living in the castle. All of her earlier excitement faded as she became homesick.

    I liked the counting trick with the thunder. Reminded me of Poltergeist.

    Very sweet and, once again, adorable. :twilightsmile:

    #11 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I have words for you, sir.

    They are, in order, Squee, D'Awww, and Hnnnng.

    Well written!

    #12 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Yes!  :eeyup:

    #13 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Naww, cute. :3

    #14 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    YES angels bowling holy crap that's exactly what my parents told me when I was little :rainbowkiss:

    #15 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>579571

    Aww! Spike's moustache! xD What better rating than that?

    Thank you! :D That's exactly what I was going for, to just bring forth a little look on how much of a second mother Celestia can be to Twilight. :twilightsmile:

    #16 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>579742

    I agree! I would love to see more stories like this, that touch on the relationship Celestia and Twilight had over their years together. It really is pretty sweet, and plus as someone who adores both characters, it was definitely fun to do. Thank you very much! :pinkiesmile:

    #17 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    This is such a sweet story, I love it :heart:

    I hope there would be more chapters underway :fluttercry:

    #18 · 53w, 4d ago · 1 · ·
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    I've always loved the mother-daughter relationship that exists between Twilight and Celestia.

    #19 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>581604

    Me too! It's very heartwarming. :twilightsmile:

    #20 · 53w, 3d ago · · ·
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    D'awwwww...

    #21 · 53w, 3d ago · · ·
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    SO CUTE! :twilightblush:

    #22 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    D'aaaaw. Thank you for the entertaining and heartwarming read.

    #23 · 51w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Love it

    #25 · 50w, 2d ago · · ·
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    pure d'awwww

    #26 · 41w, 5d ago · · ·
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    :twilightsmile: Adorable

    #27 · 40w, 7h ago · · ·
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    Be careful of using the line

    It was a dark and stormy night.
    For people like me it always makes us add "And the robbers were in the den.":rainbowlaugh:

    #28 · 40w, 7h ago · · ·
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    >>1091732 :rainbowlaugh: I'll keep that in mind! I can't help it though, the line is just awesome. X'D

    #29 · 39w, 1h ago · · ·
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    Awwwwww. I love fics that show the motherly side of Celestia, not the Trollestia side or the Twilestia side.

    #30 · 39w, 1h ago · · ·
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    >>1137074 Thanks! Same here, honestly! :pinkiehappy:

    #31 · 38w, 6d ago · · ·
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    :fluttercry:  Salty, manly tears.

    #32 · 35w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I adore this!

    #33 · 28w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I love it. Much better when they have a mother-daughter than the.... ugh, sexual kind. That's just plain creepy.

    Nice work on this cute story, I grant to you a moustache as a reward: :moustache:

    #34 · 25w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Loved it very cute :moustache: moustache to you :rainbowkiss:

    #35 · 21w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Daaaw.^_^

    #36 · 21w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1091732 wrote : "Be careful of using the line

        It was a dark and stormy night.

    For people like me it always makes us add "And the robbers were in the den.":rainbowlaugh:"

    And when I see ""And the robbers were in the den."" I then add "and they were fighting Ranma Saotome, or even Terry Bogard."^_^

    #37 · 11w, 6d ago · · ·
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    What I don't understand is that this story hasn't more likes

    It is one of the cutest I've ever read and definitely the cutest Momlestia fic

    Have a moustache for this: :moustache:

    also, I hope you don't mind me adding this story to my group "Momlestia"

    #38 · 11w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>2190083 Awww, thanks! I love Momlestia stories, I definitely want to try to do some more if I can. :pinkiehappy:

    Absolutely, you go right ahead! :twilightsmile:

    #39 · 5w, 5d ago · 2 · ·
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    Definitely one of the better Celestia/Twilight stories I've ever read.

    #40 · 2w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
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    Celestia is best mom. :heart:

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