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Twilight and her friends are over worked and desperately need a vacation. So the mane six, Spike, and the Cutie Mark Crusaders rent a beach house for the weekend.

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Well, if anypony (and dragon) ever needed a vacation, it would be these ponies.

584109 Agreed, especially Twilight and Applejack. Everyday is like this for them

Not going to lie the poines that need the vaction the most have to be applejack Spike rarity and twilight. idk about RD she sleeps a lot.


I like it a lot really good start not to much detail where its overwelming but not to little where your wondering whats going on. I LIKE IT! :moustache:

584196 Thank you, I plan that the whole beach thing Rainbow Dash wants to go for the fun and excitement. You know RD. Anyway thanks for your positive feedback and stay tune for the second chapter, which should come out by the end of the week. If it doesn't appear that's probably because I'm on vacation myself. (No lie, I'm going on vacation thursday) But, I'll be bringing my laptop to try and get as much done as possible. I don't let my readers down.

I like it! (You will read this is Thor's voice damn you)

I can't wait to see where this will go. At first I was skeptical at the title but this is really well written. It sounds like something the Mane 6 would actually be doing, hay it sounds like an episode!

I will be watching :raritywink:

584514 glad you liked it and yes i did read it in thor's voice (Damn you)

Well, I can't read it this evening. I'll favorite it to read in the morning. Looks promising if you've done it right!

Oh my god, the fic I'm working on has almost the same premise. You read my mind somehow?:pinkiecrazy:
I just hope the events don't end up too similar!

585605 write it anyway, if it does. Just remember two great minds think alike

This is a good start, Twilight obivously dosen't know that getting a good night's rest is important when you study for a test. :facehoof:

Pinkie Pie is probably lucky the Cakes didn't stick her with babysitting duty on top of running Sugarcube Corner or else she'd likely have snapped much sooner. :pinkiegasp:

And I hope Big Macintosh dosen't get jealous of the fact that his little sisters get to go on a vacation while he's in bed with the flu. :eeyup:

586393 Hmm, that first one about Twilight gives me an idea.

Thank You SuperPinkBrony12

Keep up the work it's great!!:trollestia:

587004 Uh oh I think this means the return of Pyscho Twilight from "Lesson Zero". :twilightoops:

592014 im glad, chapter 2 is nearly half done

Too short but keep it up

Rainbow got a loan, I hope she plans on paying it back soon or else the bank will surely be knocking on her door. :pinkiecrazy:

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loving it so far

Very nice, actually thought Twi's dream was reality there for a minute. Anyway, nice chapter looking forward to more.

593289 thanks
I found the dream and how twilight worries very like the actual character

593454
Yep, you nailed how she would react and everything.

593561 I was thinking of Lesson Zero, God that episode was both hilarious and scary

593561 I was thinking of Lesson Zero, God that episode was both hilarious and scary>>593720 when she burst out of that beach ball and was like "Hiiiiiiiiiiii girrrls!" I was like holy bucking sh**, Run CMC Run.

593731
Definitely, when that happened if Michael Myers' theme song started, it would have been perfect. :pinkiecrazy:

593808 when she popped her head out of the bushes, "chi chi chi chi ka ka ka ka!"

593826
Oh man, now all it needed was some Nightmare on Elm Street.

593808 Now there have been numerous of MLP moments that either scared me or gave me the creeps.
- Lesson Zero, when Twilight comes out of the ball
- Party of One, When Pinkie Pie goes crazy at gummy's after birthday party
- Royal Wedding pt.2, when Twilight was sent to the cave and Cadance/Chrysalis was torturing her and messing with her mind with the images of her in the diamond walls
- Baby Cakes, when Pound and Pumpkin goes missing. Especially after she found Pumpkin in the closet and then she goes looking for Pound in the hall. The squeaking of the toy, the babies laughter, the wind blowing the curtains, shadows moving.

593855 Fan Fiction Idea - Freddy Krueger goes to Equestria. And he tries to kill everypony, but somehow they always outsmart him

593863
Yeah got to admit, there are some fairly creepy moments, but in the end everything is resolved. :pinkiehappy:

593874 Of course, and was it me or should have the season finale been either TV-Y7 or TV-PG. It was violent, creepy, intense.

593891
True, but I think they are starting to carter to the fandom more and more as time goes on. But I still loved the finale, especially since they didn't wind up using the Elements again, that would have gotten old.

593915 true, plus how could they have gotten to them, they're locked up. It was a pointless Suicide Mission.

594034 Trollestia strikes again

What about the Cake twins?

596172 they're with their parents, they don't trust pinkie pie to run both the shop and watch the kids

596181 I understand that, Pinkie Pie might have proven she's babysitter material in "Baby Cakes" but I dought even she could pull off the juggling act. :eeyup:

Also CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS STOWAWAYS yay! :scootangel:

596882 Well you mention in the description that the Cutie Mark Crusaders are part of the group that get the beach house so it wasn't too hard to find out. :twilightsheepish:

I still don't know how they'll stow away without being seen though. :moustache:

596926 nearly the entire beginning has been planned out, do i do know

omg
Pinkies good side and bad side of her consciousness is Mini Rainbow Dash and Mini Fluttershy
XD XD XD

599252 people at school were talking about the Emperor's New Groove and I couldn't help but remember Kronk's shoulder angel and devil. And then i was inspired

599296 XD omg Kronk's
so THATS where you got the idea
you know, i feel like watching that movie again...
but oh well, homework away!!!

Rainbow, you got some esplanin' to do!:rainbowhuh:

heheheh somethings up
and i wanna know more :)
keep typing :D

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