I'm a new brony, I hope the community is friendly. :3
"HORSES, TALKING HORSES EVERYWHERE!"
There really is no escape from Equestria when you're being careless with portals. Tavish accidentally tumbles into another world, maybe even dimensions where horses and other creatures can talk, have huge eyes, and are very colorful. There are also many other strange creatures, such as dragons, griffons, etc.
With a portal device, there is much more to be done that is fun in Equestria.
This is my first story and I hope you will enjoy it.
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*Looks at tags*
Yep...*sigh* definitely random.
I'm not one for random fics, but I am one for HiE fics, so it's kinda hard to make a decision right now on whether or not I like this story.
Desmond the moon bear.
Enough said.
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
It's definitely deserving of the random tag, and intriguing enough to watch. No portal abuse makes Pinkie sad though.
There's so much fun to be had in Equestria (heck anywhere for that matter) with a portal gun.
The color text for each of the Ponies is neat and all, but Fluttershy is really hard to read, I have to highlight it to be readable.
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So I WASN'T the only guy that thought of that the second I saw that title!
Good to know
I could see this working as a comic, but the lack of images leaves something to be desired. I'd suggest trying to put more development into it, imagery, stressing how awesome it is to meet your favorite pony, ect. I think the discussion of humanity's omnivorism (I just pulled that word out of my ass) should be saved until later, after at least the mane 6 get to like the self-insert, that can pave the way for some drama, the way Celestia deals with it feels like it's just shoved aside.
This..... This is brilliant, I thought of doing a story like this. This is pure genius. When is the next story coming out?
I'm glad you all like it. I'll be slowly working on it. Don't know how many chapters that there'll be.
Also, I'll make sure to include pictures.
Yes, the title is based off of desmond the moonbear.
Assapples, I don't know how to insert pictures that I create myself. D:
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Oh, believe me, there WILL be portal abuse. The princess never mentioned anything about portals.
Lots of portal abuse...
Tavish: GONNA BE SO AWESOME!
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I BAKED YOU A PIE!
OH BOY, WHAT FLAVOR?
PINKIE PIE FLAVOR!
*guitar riff*
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Hey, it's just Pinkie Pie. She won't mind having a cake in her face.
HEY YOU! YEAH YOU, WITH THE FACE!
MAKE MOAR!!
HEY YOU! YEAH YOU, WITH THE FACE!
MAKE MOAR!!
Sorry, double posted
"He showed us that there was kindness in your race, and because of this, I may help you. Unfortunately, my powers cannot transfer any organism that is not a pony between worlds, so until you can fix your portal device, I will have your house here in Equestria. By this I mean that I will transport your house on Earth here to Equestria. However, you must agree to follow these rules; No hurting any ponies of my kind of purpose, no portal abuse.."
Yeah
She mentioned Portal abuse.
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Tee-hee....
Tavish: THUNDER YOU FUCKING ASSHAT
Changed it anyways, I guess I should make it so that Celestia doesn't know about the portal device and its w-
Tavish: MAGICAL POWERZZZZ.
Yeah, whatever. Also, when she said that she came in contact with the human world before, I was actually referencing "My Little Dashie".
Does his house have electricity? ?
i don't like it its not bad but i don.t like it 2.5 stars.
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Well, yes, since Celestia brought it over to Equestria.
I LOL @ Jesus
please make it a regular thing!
"No teasing ponies"
Issue.
He technically has done that.
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My little Critic. D:
Well, she means tease as in make fun of them, call them names, not play pranks on them.
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Ah.
Wait a minute...
Pinkie Pie.
Pinkie DIE.
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Let me quote something...
"MOOOAAAAR!" - Anonymous
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loads a swearing.
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Yeah, that's just temporary.
I don't know why, but I was listening to some guy yell at his cats on Youtube while I was writing it.
One word:
This made my week, especially with Jesus. Good story, friend
I hate it when I run out of ideas.
It was a good story, but it was a little hard to follow due to the word coloring. Great job, though!
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Obvious Metal Gear Awesome reference is obvious.
Me: Jesus Christ! That's funny.
Jesus: You called?
Me: No, sorry Jesus.
Jesus: It's cool brah.
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Yep. :3
Sorry, School's been keeping me.
nice my little dashie reference
HEY YOU! YEAH YOU, WITH THE FACE!
MAKE MOAR!!
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Terribly sorry. School's been keeping me, and I'm still comin' up with ideas.
the person from portal is chell.
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MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
This fanfic is fucking hilarious! 4.5 stars! BRAVO!