It has been over eight months since Sweetie Belle accidentally activated an ancient spell. Essentially trapping herself outside of the natural world, causing Rarity to become desperate in her attempts to rescue her younger sister. Since every pony else has failed, Rarity is willing to take her efforts to a level the most would refuse to even consider to save her sister.
No matter the costs.
NOTE- There really isn't any gore (So I felt the tag was unnecessary), but fair warning there a few references to blood and what not...
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A must sequel indeed
Yes, this is pretty good and just needs a sequel. Too many questions and no answers!
5775579 Now that's the official squeal right there... Ya took ma job!
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5775547 Cool, I'm seriously considering it... I mean I really liked the idea and I just might flow with it, thanks for the feedback.
Look at it this way. Rarity had a right to do whatever she thinks is right to save her sister. And from the story, Twilight is trying to play it safe, even if the accident is her fault But things aren't always safe, sometimes to get things done you have to get dirty. And Rarity I think for her sister is willing to get dirty. And the fact that there is someone else out there practicing that brand of magic makes things interesting.
Nice work I would like to see more
5777273 Thanks, I'll admit it might not be my best work. But it's up their when it comes to the interest I had in writing any piece so far.
Oh and thanks for the watch!
5777306 Hey, well you got me to like it. So I think its worth the time, I'll put my vote in for a sequel as well.
And again, you managed to create a story that's extremly interesting with just one short story. This beauty has much potential, you could take a turn down the road to much darker places and make it a grimdark fic to fuel nightmares. Or you could make it some sort of tunnel like experience, you know, a long and very dark trip, with a light at the end of it.
Anyway, really promising and totally worth a sequel. And just to have it mentioned, much better grammar than "Who We Are"
keep it up
5780488 Yea, I know... The options...
We need a sequel.
6453865 Which is being written as I type... It won't exactly be mines (I'll just be helping), but the story has been adopted by Yellow Gate and she'll be posting the squeal on her account soon.
can only agree with the others, I really want to know how this might end