aw sounds cute and interesting! I like how it's called "making foals with SCIENCE and magic..."

>>2859928599

Thank you, I was kind of worried I would get blasted out of the water or something, I am kind of going to try and update often with short stories until I kind of have a better feel for where I am going with this.

Now that's some real science right there! Just throw some shit together on a logical basis and see what comes out.

this is an entertaining read, then again mad science is the best type of science, you never know what will happen.

also, gotta love the "We're just throwing science at the wall to see what sticks" attitude.

plzplzplzplz make more chapters!

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

This story definitely needs to be on EQD, again great job on the story.

Nice story! One question though: what does a "doctorerate" mean? I am glad you listened to us and made chapters longer - around 1000 words is IMHO the shortest you should post. I will refrain from giving it a mark just yet as I want to see how you develop the story after easy chapters. So far so good, so MOAR!

Even as a Pegasus Johnny Bravo just can't catch a break!

I just noticed, in the newest episode Applebloom spoke french, and Breaburn spoke french. Coincidence yes hilarious definetly!

i can already tell

me gusta

NEXT NAOW OR I WILL EAT YOU BLAGH

i know this is bad,

but you just MUST have twi be the unicorn

you could even make twi looking like a man jokes!!!!!

it would be perfect!!!!!!!!!  

spike gusta

fantastic

LMFAO TETURJERBS!!!!

pure comedy gold

The Scientist...they are just throwing science at the wall here to see what sticks, NO IDEA what it will do.

Probably nothing...best case scenario you might some superpowers, worst case some tumors which they will cut out.

"Hair posing some intelligence is occasionally able to shout situation appropriate phrases and advice, unfortunately for everyone hair is much too quite for anyone to hear so their advice goes largely unheard."

This line made my day AWESOME!

>>2899328993 Really, another troll?

that mental image at luna doing the boyyy thing

MOAR MOAR

Thanks again everyone, I've been having a bad couple days and looking at all of these positive comments really helps me when I am down.

>>3133631336 I couldn't say it better! M O A R !!! This is starting to be EPICALLY good!

that part with derpy was great lol

pinkie stop breaking the forth wall and phisics!

I really can't help but smile while reading this story, wicked awesome.

"It's not fair, I try and go do something and all I can think of is you wonderful people being so nice to me, then I end up imagining you guys as Applebloom asking "aren't you gonna post another chapter?" ahhaggggg"

Don't feel forced to write us readers can wait aint that right bronies?

Bronies: NO!!!

Well this is random, and this could end quite funny. In b4 Bravo somehow corrupts the samples that will be used to make the foal.

PS:Did you get permission to use Dusk?

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

DO THE MONKEY WITH ME

>>3202632026

QUIT SPAMMING!

Dusk has a weird thought process.  Anyways, funny so far. Keep going!

I had confused expression when his thought process started, but once I figured it out it made a hilarious amount of sense.

I eagerly await more of this story

>>3291532915

Was it the list or the Star ship Enterprise part that was confusing? I don't want to confuse anyone unless I mean to.

that star treck reference was hilarious. i can almost picture it

I laughed so hard on the thought process part. That my good sir was pure genious.

Agreed, the transition into his thought was a bit confusing. That aside its still a solid chapter

Made me smile on

Sooo is this part when a crazy guy with a strange mustache pops up and says  "What a Twist"  

BOB?

lol i give you prince BOB

BOB, do you like bananas?

well, i cant say i

you DO!!!!???

idk

well you can find out on the MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON

umm ok

you arent afraid

im not afraid cuz my name is BOB :D

"Bob?" said Luna

"Bob?" questioned Celestia.

"Bob?" whispered Fluttershy.

this was hilarious, but it was even funnier with twilight's idea

"Excelsior?" blurped Twilight.

sounds like she blurted and burped at the same time

It is obvious that the royal prince will be named Abacus.

Wow Celly is kind of old-school when it come to foal-care.

is that a reference to Titan A.E. ?

I approve of Celestia's old school foal care methods. It was whiskey in my house hold, or Guinness which to an Irishman is pretty much mother's milk

>>3389233892 i saw that movie it was awesome

if you name the foal bob i will stop reading this xD jk but you will lose my respect :/

>>3408234082

It was a joke but now I'm tempted hmmmmm

The tacos are enough to make this story good.

that last line... i know all too well those words foreshadow something either really bad or really funny.

>>3669236692 Or both!

"What's the worst that could happen?"  

>>3674636746

EVERYTHING.

I am sad, tony1865 has stopped commenting, alot of his advice has really helped. Actually I'm realy worried that some of you don't like the story anymore, did I do something wrong?

I submitted this story to ED a while ago and I still haven't heard back from them yet. I think I need a beer.

>>3685936859

Don't worry we like your story at least, and seth is most likely has to sort through a thousand years worth of emails.

Can't wait for the foal.

Do not fret, your story is simply genius and we all know it.

That was a cute Ditsy side story. I like it when people don't portray her with all of her marbles all over the place.

well, theres the end of the world...

also, pecking order!

love it

needs moar ditzy and dinky then it will be perfect!!!

This has been fantastic.

Also, pecking order. I'm curious was this a DBZ abridged reference or just of the top of your head?

>>3772337723

Well to say dbz abridged did it first is like saying mlp fim did the "Benny Hill" chase first. Things like this have been done before in many different ways and I've watched enough movies, shows, shorts, and read enough books to have a wealth of such joke structures to draw from. Although The DBZ one was hilarious and now i gotta go see it again.

oh god, that was an excellent reed

...Brilliant!

Waaagh!  Kite!?  Is his name Crescendo Kite!?  *may have just cameoed and not realized it*

i think Trollestia just got one upped.

I found a small error in the third paragraph, you put tome in instead of time. I am enjoying the story so far.

trollolololol she got punked

ohh ahaha trollestia just got trolled! priceless!

i suddenly feel very worried fro beaker....

Pnkie Pie how long are you going to keep breaking the 4th wall

javascript:smilie(''); FOEVER!!!!

Bah, he'll be fine. Tia love a good prank! *looks left and right, then dashes off wearing a very familiar crown*

EPICNESS ''

This chapter is FULL OF WIN XD

But dammit Pinkie STOP BEEN A GOD do you have any idea how much paperwork you give the scientists to try to explain you. THINK THEM FOR ONCE!!!

Reaction at the begging

Reaction at the end

so thats how you do it its so inforrmative

Made me smile

This is brilliant! Kept a smile on my face the whole time.

attack of the 50 foot twinkie? Sounds about par for the course with these ponies

Flying house?.....seems legit

hahaha...man i'm loving your comedic style its so casually hilarious!

Who's awesome, YOU"RE AWESOME! Thank you for existing.

>>3685436854 Aww, you need a hug.

-Hugs-

There we go!

Wow now I wanna read that book

I just figured out what was keeping this story from reaching its full potential! Commas! You have a very distinct lack of commas! I suggest you look into that. Other than that issue, this story is very entertaining.

>>4076040760

Not sure if want or want to eat me

just in case run

well if your drunk the you STILL written awesomely

If my car wasn't in the shop right now, I would take you up on that offer...

I was a bit slacking in reading story chapters... now i have over 250 chapters to read... this was a big one. This and study buiddies which i didn't read a single chapter of yet but XP... and these desktop ponies get in the way of text but,.. cool story!

Too late im already drunk, keep up the good show

hmm... anypony up for a drinking game where you have to speak using ponified words (eg: Everypony) and each screwup is a shot?

or you could pick five words that are not persisting ones (and, the, at, a, ect.) and turn on some FiM. each time one of those words pops up take a shot.

just two ideas that i've thought up and others have tried. Needless to say that second one works waaaaay faster, and when you combine the two you end up with some good laughs and one wicked hangover.

Lol for a drunken guy you write awesome chapters

>>4153441534I think the site ate your comment

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

one bit of confusion here, traditional Royal Canterlot voice (TM), how can you trademark a way of talking? it makes no sense whatsoever, least not to me anyway. first i've seen that before... if i remember right that is