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This story is a sequel to Ponies Are Animals Too


When Sweetie sees a griffon carrying a pony, and then sees the griffon drop the pony she manages to save his life with her burgeoning magic. The results of which may change Ponyville and all Equestria forever.

Set after season 4 with the exception that Scootaloo was adopted by Fluttershy in season 4. If you want to read how that happens read Ponies Are Animals Too. Knowledge of the story other than Scoots is adopted by Fluttershy is not necessary to understand this story.

I've been working on this story for awhile, and have had many, many hooves involved a special thanks to all those that have helped, including, but not limited to:

The Great Eater
Autumn Breeze 24
Dusk Midnight Melody
And as always my loving and understanding wife

[If you helped and I forgot about you please PM me, I've bounced ideas off of so many ponies I actually can't remember who else helped]

Sex tag is for sexual situations and innuendo.

New cover art courtesy of Enti0, be sure to thank him for me.

Chapters (42)
Comments ( 309 )

Good story! Keep the chapters flowing too!

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I plan to update weekly until I either finish writing or run out of story

I don't really understand why there's a sex tag...

5822086

There will be sexual situations and innuendo in later chapters. I just hadn't gotten that far yet

5822092 Ah, ok. But now I have to think, who will these situations involve? But, that's for me to find outb:D

umm...moar?:twilightblush:

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it's coming, updates every Friday for the fore see able future

Nice job a few runon sentences but other than that great job my dear friend.

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Thank you. My editor must have missed them. I'll go through it when I get a chance and fix them.

5881646

Exactly, I have a tendency to listen to music while I write. So the vast majority of my chapter titles are song titles.

I feel Scootalos pain. I had that same class in March of my 5th grade year.

5927600

You had a class on esterus?

Sorry, I couldn't resist. I think everyone had that class at some point.

present tense scans poorly.

Plenty of dialogue, but you need some action and emotion in there too. Throw in some verbs.

And it BEGINS, not beings.

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What do you mean present tense scans poorly? I honestly don't understand what that means.

I will keep that in mind. I'll be the first to admit I'm a mediocre writer at best. I myself sometimes feel as if I'm not telling the story quite right, but can never seem to figure out how to make it better.

I will fix that immediately. Thank you.

Aww! I wanted to see a battle!:ajsleepy:

6008028

Sorry. Maybe there will be one later.

Oh, mom caught her!

6058636

Yes, that particular scene was fun to write.

6058684 Can't wait till the next chapter. The story arch is really starting to form.

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As I'm still working on it I'm releasing chapters weekly. Thankfully I'm a bit ahead. Cause I'm a fairly slow writer.

6059528 same with me and typing ( still typing first chapter/prologue of first fan fic):twilightsheepish:

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first story is the hardest

Good job breaking the shipping subtlety :pinkiehappy:
Also please more Ashen Belle:fluttershysad:

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Thank you, and don't worry Ashen Belle is the primary ship. Also thanks for the ship name.

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I'm a little surprised you don't do one of these every chapter.

6103076 Some of the songs you use for titles are songs I've never heard of.

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Didn't mean to stump anyone.

1: Free Fallin' - Tom Petty
2: Bad Case of Loving You (Doctor, Doctor) - Robert Palmer [yes, I cheated]
3: Every Morning - Sugar Ray
4: Long Day - Matchbox 20
5: Dream On - Aerosmith
6: What's Your Name? - Lynyrd Skynyrd
7: Wake Me Up Inside - Evanescence
8: Take It Easy - The Eagles
9: Searchin' - The Coasters
10: War -Edwin Star
11: Face Value - The Story So Far
12: Little Wonders -Rob Thomas
13: Fragments - Jaymes Young
14: Separate Ways - Journey


PM me I manage to stump you again

While I am okay with lesbians and gays .
But thing is I kinda think scoots is bisexual.
Also not all girls who like to do things like wrestleing and football or baseball(can't find examples sorry) does not mean the a lesbian. And before you say I'm just a person who either is afraid of or not understanding both my sisters are bisexual and one of my cousins is a lesbian and happily married. And I'm okay with it.

But it could be I'm just too stubern because one of my sisters thinks of me as scoots. Also sorry if I affend you in any way shape or form. I truely am

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It's all good. In all honesty it never occurred to me to make any of the ponies bisexual.

6111967 you that sometimes people / ponies sometimes don't know their own sexual preference all the way and then there is the acurance of a strait guy liking another male. Though I am not an expert.

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I'm very aware of this concept. The truth is that I knew which shippings I wanted to use and then started creating a background for each character based off of that.

Yes hopefuly we get embarrassing talk with parents next:pinkiehappy:

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Yes. It is indeed next.

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You posted the video wrong.

6140989 oh come on i can never post videos

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sorry, guess it happens.

This chapter made me uncomfortable XD

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