Fluttershy finds herself host to a strange visitor.
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I fooled you. I fooled you. I got horse stories. I got horse stories. I got all horse stories.
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That was a great ending! :)
Ok, I lulz. Good gotchya at the end.
What an entertaining late night story.
Great story. I want to see more of Cherub's adventures.
MFW Cherub picked up both guards with one paw and carried them with ease:
But that ending!
Cute little story you wrote right here. Was very funny and cute and loved seeing Luna get that angry. The ending was awesome and I really didn't see that coming. Lesson for the day don't go cheap on shipping. Lolz
Kill the bunny, kill it with incendiary grenades.
Haha! Awesome.
I see the bunny mafia is stil at it.
Congratulations on making the review blog! Cute little story. Very well done with the body language, and nice job with the twist.
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Twist? Where?
A nice, cute little story. Almost reminds me of the Luna-focused fics back during Season 1.
However, I'd advise you brush up on your Shakespearian English or simply make Luna speak normally - your thous, thees and thys are all over the place.
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That was intentional, but you have point
Eheheh, awesome.
Cherub the spymaster needs to be in more stories.
Interestingly, Celestia actually was shown sleeping in her regalia on the show. long after this story. As for Luna, she probably wears it to bed because she has to tend to the dreamscape.
Why was the incorrect conjugation 'intentional'?
Would be wantedst, and thou hast
Would be Didst thou know
4871191 I was thinking that since Luna makes appearances during the day, she herself is asleep while tending to dreams. It's one possibility.
Holy crap. Luna's pissed.
Also, this line nearly made me pass out, I laughed so hard.
And that ending? It killed me.
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
...I'm not actually sure if this was a typo, given that it's Discord.
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Hehe, a typo that makes sense plot-wise. Don't see those very often. Still though, thanks for spotting it.
Was the discord section always in the story? I feel like the story has changed since I first read it so many years ago now.