When Twilight invites Rainbow Dash to come stargazing with her, imagine her surprise when she accepts the offer. But as the night wears on and the stars come out, it becomes apparent that the pegasus has something on her mind.
[Takes place pre-S4 finale.]
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*no words, so Awesome*
Very descriptive and a very diffrent side to Dashie, Definitely a like, Re-read and a follow
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Thankies.
I'm glad you enjoyed it; I was sick of having this story rotting in my drive, so I ground out the last big part at like 5 in the morning. Probably shows, too.
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i spend most of my free time writing in mid day and its not as good as this
. Not to mention i have 4 storys in the works two are available to read now the other two are too short atm to be posted 
but they are nothing like this 
That was very good. And good in the same way CiG is too - I couldn't tell you what exactly made it good, but it definitely was.
I love little stories when Rainbow gets to be so....huggable! and so cute!
.....Yeah, whats that stupid "masculinity" thing again? I no longer care.
Anyway, I love this. It's short, cute, sweet, and touching. Honestly, I really wish I'd become a brony when I ten, and emotional enough to honestly feel at least misty eyed at this. I really do think it's cute and touching though! Honestly, I've seen plenty of stories that are cute and touching that other people have commented on getting teary from, and I do like it.
Upon rereading this, the only line I have any issue with, and this is just a nitpick, is the one saying that Twi has known RD for 4 years.
I know the debate of "How much time has passed" is a huge one, but I personally think they've only known each other for a year, at least by this point.
Man, you can just get out right now. I can't believe you made me tear up over Rainbow Dash.
Seriously. Your vivid description of the LMC followed by Twilight's beautifully simplistic one just did something to my feels. Maybe it's just my enormous fetish for outer space, but you made it seem effortless.
This also came to mind: