Diamond is not your typical ten year old. Most fillies her age go to school, do homework, and hang out with friends.
Diamond spends her time fighting dragons, monsters, and getting possessed by various evil spirits. This is her story.
Well, stories. There are several.
thets qvite hard to read.
Good chapter, 10/10.
Is there going to be more? I liked the last chapter so I hope you're not stopping like this
EDIT: Okay, now that it's been updated, this is very nice to read. The style's different to what I normally read but I'm liking it, a positive change
Overall good story, the character is one of my all time fav's- only problem I can really see is the spacing.- it could be done a slight bit better- just after reading it for a bit, my eyes start to hurt.
Pacing is lovely, characterization is nice, story is detailed and unique.- again great job.
A few errors nothing major, the pacing was nice- I enjoyed the zombies attacking Dia lol- that scene was done well and comedic.
The ending part's started to get a little wordy- lol just alot going on in such a short amount of time.
In all it was really good- never fell flat, and kept my attention.
Love this character and story-great job!
This was very cute.-I enjoyed it alot.
Nice to see a softer side to diamond too.
I finished DD Chapter 3- just going to edit in the morrow and send it to you for approval- then get started on chapter 4.
Dia will be feeling this one in the morning, this was adorable overall- a few spelling mistakes but the overall pace was nice.
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Spelling mistakes? You mean her accent?
6075876 I'm not sure..- The sentence- This Bartender supposedly knew " were" to find him.- I think you meant Where and not were.
Right after that-
" We were hot " in" the case!- I think in was supposed to be " On"
Overall nothing major.
6075928 Totes fixed!
R. I. Perils is the artist for Diamond Dancer? I miss Ipsywitch.
A nice change of pace from your more risque stories.
somepony messed up.
My coffee is going to taste funky with all those tears.
Wow!
Aww.
The sound of silence is deep. Where everything is implied and nothing is inferred. No true meaning can be ascribed to silence, everything and nothing all at once.
Rage and scream, passion and pain. Let all pour forth. Let no doubt remain.
I just had to read this before I dash out to get my coffee. Oh and some food for a pair of adorable furry meowing porch trolls.
Can't wait for more.
how touching.
Woah deep.
I like the intensity. Hooked me and wouldn't let me go till the end.
Disturbing-I like it.
Are you still working on this?
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Not lately!
I want the backstory on Luna giving Diamond her armor.
Wow.
"And now Doctah Holiday's head is mounted on Princess Luna's mantle."
That was painful.
Perhaps, "they" didn't.
You've really made me care about Diamond. I wonder if she'll ever see her Manehattan friends again?
I'd like to read her first encounter with Luna.
The story is not bad, but the bad thing is that just in the climax, the chapter finish and jump to another thing different
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I agree, these stories were a collection of shorts I'd written for Diamond a while ago. They never really 'went' anywhere.
jajajaja xd Nice!!!!