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Just a pony being fabulous. Writer of vignettes, clop, experiments, a great deal of trash and the occasional gem

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Diamond is not your typical ten year old. Most fillies her age go to school, do homework, and hang out with friends.

Diamond spends her time fighting dragons, monsters, and getting possessed by various evil spirits. This is her story.
Well, stories. There are several.

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 33 )

thets qvite hard to read.

Good chapter, 10/10.
Is there going to be more? I liked the last chapter so I hope you're not stopping like this

EDIT: Okay, now that it's been updated, this is very nice to read. The style's different to what I normally read but I'm liking it, a positive change

Overall good story, the character is one of my all time fav's- only problem I can really see is the spacing.- it could be done a slight bit better- just after reading it for a bit, my eyes start to hurt.

Pacing is lovely, characterization is nice, story is detailed and unique.- again great job.

A few errors nothing major, the pacing was nice- I enjoyed the zombies attacking Dia lol- that scene was done well and comedic.

The ending part's started to get a little wordy- lol just alot going on in such a short amount of time.

In all it was really good- never fell flat, and kept my attention.

Love this character and story-great job!

This was very cute.-I enjoyed it alot.

Nice to see a softer side to diamond too.

I finished DD Chapter 3- just going to edit in the morrow and send it to you for approval- then get started on chapter 4.

Dia will be feeling this one in the morning, this was adorable overall- a few spelling mistakes but the overall pace was nice.

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Spelling mistakes? You mean her accent?

6075876 I'm not sure..- The sentence- This Bartender supposedly knew " were" to find him.- I think you meant Where and not were.

Right after that-

" We were hot " in" the case!- I think in was supposed to be " On"

Overall nothing major.

R. I. Perils is the artist for Diamond Dancer? I miss Ipsywitch.

A nice change of pace from your more risque stories.

My coffee is going to taste funky with all those tears.

The sound of silence is deep. Where everything is implied and nothing is inferred. No true meaning can be ascribed to silence, everything and nothing all at once.
Rage and scream, passion and pain. Let all pour forth. Let no doubt remain.

I just had to read this before I dash out to get my coffee. Oh and some food for a pair of adorable furry meowing porch trolls.

Can't wait for more.

I like the intensity. Hooked me and wouldn't let me go till the end.

I want the backstory on Luna giving Diamond her armor.

"And now Doctah Holiday's head is mounted on Princess Luna's mantle."

I made my way to the throne room, dispatching guards easily left and right. I could just throw one and he'd go flying. Into his companions. The room was a chorus of screams and sickening cracks as this creature wrought it's havoc. Princess Celestia arrives with the sun guard. She commands I surrender. I refuse. She orders them to seize me. They strike. Spears, swords, close quarters weapons. I didn't offer any reluctance to strike at a little girl. I laugh. I'm glad they don't. The spears don't pierce, and the swords don't cut. I don't bleed, and I use that surprise to my advantage. I'm like a wild animal, charging into guards and thundering through defenses. This wasn't me! This wasn't me at all!! I didn't want to hurt anyone! I didn't want to fight like this!! But I moved anyway. I did as I pleased. The guards were no match for this creature. My body... tough like the consistency of a diamond. Or so I've been told. Soon it's Celestia and I.

Perhaps, "they" didn't.

You've really made me care about Diamond. I wonder if she'll ever see her Manehattan friends again?

I'd like to read her first encounter with Luna.

The story is not bad, but the bad thing is that just in the climax, the chapter finish and jump to another thing different

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I agree, these stories were a collection of shorts I'd written for Diamond a while ago. They never really 'went' anywhere.

I scream at them to be quiet. Not to draw it's attention, but it doesn't work. They're too frightened to think properly. So am I, for that matter. Being invincible doesn't solve a damned thing when you can't use it to help anypony else. I try to lift the rock again. It won't budge. No! No no no! I can only watch. It lumbers towards the family. They squeeze the little girl tightly, like their soft, fleshy bodies will provide some sort of shield. I won't let this happen.

jajajaja xd Nice!!!!

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