Gaia? It's Gallifrey, and I highly doubt that Ten would be as as stupid as to randomly take a knot of ponies and throw them into a world where their biological make-up would be completely screwed with. I mean, I know that Ten is kinda callous... but that's just outright cruelty, and he always goes out of his way to make sure that the balance of worlds isn't tampered with. At least he warned his assistants what they were getting into...

So yeah, what I'm trying to say is that you'd probably benefit from watching some of the actual DW series. If you plan to do a story about the Doctor, then you're going to need to get a total grasp on his character in order for that to work.

>>583971583971 Eh, Gaia is the Greek name for the personification of the Earth, I haven't watched all the doctor who series (modern or old) so I can't say if you're referencing another planet or Terra, specifically

As a response to the story as a whole, firstly Rainbow Dash would not have said "Bloody", even if she did pick up minor speech habits from the Doctor. Secondly, it doesn't really flow very well, though the casual demeanor is nice, an interesting touch I daresay. But, I don't think I'll watch this story unless I see some serious improvements, no offense.

I think the author is using Gaia as the name of the planet Equestria is on.

>>583971583971

The author never said it was intentional for the Doctor to send the mane six into a human earth.

>>583971583971 I have watched Doctor Who series [modern] from season one. I'm currently watching season 6. And He never intended to send the ponies to Earth, Read properly the TARDIS broke through a DIMENSIONAL RIFT that's the reason they got sent to Earth in the first place. And Gaia is the name of the ponies' Planet. Equestria is not a planet, it's a big central kingdom.

>>584027584027 Thank you for your feedback and i guess you're right Rainbow Dash isn't british afterall XD. What you think more suitable for her to remark? Gaia is the name of the Ponies' home planet. Equestria is just a Big Kingdom.

>>585410585410 Ah, I see, so the ponies are Greek? Or did fans just assume that? and secondly, I think Rainbow Dash would say something like "What did you do to us!?!?" Or something along those lines. On a side note, not very detailed...

i must read MOORRREEE

>>585997585997 have you seen cloudsdale and/or Rainbow Dash house? and for that matter how the royal guards' armor and helmet look like.

>>590353590353 True, cloudsdale takes a lot of cues from Greek architecture, but I always kind of thought of the gaurds as Roman, as opposed to Greek, but you could be right.

>>590790590790 and Pegasus ARE Greek mythological creatures. Unicorns.. not to sure but i think english medieval myth creatures.

>>594763594763 Unicorns originate from roman mythology

Pretty good, gotta work on that punctuation., syntax, and basic spelling.