Twilight Sparkle, after having defeated Nightmare moon, decided to move into the library to be with her friends in Ponyville. Will those go badly? You decide!
How this Comment-Driven Adventure is going to work:
When the chapter is published, 2 days will be given to list choices in a google form. After 2 days, give or take timezones, all these will be put into a voting form, and 2 more days will be provided. After the two days are up, I will spend 2 days writing the next chapter, releasing it around the same time as the first one.
Example:
Twilight picks out a book at random, it reads: 'x'
You submit via link provided in the chapter suggestion for 'Elements of Harmony'.
After 2 days, you check back and vote on the suggestions.(You can vote for yourself, but it's a bit rude.)
Finally, the next chapter is released, and the process repeats.
The next day... Twilight explodes
Well, if the responses you're getting are any indication, you're probably going to want to kill all your readers by the time you're done writing this story.
5744595 ^^
Reader driven...
Yes, this will be a disaster.
5746156 Indubitably so. But such a wonderful fire it will be.
But isn't there five ponies besides her?
~Leonzilla
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Hey everyone, I got an idea!
Why don't we make warewolves (The author) part of this story?
That way we can make him write "things" about himself that we make him do for the rest of the story.
~Leonzilla
I'm genuinely curious to see how long this lasts before it spontaneously combusts.
*Glances at current polls*
Oh yeah. You're definitely go'nna wa'nna kill us by the time this is over.
5751630 Gosh, why are there so many weird suggestions?
One more day to do a tie breaker?
Forget that, just do both and get on with it.
~Leonzilla
Hmm.. Maybe I should've combined punishment and dinner and suggested she eat Spike.
5763750 You are technically allowed more than one suggestion
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Fantastic!
Oh my goodness, I can't wait to vote on some of these options.
I exploded while reading this.
A bit disappointed that the author wasn't introduced into the story or that Twilight won't actually help Barack Obama take over Canada but whatever there is always next chapter.
Also what is up with Barack Obama braking the fourth wall and this:
Two very important questions:
1)why is Sweetie belle talking time away from the time loop to come to this story and help Fluttrshy take care of Barack Obama?
Also if she is not the time loop Sweetie Belle but canon Sweetie Belle that actually makes it even weirder!
And
2)are the humans naked?
~Leonzilla
5765722 Whoops
5766365 no, wait, why did you change it?
It was awesome to have Sweetie Belle randomly appearing in the middle of the story.
~Leonzilla
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5766933 you are not going to changing it back now, are you?
~Leonzilla
5766947 Sorry ^^
5766967 you meanie
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Well, this is amuzing. I can only think that organizing them lightest on the bottom wont end well.
5767074 come on then, put it back the way it was.
After all it seems exactly the kind of random unexplained event that one would expect and enjoy to see in this kind of stories.
Not to mention fan-service for all your "A little loopy" fans.
So embrace the unintended reference and keep it.
~Leonzilla
Some of the selection choices leave me disappointed in the quality of humans. Especially that they actually got voted for.
I just found this piece written by warewolves (the author )
This is just advice from me but for all its worth I would recommend not to have a Gary Stu in this story of any kind.
You hear that my dear author?
~Leonzzzzzzz
We all want to torment the author.
I can't decide between voting to have the author in the fic or linking to A Little Loopy. Hmm... yeah, let's force the author into this. Sorry Mr Author person, you are now at our mercy.
Edit: Ahaha, 50% of people want you in the fic Werewolves. Good luck.
Make Spike wear a very silly hat.
Have a Chili-Vanilla muffin for dinner.
Eh I liked the multiple choice selection better. Just me?
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So far all of the multiple choices for the questions have been created by the readers. You've gotten here earlier than usual, so you're seeing step 1 of the 3 step chapter process.
Actually voting on these choices always has me pretty hyped though. I think my ideas are pretty good, until I see the other ideas that are twice as ridiculous as my own.
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Oops!
5786251
Oh.
"lend a hand"? Hand should be one of the words you might search and replace form chapters before posting. This is the second time I saw use accidentally using it. (The other was in one f Sweetie Belles time loops.)
Wait, is this april fools? Or are my fellow readers just that messed up?
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Well, "Kill Her" only had 2 votes, but every other option only had 1 or 0 votes, with 8 total votes. So I guess we're just that messed up?
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Lets make next chapter even worse!
Sounds good?
~Leonzilla
i thinks this story need to be tagged with "gore" and "random".
Ware is best matchmaker.
So, Twi's house is now a burger?
What are the books, lettuce?
5834192 Capsican
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*Blinks*
Alright, odd burger, but I can roll with it.
Speaking of rolling, I just rolled a two, which means that I get to play my three of clubs, and claim dominion over hamsters.
5834569 But I have Kind of Squirrels in play.
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When did you play that? We're not playing the rollover rule. It's Washing Day.
Unless I just missed it, in which case I play Necroplis and the Ace of Fours, which grants you dominion over hamsters, but gives me a continental victory in Trottingham.
Point to me, I think.
5834684 Darn it! Okay I place heart of the cards, which allows me to bring one princess back from the dead as a muffin.
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Hmm, okay...
I play emergency temporal shift, which allows me to move to Mornington Crescent, and causes Derpy The Destroyer to fall into my custody.
5840441 In that case I play Tank on my Shipping and handling card, raising his normality factor by fifty thousand.
5841157
Dang, you've had someone play The Magician's Gambit against you before, haven't you?
I play the King of Chicago, and remove my manticore from play, which gives me Mega Party Supplies.
Honestly, I'm vaguely surprised no one else has joined our game by now.