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Thanks to the chaotic magic of Discord, Equestria has been able to develop a way for same gender couples to bear children. The Elements of Harmony, married to each other, have come together and used the spell to have three beautiful daughters.

Princess Aura Nova, daughter of Magic and Laughter. Apple Streak, daughter of Loyalty and Honesty. And Glitterfly, daughter of Kindness and Generosity.

For many years, Equestria has been at peace with all six famous mares comfortable spreading friendship while raising their daughters. Yet, the forces of darkness are never one to sit still for long as a new evil erupts and causes devastation.

Will it be up to the old generation to fight his returning evil? Or will the new generation take the charge this time?

A Gift for DBZorDie and edited by Apple Cinnamon.

Picture belongs to mysterymelt

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 30 )

It's like SC almost... but with all of the best M6 pairs instead of the one.

I know when I'm beat. :twilightblush:

Comment posted by Rated Ponystar deleted Mar 11th, 2015

Well now... I did not expect this! Needless to say, I am quite pleased to see a new fic for my literary pleasure. :twilightsmile:

Damn... this is just outstanding! :rainbowderp: But I am also not surprised. The quality is everything I have ever seen which has flowed from your fingers to the screen. I see many moments of pure literary pleasure ahead, and I'm excited for it! :pinkiehappy:

Unsurprisingly, the Elements of Harmony have come together and used the spell to have three beautiful daughters.

The hell does unsurprisingly mean?

Looks like one of my favorite writers has made what I can assume, is another great FanFic.

5725588 Poor wording on my part.
What i meant to say was: what do YOU (as in, the description) mean by 'unsurprisingly'?

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If you read the prologue, it's revealed all the mane six ended up marrying one another. Obviously they would use such a spell to have a child with their loved ones to start a family.

5725613 That sounds like a lot to cover in a prologue, don't you think? And a small one, no less...
Sounds like a whole nother story you decided to just not write.

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If you read it, you'll see

5725613 The problem with using the word "Unsurprisingly" in the description is that it implies the reader has either already read the story. Or has already read a story connected to this one.

Now before you start to try and justify things. Let me explain that a description isn't there to tell people what happened, that's for the story to tell or a prologue. The description is there to hook the onlooker into reading the story. Like offering a slice of pie then when they want more, they have to pay for it.

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Should I change it? I mean I don't mind.

5725657 That probably would be best.

5725657 Probably be for the better.
Also, this:

For many years, Equestria has been at peace with all six famous mares comfortable spreading friendship while raising their daughters. Yet, the forces of darkness are never one to sit still for long as a new evil erupts and causes devastation.
Will it be up to the old generation to fight his returning evil? Or will the new generation take the charge this time?

You don't think that could've been worded to sound less... vague and cliché-sounding?

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I asked DBZ, who the fic is gifted for, and he says it was alright to use. So I'm going by what he wanted.

5725681 Alright, guess i can't argue with that.
Carry on.

Yay, all of my favorite ships had kids! I am forever happy!

Who was the carrier?

“I think we know what we’re suppose to do, Pinkie!” shouted Twilight, blushing. She then smiled and leaned over, kissing her wife on the cheek. “After all, we’ve done it ourselves a few times, my naughty little Pinkie.” She leaned forward. “And if you behave well enough I’ll let you bring out the whip cream tonight.”

As soon as I finished reading this paragraph, I had one thing in my mind:

Oh my god, PLEASE continue writing this! This could turn out to be such an amazing story:raritystarry:!

Great story! The only problem I have is that you are constantly switching between calling Fluttershy and Rarity's daughter Glitterfly and Glittershy, so I'm not quite certain what her name is. Otherwises, this story is awesome!~

I would love to see fan art of the children.

I like this but I don't really like Glitterfly's name. It just doesn't feel right. But it could just be me feeling that way.

ow, this is goiing to end bad.... XD

So, is he gay or not???

-- The mane 6 married to each other, and each pair had a kid
-- Discord was involved

....yep, I'm pretty sure we can imply how Discord helped each couple with having a kid. I think that the mommy of each couple were Pinkie, Applejack, and Fluttershy. Reasoning: Pinkie and Applejack are Earth Ponies, they have the body to have foals with little problem, and Fluttershy's a natural mother. Plus Rarity has her business, so she the breadwinner of the RariShy couple; RD's too much of a tomcolt to be a mommy, but about perfect to be a daddy even though she's a mare; and Twilight's kinda clueless with foal raising while Pinkie has experience due to babysitting the Cake twins, so it's better for Twilight to be daddy in the TwiPie couple.

I have to wonder where Spike is in this, considering I haven't read the other chapters yet. I wonder how broken he is that Rarity fell in love with somepony else. Kinda hoped that he found someone, even if it turns out that Spike is gay. At least he would have a special somepony of his own, even if his special somepony was another stallion. :moustache:

Nnope, thank God it's cancelled.

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