Lotus Eclipse and Donut Joe have known each other for years. In all those years Joe has always shown up to work on time and cheerful. So when one day Joe shows up late for work, looking like he was hit by a chariot, Lotus gets worried.
Should probably explain that Lotus Eclipse is an OC I made up as a disguise for Princess Luna.
Also, bit of a side note: This is my first fan fiction story. Critique is welcome on anything and everything, or if you just want to tell me what you think of it.
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Upvoted for being technically proficient, no errors stood out. Faved for being a nice oneshot that achieved what it set out to do, while leaving an option open for expansion in a sequel as 'Lotus Eclipse' gets used to her position at Joe's shop.
Thank you! I appreciate it
Nah.
Also, I guess you went with a different approach than having Luna hide her identity, but I'm a bit disappointed that Joe knew who she was from the get-go.