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    It only takes one mistake to ruin three lives.
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When Twilight plays with magic beyond her control, she finds herself and Rainbow stuck in a strange, horrible world. When they find out what happened, will they be able to get home? Will they even want to?

First Published
9th May 2012
Last Modified
10th Aug 2014
#2 · 128w, 1d ago · · · 18. Darkest After Dawn ·

Definitely gonna have to reread this...

#3 · 128w, 1d ago · · · 18. Darkest After Dawn ·

I've been meaning to get into this story for a while.  I might do it really soon now that it's with all the other fics I'm followed

#4 · 128w, 1d ago · · · 18. Darkest After Dawn ·

It's here! Faved and probably going to be re-read

#5 · 128w, 1d ago · · · 18. Darkest After Dawn ·

Sweet Luna, look at the word count. :rainbowderp:

Looks like someone has given me a challenge. :rainbowdetermined2:

#6 · 128w, 1d ago · · · 18. Darkest After Dawn ·

Oh wow, this looks good. Can't wait to read it, but I'm writing my own fanfic, The Lost Wonderbolts. Will go up Friday at 3:30 EST (after school)

#7 · 128w, 1d ago · · · 18. Darkest After Dawn ·

btw who drew the cover photo? can they design one for my fanfic? It's Fireflash (my avatar), Soarin, and Spitfire.

#8 · 128w, 1d ago · · · 18. Darkest After Dawn ·

nvm. Its going up on the site now.

#9 · 128w, 1d ago · · · 18. Darkest After Dawn ·

>>567845

http://unitoone.deviantart.com/

I know he had commissions closed awhile ago, but they might have opened again by now. Go ahead and ask, it couldn't hurt.

#10 · 128w, 1d ago · · · 18. Darkest After Dawn ·

It is great to see this story up here. :twilightsmile:

#11 · 128w, 20h ago · · · 18. Darkest After Dawn ·

It's finally moved over to Fimfiction, huh? Looking forward to new chapters!

#12 · 128w, 16h ago · · · 18. Darkest After Dawn ·

Finally, Oh dear god, I'm craving for a new chapter. I can't wait what you'll come up with!

#13 · 128w, 16h ago · · · 18. Darkest After Dawn ·

This is amazing. I read this story so, so long ago, and I've kept up with it since then. This was the first 'major' fanfic I ever read, and I'm very happy to see that its author is still alive and interested in finishing it.

#14 · 127w, 6d ago · · · 18. Darkest After Dawn ·

Of all the grimdarks out there, I find this to be my favorite. And Luna actually being Nightmare, there aren't too many stories out there that play her like that, I mean who wouldn't be ticked off for being banished for so long..

Thank you for not making this as gory as all the others, this deserves more thumbs up than it has i think.

#15 · 127w, 6d ago · · · 18. Darkest After Dawn ·

Keep going!

Oh yeah! FIRST!

#18 · 127w, 6d ago · · · 5. Lift Up Your Burdens ·

FIRST! hehe. typical rarity.:derpytongue2:

#19 · 127w, 6d ago · · · 6. Bright Futures ·

FIRST! GET THEM, RAINBOW AND SOARIN!

#20 · 127w, 6d ago · 1 · · 9. Everything You Ever ·

Totally knew the captain was dash

#21 · 127w, 6d ago · · · 13. Echoes ·

So to recap...Pinkie no longer smiles/laughs, Fluttershy is cruel, Rarity is killing everypony with "generosity", Applejack lied, this dimension's Rainbow Dash gave up on her friends and joined the Shadowbolts, so where's this dimension's Twilight? The original dimension's Twilight lost her magic, but surely one of the elements has survived.....

Oh yeah IM FIRST

#22 · 127w, 5d ago · · · 18. Darkest After Dawn ·

Out of chapters....:fluttercry: NO

#23 · 127w, 3d ago · · · 1. Aftermath ·

:twilightoops: do what

#24 · 127w, 3d ago · · · 3. Kindness and Regret ·

:fluttershyouch: please tell me that's celestia

:ajsleepy: that poor rabbit

#26 · 127w, 3d ago · · · 6. Bright Futures ·

:unsuresweetie:>>574769 you sure are enthusiastic about being first

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oh btw to the author of this story it is very thrilling

#27 · 127w, 3d ago · · · 8. Justice ·

:pinkiegasp: SPITFIRE!

#28 · 127w, 3d ago · · · 9. Everything You Ever ·

:ajbemused: how anticlimactic honestly she deserved to die for what she did to spitfire

#29 · 127w, 3d ago · · · 10. Foundations ·

:trixieshiftright: trixie you devious b*sqee*h

:applejackconfused: i am so confused right now

#31 · 127w, 3d ago · · · 13. Echoes ·

>>575838:facehoof: time and time again it's been stated in the story SHE IS DEAD

#32 · 127w, 3d ago · · · 14. Politeia ·

:pinkiegasp: so much subterfuge it can be seen by the blind

#33 · 127w, 3d ago · · · 15. The Abyss ·

:twilightoops: i'm scared now

#34 · 127w, 3d ago · · · 16. A Step too Far ·

:pinkiegasp: they can win! ... wait a minute did you just use twi and RD as a deus ex machina

rarity's gonna fight :rainbowlaugh:

rarity's gonna fight :rainbowlaugh:

#37 · 127w, 3d ago · · · 18. Darkest After Dawn ·

please make more chapters soon

oh on a side note :flutterrage:HOW DARE YOU KILL CELESTIA:flutterrage:

#38 · 127w, 2d ago · · · 18. Darkest After Dawn ·

One of my favorite stories. I keep anticipating an update from EqD, but so far, to no avail. Please don't give up, I'm really excited to see where it goes! :pinkiesad2: can't wait for new chapters! :rainbowkiss:

#39 · 127w, 2d ago · · · 1. Aftermath ·

Hmm. Didn't see this anywhere but Google docs 'till recently. Ah well, I love it and this gives me a chance to comment.

There shouldn't be any danger. ... Everyone who ever attempted this spell was never seen again, and Twilight thinks there was NO CHANCE OF DANGER?! Did it even occur that maybe there could've been something wrong with the spell? Wow! What an idiot!

Then again, she wouldn't doubt anything written down, like the very first episode. Go figure.

#40 · 127w, 2d ago · · · 18. Darkest After Dawn ·

>>594495

This weekend.

#41 · 127w, 1d ago · · · 8. Justice ·

HA!!!! Called who it was going to be in the last chapter......W00HOO!!! :yay:

#42 · 126w, 4d ago · · · 13. Echoes ·

heh, up till now applejack's little resistance only leaves me with 1 question with a increasingly obvious answer: What resistance?

right now, the way aj's refusing to leave just shows me how unlikely there even is a resistance group. course i could be wrong but so far theres been next to no solid info on it.

#43 · 126w, 4d ago · · · 14. Politeia ·

ah, so i was right with my comment on the previous chapter, no resistance group.

#44 · 126w, 2d ago · · · 18. Darkest After Dawn ·

MOAR CHAPTERZ! NAOW! :flutterrage:

THANK YOU!!!! NEW CHAPTER! FINALLY! :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::rainbowkiss::yay::derpytongue2:

Mr.Slide was laughter at the core, huh? Interesting.

Now they only need Fluttershy and they'll have the complete set!

So, I take it the General is Snips?

Didn't see that coming, really.

Makes me wonder where Snails is, though. :rainbowhuh:

Oh god, an update!

Thanks! So many thanks!

I didn't know the story was also on FimFiction.

Nice to see it here. TNTNE is a really good fic and I'm always excited to see an update.

So is the captain of the guard shining? If so, that will be awkward. :twilightoops:

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