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BronyCray

Joined May 2012
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Stories (2)

  • The Night That Never Ended
    Twilight and Rainbow find themselves in a world where Nightmare Moon was victorious

    145,617 words · 2,592 views · 268 likes · 11 dislikes
  • Mareway and Hurst
    It only takes one mistake to ruin three lives.
    4,043 words · 208 views · 10 likes · 1 dislikes

When Twilight plays with magic beyond her control, she finds herself and Rainbow stuck in a strange, horrible world. When they find out what happened, will they be able to get home? Will they even want to?

First Published
9th May 2012
Last Modified
10th Aug 2014

Comments ( 186 )

#2 · Chapter 19 · 119w, 2d ago · · ·

Definitely gonna have to reread this...

#3 · Chapter 19 · 119w, 2d ago · · ·

I've been meaning to get into this story for a while.  I might do it really soon now that it's with all the other fics I'm followed

#4 · Chapter 19 · 119w, 2d ago · · ·

It's here! Faved and probably going to be re-read

#5 · Chapter 19 · 119w, 2d ago · · ·

Sweet Luna, look at the word count. :rainbowderp:

Looks like someone has given me a challenge. :rainbowdetermined2:

#6 · Chapter 19 · 119w, 2d ago · · ·

Oh wow, this looks good. Can't wait to read it, but I'm writing my own fanfic, The Lost Wonderbolts. Will go up Friday at 3:30 EST (after school)

#7 · Chapter 19 · 119w, 2d ago · · ·

btw who drew the cover photo? can they design one for my fanfic? It's Fireflash (my avatar), Soarin, and Spitfire.

#8 · Chapter 19 · 119w, 2d ago · · ·

nvm. Its going up on the site now.

#9 · Chapter 19 · 119w, 2d ago · · ·

>>567845

http://unitoone.deviantart.com/

I know he had commissions closed awhile ago, but they might have opened again by now. Go ahead and ask, it couldn't hurt.

#10 · Chapter 19 · 119w, 2d ago · · ·

It is great to see this story up here. :twilightsmile:

#11 · Chapter 19 · 119w, 1d ago · · ·

It's finally moved over to Fimfiction, huh? Looking forward to new chapters!

#12 · Chapter 19 · 119w, 1d ago · · ·

Finally, Oh dear god, I'm craving for a new chapter. I can't wait what you'll come up with!

#13 · Chapter 19 · 119w, 1d ago · · ·

This is amazing. I read this story so, so long ago, and I've kept up with it since then. This was the first 'major' fanfic I ever read, and I'm very happy to see that its author is still alive and interested in finishing it.

#14 · Chapter 19 · 119w, 1d ago · · ·

Of all the grimdarks out there, I find this to be my favorite. And Luna actually being Nightmare, there aren't too many stories out there that play her like that, I mean who wouldn't be ticked off for being banished for so long..

Thank you for not making this as gory as all the others, this deserves more thumbs up than it has i think.

#15 · Chapter 19 · 119w, 1d ago · · ·

Keep going!

#16 · Chapter 4 · 119w, 23h ago · · ·

D:

#17 · Chapter 4 · 119w, 23h ago · · ·

Oh yeah! FIRST!

#18 · Chapter 5 · 119w, 22h ago · · ·

FIRST! hehe. typical rarity.:derpytongue2:

#19 · Chapter 6 · 119w, 21h ago · · ·

FIRST! GET THEM, RAINBOW AND SOARIN!

#20 · Chapter 9 · 119w, 18h ago · 1 · ·

Totally knew the captain was dash

#21 · Chapter 13 · 119w, 17h ago · · ·

So to recap...Pinkie no longer smiles/laughs, Fluttershy is cruel, Rarity is killing everypony with "generosity", Applejack lied, this dimension's Rainbow Dash gave up on her friends and joined the Shadowbolts, so where's this dimension's Twilight? The original dimension's Twilight lost her magic, but surely one of the elements has survived.....

Oh yeah IM FIRST

#22 · Chapter 19 · 119w, 2h ago · · ·

Out of chapters....:fluttercry: NO

#23 · Chapter 1 · 118w, 4d ago · · ·

:twilightoops: do what

#24 · Chapter 3 · 118w, 4d ago · · ·

:fluttershyouch: please tell me that's celestia

#25 · Chapter 4 · 118w, 4d ago · · ·

:ajsleepy: that poor rabbit

#26 · Chapter 6 · 118w, 4d ago · · ·

:unsuresweetie:>>574769 you sure are enthusiastic about being first

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oh btw to the author of this story it is very thrilling

#27 · Chapter 8 · 118w, 4d ago · · ·

:pinkiegasp: SPITFIRE!

#28 · Chapter 9 · 118w, 4d ago · · ·

:ajbemused: how anticlimactic honestly she deserved to die for what she did to spitfire

#29 · Chapter 10 · 118w, 4d ago · · ·

:trixieshiftright: trixie you devious b*sqee*h

#30 · Chapter 12 · 118w, 4d ago · · ·

:applejackconfused: i am so confused right now

#31 · Chapter 13 · 118w, 4d ago · · ·

>>575838:facehoof: time and time again it's been stated in the story SHE IS DEAD

#32 · Chapter 14 · 118w, 4d ago · · ·

:pinkiegasp: so much subterfuge it can be seen by the blind

#33 · Chapter 15 · 118w, 4d ago · · ·

:twilightoops: i'm scared now

#34 · Chapter 16 · 118w, 4d ago · · ·

:pinkiegasp: they can win! ... wait a minute did you just use twi and RD as a deus ex machina

#35 · Chapter 17 · 118w, 4d ago · · ·

rarity's gonna fight :rainbowlaugh:

#36 · Chapter 17 · 118w, 4d ago · · ·

rarity's gonna fight :rainbowlaugh:

#37 · Chapter 19 · 118w, 4d ago · · ·

please make more chapters soon

oh on a side note :flutterrage:HOW DARE YOU KILL CELESTIA:flutterrage:

#38 · Chapter 19 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

One of my favorite stories. I keep anticipating an update from EqD, but so far, to no avail. Please don't give up, I'm really excited to see where it goes! :pinkiesad2: can't wait for new chapters! :rainbowkiss:

#39 · Chapter 1 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

Hmm. Didn't see this anywhere but Google docs 'till recently. Ah well, I love it and this gives me a chance to comment.

There shouldn't be any danger. ... Everyone who ever attempted this spell was never seen again, and Twilight thinks there was NO CHANCE OF DANGER?! Did it even occur that maybe there could've been something wrong with the spell? Wow! What an idiot!

Then again, she wouldn't doubt anything written down, like the very first episode. Go figure.

#40 · Chapter 19 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

>>594495

This weekend.

#41 · Chapter 8 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

HA!!!! Called who it was going to be in the last chapter......W00HOO!!! :yay:

#42 · Chapter 13 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

heh, up till now applejack's little resistance only leaves me with 1 question with a increasingly obvious answer: What resistance?

right now, the way aj's refusing to leave just shows me how unlikely there even is a resistance group. course i could be wrong but so far theres been next to no solid info on it.

#43 · Chapter 14 · 117w, 5d ago · · ·

ah, so i was right with my comment on the previous chapter, no resistance group.

#44 · Chapter 19 · 117w, 3d ago · · ·

MOAR CHAPTERZ! NAOW! :flutterrage:

#45 · Chapter 20 · 117w, 2d ago · · ·

THANK YOU!!!! NEW CHAPTER! FINALLY! :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::rainbowkiss::yay::derpytongue2:

#46 · Chapter 20 · 117w, 2d ago · · ·

Mr.Slide was laughter at the core, huh? Interesting.

Now they only need Fluttershy and they'll have the complete set!

#47 · Chapter 20 · 117w, 2d ago · · ·

So, I take it the General is Snips?

Didn't see that coming, really.

Makes me wonder where Snails is, though. :rainbowhuh:

#48 · Chapter 20 · 117w, 2d ago · · ·

Oh god, an update!

Thanks! So many thanks!

#49 · Chapter 20 · 117w, 2d ago · · ·

I didn't know the story was also on FimFiction.

Nice to see it here. TNTNE is a really good fic and I'm always excited to see an update.

#50 · Chapter 20 · 117w, 2d ago · · ·

So is the captain of the guard shining? If so, that will be awkward. :twilightoops:

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