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AlesFlamas


I like to write stories. Not too great at it though. Open to collaborate!

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When Chrysalis invaded Equestria the first, with an army of Changelings by her side and a desire to subjugate each and every last Equestrian, she was considered one of the greatest threats Equestria had ever known.

When she tried again, by herself and with no discernible plan whatsoever, she became a laughingstock. Threat or laughingstock, either way, Celestia is tired of her shenanigans, and as such, has sentenced her to rehabilitation by way of friendship.

Chrysalis would have preferred death.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 10 )

Well... that's one way to go about it. Have a like.

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No, not friendship! Anything but Friendship!

Question... did Chrysalis invade simply to taste Shininr Armor's love?

There's a really great image on deviantart I've seen, with pretty close to this exact image, Chrysalis being forcibly dragged forward so Fluttershy can reform her, while Discord serves tea in the background. Good times.

I hope this will get some kind of sequel.

Hmm. For a comedy fic, this is a little low on the laughs per minute. Subjugate is missing an e on the end at one point, and Celestia says your instead of you're at one point.

I didn't get the particle physics joke. Is it about arousal? Is that the acceleration? I think the entire scene with Celestial was unneeded, as well. Two or three quick expository paragraphs could have done the job, and that would have left words enough to show Chrysalis taking petty revenge on her tormenters/rehabilitators, hopefully in a humerous fashion.

"The bodily fluids of changelings fetch quite a hefty price on the black market. And I myself might have. . . uses for it."

Nopony was ever killed by a cannon-propelled apple pie."

I don't know....those shipping wars have left many a casualty. The battlefields are strewn with their remains. :fluttershysad:


On the other hand, I just figured out another reason Celestia doesn't go around killing her enemies. She just likes to see them suffer. After all enemies of Equestria generally seem to be allergic to harmony and friendship...

That's just cruel and unusual punishment.

I'm quite happy that Discord didn't reveal what he needed the fluid for.

Very enjoyable story, comedy mostly applies to the first chapter, the second is mostly slice of love, but still very nice.

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