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Hsere


Writer of The Pony's Litterbox (ponyslitterbox.wordpress.com), where I analyze the storytelling technique of our beloved pastel equines. Occasionally, I convince myself that I can write fanfic.

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Ever wonder who taught Sunset Shimmer to play the guitar? A simple awkward after-school encounter between her and Flash becomes a look back on their previous relationship, along with a revelation or two.

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Comments ( 9 )

Hey, that wasn't bad.

The idea of Flash's motive for seeing Sunset being in some measure driven by egotism is curious, but I suppose it could happen. Of course, one could also say that, ignoble as that incentive may have been, it's a mark of character to have ended such a relationship upon the realization of its nature. Could've been more honest about it though, from the sound of things.

Anyway, it's short and sweet and well-edited; suits me just fine. :twilightsmile:

Nice little oneshot. Take a like and a cookie. (::)

Ooh, I liked it. That's some pretty well-needed development on both of their sides. It's a shame it has so few views.

I felt like some harmless twiflash so I was browsing the flash sentry character story list.
Found this
Was not dissapoint. :raritywink:

*sobbing* MY PRECIOUS CHILDREN. *falls over* PEOPLE DO SHIP THEM. I'M NOT ALONE.

Oh, this is so sweet! I can imagine them actually getting back together, now that they seem to have had a lot in common back then. Really helps with character development. :twilightsmile: :heart:

After reading this, I'm gonna try my luck on writing a FlashShimmer story.

Nicely done. :pinkiesmile:

This was really well done. Especially how you wrote the music description bit. I'm writing my own Flashimmer fic right now so I hope you don't mind me using this as reference. I'll credit you, of course.

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