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Exelion


Just a latin american guy who wants to post his stories in the site. That's all.

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Twilight organized a dinner to share a special moment with her friends at hearths warming eve, however the CMC will have a great adventure that will put their friendship in peril. Will their friendship endure in this special night?


Traslated to English by kowaiser
Edited by Chocolate Shadows and FelineFluff

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Comments ( 5 )

I have been planning this hearth’s warming dinner since the last time I was with my friends,

glad to know her friends would come to spend the day with her.

In other words, Spike has no friends and nobody wants to spend any time with him. Sounds about right.

Wait, Feline was your other editor?

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I miss her so much! :raritycry:

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What happened to her? :rainbowderp:

5992545 Not entirely sure. Something about her dad and not being able to go on fimfiction.

Either way, it's very difficult for her to log in on here and it seems like she's going through a tough time.

A decent fic. I like the feelings it transmits. It has a lot of problems with grammar and unnatural sounding speech however. It's well structured and I think with a few revisions it could deserve a much higher rating. I can even see this being an episode of the show.

With that said, once again, who the heck is giving Scoots permission to go on all these trips? She must have some of the most inattentive guardians in the world!

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