I love to swim, write, and waste my hours away on this site.
After her thousand year imprisonment, Luna has had problems reintegrating into Equestrian society due to the fact that everypony still fears her. But now, she must face her greatest challenge yet: technology.
Set prior to the events of 'Luna Eclipsed.' This was just a story for fun, so this shouldn't be taken seriously. I'm well aware that this isn't my best writing, but it was such a silly idea that I couldn't resist.
Page generated in 0.131 seconds
Total duration
956 users online
1,163,302 hits today, 1,822,946 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Like I said in the description, I'm well aware that this isn't my best writing. I had a ton of fun writing this though. Criticism is really appreciated, as I'm still trying to improve my writing.
Well, your other story was a real tear-jerker. Here's to hoping that this one is really funny to make up for it.
The idea with the clones seemed a tad spontaneous, but it was still funny all the same. I really like how you also gave us a little heartmelting moment at the end there too. The two sisters were near spot-on in their characters (occasionally save for Celest), and overall, I loved it. You've done a great job here.
Stealing images from other stories, eh?
Not that it's bad thing per se - it's just that I don't like when multiple stories share the same thumbnail. It makes my mind a lil bit confused.
DAT ENDING!
inb4 the Luna that remains is a clone....
How many Lunas does it take to change a light bulb?
No such number exists.
Bananas, eh?
582096
Awesome, pure and simple. I was rolling. I'd always made jokes about when Luna refferred to herself as 'we' and how she'd fit into basic society. This seems about right .
Really good random story congrats
Great fic, involving Luna, based off an overused and old joke. Needless to say I loved it
Could use a few more pointless details though, it just seemed to flow to fast for me
i will read lololololololol
Oh. My. God. I have not
ed this hard in a long time. INSTA-FAVE!!!!
Now I'm imagining Luna dressed up as Brick from Anchorman, yelling "WE LOVE LAMP!"
583162
That reference is WIN!!!
So in 1000 year we shall be threatened by lunas?
Simply amazing. Honestly, you are a definite add to my watch.
Oh god the laughs! I love this so much, keep writing stuff! You are awesome.
582596 I tried as hard as I could to find another image that better fit the story, but unfortunately this was the only one with the whole 'Luna has trouble with technology' idea. If I ever find another similar pic, I'll change it.
583162 Oh wow. I laughed so hard when I read that, you have no idea. That's absolutely brilliant. If you can somehow put that idea into a picture...
582816 bananas. You know, ON THE MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!
Ha! A really funny story.
(Why does Luna always have a ponified version of the Necronomicon lying around?)
Also, thou hast used Luna's archaisms mostly correctly. For this I am most grateful, for I could not bear to read another story in which Luna saith, "Thou has." For that, thou dost win. (Change "thineself" to "thyself," though.)
Bananas....
It's a Luna fork bomb! The fun gets doubled once every second! RUN FOR IT!
Truly one of the great stories of Fim Fiction. And I couldn't help but be reminded of The Sorcerer's apprentice when I read this. But I can't help but wonder what a bunch of idiotic Alicorn Clones are going to do on the moon.
one of the funniest fanfics i read so far. seems like you´re also great at writing comedy
HELLO! WE ARE LUNA!!!!!!
583162 oh god.
592152 Thanks, but I don't feel like it's my strong suit. I've had a couple of people tell me (and I have to say I agree with them) that some of the jokes felt forced and fell flat because of that. I'll keep trying to improve, though!
Remember kids to play safely. images5.fanpop.com/image/photos/30300000/The-Fun-has-been-Bubbled-my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-30315625-662-700.png
Wouldn't mind if you make more socially akward Luna stories
(hmmm did you have to use my banana cannon? lol
I loved it XD This made me laugh so hard!
Bananas... oh shiiiiii-
592618 Remember kids, cloning spells are not a toy. Do not use clones for other than their intended purpose.
Pretty good. The key to avoiding forced humor is to let the reader assume a little, rather than filling in too many of the blanks for them.
For example, instead of "ironically, a lightbulb went off in her head", use "a lightbulb went off in her head". (You don't have to tell the reader it's ironic.)
Also, it's usually better to keep outside references very subtle. Celestia's last line definitely didn't achieve the desired effect.
I know this is one of your older fics, so thanks for bearing with me this far.
Good story.
hahahahahahahhaha 24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m849vrNaWG1r76lino1_400.gif
I reviewed this story tonight you can find it here
By the mad saddle Arabian poet Abdul Alhazred?
HELLO! WE ARE LUNA! That line made me laugh so hard. My reaction was something like this:
This story was awesome!!!
597827 I love socially awkward Luna. She is hilarious in this story.
This was amazing! Luna is such a cutie!
Brilliantly funny - well done!