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Atomic Vortex 322760

Joined March 2012
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    Atomic Vortex's Stories (3)

    • Moving with the Wind
      Follow Atomic Vortex as he tackles a new life head on!

      86,518 words · 979 views · 59 likes · 5 dislikes
    • New Winds on the Horizon
      As Applejack gives birth, we follow Atom's adventures while life get even crazier!
      10,890 words · 483 views · 33 likes · 19 dislikes
    • Another Rainbow in the Sky
      Rainbow Dash-The only pony to ever do the Sonic Rainboom...Until this horrifying morning.
      1,273 words · 302 views · 8 likes · 6 dislikes

    *CURRENTLY UNDERGOING REWRITE!*

    We return to Atomic Vortex as his life gets even crazier! And not just because of the new born foals. He knows friends and family: Dark Lightning, Violet Supernova, Rhino, Naga, Janvier Novum, Fragment, Red Glare, Blue Breeze, Zephyr and more importantly, his wife Applejack will support him through good times and bad...but will it be enough this time? When a new foe arises, can Determination prevail over it? Or will Atom be cast aside in preparation for the new revolution?

    Best if you read Moving with the Wind first. Besides Violet Supernova, all of the other OCs are other Bronies', so feel free to check their pages, in fact I actively encourage it.

    Credit for the cover art goes to Rhino, dude you're an awesome guy and you'll always be at the top 3 of my BBFF...Best Brony Friend Forever...you guys should know this.

    First Published
    4th Jul 2012
    Last Modified
    13th Mar 2013

    Comments ( 55 )

    #1 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    FIRST!

    now i read

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I slapped my hand over my mouth irl when I slipped into the accent.

    #3 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I like how you worded it as if we were characters playing roles, makes it interesting.

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Babys i should make one.

    #5 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 5d ago · · ·
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    'This delightful fellow'  -- I could simply say 'handsome rogue' instead of that! xD

    Oh, and why do you say that I run away from fight? Being one of the weakest doesn't mean I don't have courage!

    But I agree with the part about my style of fight: if they can't hit me then they can't fight me! >:)

    #6 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 5d ago · · ·
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    ^

    XD

    Anyway, oh boy!

    Its here!

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Yup, and no fucks were given that day......

    #8 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Wait, so when my OC get to fight one you guys again...

    #9 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 5d ago · · ·
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    So, would you like another oc?

    #10 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>857185

    It's always a possibility, but currently, no thanks.:twilightsmile:

    #11 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>857201

    mmk just keep me in mind if you do want one.

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 49w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>855263

    you already have a filly for me and Rarity from awhile ago.

    #13 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>857201

    You forgot to mention I'm dating Rarity Atom. :duck::duck:

    #14 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>861535:

    I said NO, FUCKS WERE GIVEN.

    #15 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>862139 You're mistaken sir, there was exactly one fucks were given

    #18 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>867692:

    You son of a bitch...........:rainbowlaugh:

    #19 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>867700 :rainbowlaugh: You know I'm just messing with ya, right>

    #20 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #21 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>867708>>867722

    You two are pissing me off.:ajbemused:I'm not in the best of moods right now, so seriously. Stop.

    #22 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>867744 Sorry...:pinkiesad2:

    #23 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>867744:

    We were just having fun.

    #24 · Chapter 2 · 49w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>868987 So tomorrow right?

    #25 · Chapter 1 · 48w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I like this one very well coz im a newbe here and well im looking for some advise please reply

    #26 · Chapter 2 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>855544Thats right I will kick you ass to the sun, and I forgot why do I hate yo.... oh the damn mental kamakazi....... i still cant believe i fell for that

    #28 · Chapter 3 · 48w, 3d ago · · ·
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    YAYZ ITS ATOM FORM DAT UTHA STORY!

    #29 · Chapter 3 · 48w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Well...*shrug* here we go again.

    #30 · Chapter 3 · 48w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>908902

    There can be only one Orion.

    #31 · Chapter 3 · 48w, 3d ago · · ·
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    ATOM! I! WILL! BREAK YOU!

    #32 · Chapter 3 · 48w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Atom prepare your self i am going to ram thousands of years of experiance into your head...prepare yourself.

    #33 · Chapter 3 · 48w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>910007>>910597

    That's exactly what I'm afraid of.:fluttershyouch:

    #34 · Chapter 3 · 48w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>909273

    I am the Slime version of Orion >;D I AM ORION!

    #35 · Chapter 3 · 48w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>911111:

    *barely reads this now*

    About barely reading it.

    ........The Wonderbolts show...I wanted to go.....:ajsleepy:

    #38 · Chapter 4 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Well... that's not good.

    #39 · Chapter 4 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Aha, something exciting will happen and can't wait for the reveal.

    #40 · Chapter 4 · 46w, 18h ago · · ·
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    We must train some MORE.

    #41 · Chapter 5 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Wow... lot's of shit happening...

    Oh Luna, it's happening... I did it to protect her... why does she see me differently...

    #42 · Chapter 5 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Yusuf a update

    #43 · Chapter 5 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Seems legit

    #44 · Chapter 5 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    *table goes flying into the air* yes finaly

    #45 · Chapter 5 · 33w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #46 · Chapter 5 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I READ THIS THROUGH XBOX :D

    :pinkiehappy:

    NEW CHAPTER:heart:

    #47 · Chapter 5 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #48 · Chapter 6 · 13w, 5d ago · · 2 ·
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    First

    #49 · Chapter 6 · 13w, 5d ago · · ·
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    You know... the whole group seems a bit sadistic with Atom's training doesn't it? Also, curse you and your taunting me with the fact that I will not see the buildup and conclusion of a particular side arc for quite some time.

    #50 · Chapter 6 · 13w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>2259573

    Now who's the sadistic one! XD

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