Just a note here, it's 3 am where I am and I can't be arsed to go through and transfer all the formatting (which doesn't, it seems, get copy/pasted over). I may do it at a later date, but for now, I need to go to bed, as I have to fight hobos in the morning.

Truly excellent fanfic. It was one of the first I started reading.

One of the first MLP fanfics I ever read, and so far one of the best. Although the grammar could use some significant improvements at some points, I find the story intriguing and compelling, and I always find myself anticipating the next chapter.

I hope everything will turn out alright for Spike and Twilight...

Take as long as you need with your story, don't try to pressure yourself with it. On topic with the story though, I feel pretty sorry for Twilight in this one, not that this story didn't make me want to throw my laptop out the window screaming "NOOOOOOOOO" in a very Spike-esque way after she tried to kill herself though.

I have a few hunches about what that tome might have said too, but I'll just have to wait and see for that one :P Good job, nice chapter.

Yesz. Ai laik dis story. I shall read moar now.

o.o

This is awesome. No, seriously. You're excellent at this. :D

Whoaaa I'm tripping, bro. @-@

Uh oh D:

This shit's gettin' better and better. I have no hooves and must eat popcorn.

ó.ò

Oh, my... I actually made the face above when I read the last line. Crap I'm almost out of popcorn!

Epic giant monster fight scene. o-o

this was short...

>>1073210732

I've got a challenge for you, lad. Go get a kitchen knife. Take it, and stab yourself in the sternum. Then, pull it out, go to the hospital, get stitches and pop a few t3's.

Add that to a 5 day a week job. Do that for a few weeks, then tell me how much you feel like writing. I was tempted to just put the bloody thing on hiatus for a few months, I got you what I could.

you got stabbed what the hay do you do

>>1074110741

I'm a security guard. Some guy came into the library I work at (full of kids, I might add) obviously high off his ass, I had to drop him. Yeeeeah, he definitely got the worst of that exchange.

>>1074510745 Most security guards I have seen have guns, and that man would have never gotten close enough to them with a knife to do any damage (Meaning he would have had a cap in his a**, so to speak).

So, anyways, what exactly hapened that made those events transpire?

>>1073210732 If you had bothered to read the last chapter (or even read through the comments), you would know why.

>>1079010790

Ok, so.

This guy walks in, right? He's all cracked out on something, shaking like he's got a jackhammer up his ass. Now, he's right next to the children's section, so I've gotta say something, because he's probably dangerous. I go to speak to him, and he immediately turns around and stabs me in the fucking sternum with a kitchen knife.

Needless to say, I didn't take that very well. I think I broke his arm, and I'm just about positive I broke his face with my kneecap. Then I sent him my drycleaning bill through the police. I gotta pay for that uniform, damnit!

Seriously, though, just everybody around me's reactions, the librarians on duty were just O_o;

Took bloody forever for the cops to show up, though. Had to lock the fucker in a study room, gave him a bucket so he'd stop bleeding all over the damn carpet.

>>1079010790

I'm in Canada, and we somewhat frown upon wanton gun violence. We're not usually armed.

I thought Canada was a safe happy place D: I've never heard of this stuff happening in Australia, in a library no less. It happens at train stations sometimes but it's only because the people are involved in nasty things. Our security guards don't get guns either, but sometimes they have dogs and batons :D.

Why is that library so scary O_0 And where you in the news, that totally sounds news worthy.

Thanks for the awesome pony story by the way, I hope you are feeling better now. And I'm really surprised you didn't die, since it was in your sternum and all. Did it go deep?

I talk to much.

>>1088710887

Not overly, no. Couple centimeters. But yeah, Canada is a bloody wonderful place, some of the nicest people you'll ever meet. Unfortunately, even we have people who turn to drugs and get their faces broken when they go bibbledy batshit and stab security guards.

whoa....hope the bill was in the thousands. but hey, your retirement fund probably jumped up. still though, that must have been torture.

>>1090310903

It... hurt a bit. Bone pain is not very pleasant. I'm still high off my ass on t3's, though, so it's all good. Heh, I feel like House.

>>1081110811 Nice Job.

If it were me (I am in the USA by the way) I probably would have shot him in the knee and cracked the butt of the pistol over his head.

But you fought back something amazing after being stabbed. Most would have just fell to the ground and stayed there.

It sounds like you do a d*mn fine job as a security guard.  

>>1091610916 Heh, thanks. Wish I got more than minimum wage, though, especially after that

I'm going to stop reading here at chap 11.

Was gonna stop last chapter but I had to read on to see if there was gonna be anymore epic monster fighting!

I much prefer Twilight to not make it. So I'll just imagine my own ending.

Its not that I don't like Twi, but I just think its best if she dies instead.

Thanks for the story. Its pretty good. And sorry to hear about you getting stabbed.

Oh lord I cannot freaking wait for the next part of the story .-. Sorry for the stab thing but the last part was too interesting for me to not immediately  want more.  Fantastic work so far!

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>>1095810958

dear god you are a security guard and you are paid minimum? of course it is in a library so you wouldn't expect some hopped up idiot with a knife to come in, good job fighting back, hope you feel better soon

wait...THIS STORY IS HERE!? Finally I can keep track of it much easier.

I love this. Mustve sucked being stabbed though. I really hope that he wins though. People always think people like him are the villains and are monsters, but they're not. He understands how the world works. How evil works. He tries to stop it even if it isn't the best way to do so. He admits it himself. Because he understands he is judged worse than the ones who don't and are pure evil. They should persecute the evil of the world not him. I am with him all the way!

I love this. Mustve sucked being stabbed though. I really hope that he wins though. People always think people like him are the villains and are monsters, but they're not. He understands how the world works. How evil works. He tries to stop it even if it isn't the best way to do so. He admits it himself. Because he understands he is judged worse than the ones who don't and are pure evil. They should persecute the evil of the world not him. I am with him all the way!

>>264610264610 You should start a journal. I can see it now...

Jayswing103's journal

Dead dog in the alley this morning. Tire tread on burst stomach.

This city's afraid of me. I've seen its true face.

>>272324272324 Epicness. Pure epicness. I just might do that. I could be in an apoctolyptic world or something.

Also, thank you very much to my prereader for the song, as I can't write lyrics for shit!

its about time.....

>>447959447959 You forgot

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Knife wounds?

>>449401449401 Read any of the past Author's Notes or the comments?

Great to see your back on this! This was one of the first stories that really got me to start enjoying fan fiction, so I'm glad to see it's going to keep going.  Keep up the awesome work.

>>576630576630 Heh, thanks. I really appreciate it.

I'm glad I could get so many people to start reading this sort of thing.

The next chapter is ALMOST DONE, I just need to finish up the ending to it. It can either come off as terminally d'awwww or as annoyingly cheesy, so I'm trying to fine tune it before release.

Thanks again for being loyal as

>>579266579266 ......No.... That would be the 41st post....

You got stabbed. And you only broke his arm and face?!? I would have broke his arm, his leg, his nose, dislocated his jaw, and most likely bust a couple of his ribs.

I don't start fights, but I sure as H*** finish them.

>>583614583614 The issue with that, is if I use excessive force, I get in trouble.

>>583902583902

Ya. The only reson I was able to stay out of trouble with that one was because he would get up and try to get me over and over again. He wouldn't stay down until I broke his leg.

>>583925583925 Good lad. I knocked him right out, so there was no reason to keep going.

did you use *sly cooper the theives raccones* referece

otherwise great story so far

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yes shes finally gonna die

im still waiting

Jesus H. Christ, I FINALLY get the blasted image for this post working.

well look at what we have here...an update...you best do well and update this more often ya hear? Be a real shame if something were to happen to you if you dont...a real shame..

what took you so fucking long?! I've been waitin so long, and now it is here, no words.

I can't tell you how surprised I was to get a notice for this.  It has been a long time but totally worth it.  It looks like we are near the end and I look forward to the coming battle.  Let us hope it is as grand as the last one.

UPDATE YAY!!!

i feel almost sorry for that white dragon.

almost

And now we play the waiting game...

AN UPDATE?  Jesus Thank You.

the most epic fic's always take the most time, like the mlp and dead space cross over fic

>>854353854353 I cannot fucking WAIT for that one to update xD

>>855807855807 ME TOO!

Is this still alive? I'm really looking forward to finding out what happens next...

>>15999251599925 Sorry, I'm right in the middle of a lot of shit right now. I've got 4 essays coming up in the next three weeks. The chapter's half done, but I just don't have the time to work on it.

>>16001991600199 That's fine. Take your time of course. I've got so many stories in my "Read Later" folder I don't know when I'm gonna read them all anyway

Nice cover art!

>>16047391604739 Thanks. I've got a friend who's actually a professional illustrator, he offered to knock out something quickly for me, so I accepted.

Gosh... It was stronglly sad, ponies.

How say you can it and call himself a brony? ............................ Ok, I fine now.

He is searshing Twilight in the hidra! Twilight was eaten!

Don't be a coward, guy.

would have It been... Princess Luna?

Hmmm, lord of the rings references, interesting...