• Member Since 26th Feb, 2015
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Muddy Waters


I am an aspiring writer and editor who fell in love with the incredible ideas the analysis community came up with to explain the intricacies of MLP, so here I am adding my ideas to the mix.

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Smoky Nights would like nothing more than to sleep through the day and explore the night. Unfortunately, her parents don't share her passion. They believe, like many ponies, that the darkness hides too many dangers for a young pegasus to fly safely, even by moonlight. Desperate to prove them otherwise, Smoky approaches Princess Luna with a request that she make the night brighter. This small favour marks the beginning of a friendship, a bond that will follow the Princess like a shadow for the rest of her life.

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Comments ( 6 )

Keep up the great work you are doing. This is very well written and I like the story you have going on. Again,keep up the great work.

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Thank you very much :)

The question comes down to, if there were such a pony, a lone voice in the darkness, could Celestia have say turned Smoky to stone and revived her 1,000 years later, assuming Smoky was willing.

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You've just given me a wonderful idea for a sequel. Thanks!

This is sublime. Excellent work!

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