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>>559360559360

Why thank you Ulti! I appreciate that you took a look at my story. Surprised that someone even bumped into this since I am fairly new to to the site and everything.

>>559420559420

No probs. This looks promising and I love a good fic

not bad, kinda like dr.whooves, but with Spike......thumbs up!

Sounds cool so far, faved.

Nice

Some grammar issues near the end but nice nonetheless

>>590308590308

Oh grammar you laugh at me every time. I appreciate that you pointed that out though, since now I really want to produce a story that has close to no grammatical errors which was a big reason why this took longer then I would have liked. I could do with a proof reader but lets see what happens. Thanks for the comment Ulti input is always welcome!

Rainbow Dash's past would be evry interesting to see especially how she reunited with Fluttershy, etc...

>>608070608070

Hm, Rainbow Dash's past could be fun to toy around with, considering how little MLP has probed into it. Her Future as well could be fun to do as well, since RD is always made to become a Wonder bolt and since her life is so high risk there is a good chance of a home run with that. If that's the case though, prepare to see the fall of Rainbow Dash.

Hmmm...and things are getting real

Mas Por Favor

>>640453640453

Can do Ulti, taking it you enjoyed the twist I put in the story then. I was debating a lot with Rainbow taking a stand for Spike but seems it all fell into place on its own. I think the next Chapter will revolve more around Spike's mental state and Tick. Thanks for the comment input is always welcome to me.

Spike nicely played.

Love this story

Only keeps getting better and better

OH its made from zap apples! i thought it was... you know what, never mind...

>>841321841321

Tasting the rainbow took on a whole new meaning.

I wonder if RD got hurt because of....hm

Ooh, I wonder if it'll be like the end of sonic 2006.

i was thinking ''cupcakes'' when she gave him that muffin

anyway this story seems to be great and interesting, please just give me a sec.

SPIKE YOU DIRTY LITTLE ROTTEN STUPID DUMBASS, CAN'T  YOU SEE YOU'RE BRINGING COSMOS TO AND END BY SHOWING THEM THEIR FUTURE DAMMIT

Pinkie Pie is not dead yet? (more than one)

Spike changing the future? (one than more)

...further information not available here...

nice

So far i gotta say im really enjoying this story. I wish i could keep reading it tonight but early day tomorrow! defently faving

Wait wasnt pinkie alive in twilights future?

Was this just added to every Spike group going?

EDIT: Never mind, it was added to multiple folders.