It's Hearts and Hooves Day, and Pinkie Pie is going through her annual rituals. Distribute personalized cards to every resident of Ponyville? Check. Give out candy? Check. Sit in front of her bedroom window and eat lots of raw cookie dough? Mega-check. Everything has gone according to plan, and without a date to go on, Pinkie is ready to spend the rest of the day relaxing.
That is, until Pinkie realizes that every time she looks at Fluttershy her tummy feels weird. And if her Pinkie Sense is right—and it always is—that can only mean one thing: she is madly in love with Fluttershy.
This can only end well.
Written in a few hours for Equestria Daily's Super Happy Hearts and Hooves Lovefest Fanfic Event. Cover photo by Dasprid.
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Indeed. A Sophisticated Lady never gets caught.
Awww, that was adorable and silly, in a very Pinkie Pie style!
Pinkie... you're really bad at this.
oh pinkie...
Bravo. Lyra and BonBon perfectly sum up me and my special somepony. Sometimes we drive each other crazy. But we're still disgustingly cute together.
Ii'd love to hear what Rarity did though
I am a food microbiologist by profession and I approve of this fic.
That Salmonella will get you every time.
Not my most favorite story or how I wanted this one to end, but I liked it enough.
This fic just goes to show that Fluttershy can be downright vicious when she is angry.
5658792 Actually, the ending was a breath of fresh air from many MLP romance fics I've read, where one pony tells the other she actually doesn't share his/her feelings in return but they can still be friends. It's a lesson that you don't always get the one you love. And a very mature one too, everyone does need to understand that finding the one and getting together with them isn't always as easy as fanfiction makes it out to be. Guess what, kids? That's life. Sometimes the girl you want doesn't love you back.
This was a surprisingly good story, and rather mature in it's lesson. (No, not erotic mature.)
Plus, The ending line was brilliant.
I really wanted them to work out in the end.
5671457 They did work out. They worked out that Pinkie Pie had food poisoning.
This was perfect. I don't usually go for Romance tags but this was a real creative take on it.
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Drama aside, this went were I was expecting it to, but I was not disappointed. :)
Also, how is this the first time I've read about Pinkie Pie eating cookie dough?
5680960 They must be hard to avoid.
...goddammit, Rarity.
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Have you been on this site before? Unless proven otherwise, assume everyone is bisexual with dead parents.
Perfect!
That was rather cute! I'm glad that they managed to keep their best friend status, despite all of the shenanigans.
Might have been cool to have gotten a little bit more foreshadowing on Pinkie Pie's real sickness before the fact became officially known, but whatever, that's just some nit-picking from me. This still gets my thumbs up!
So, Pinkie's not actually into Fluttershy then, right? It seems like the only reason she thought she liked her was because she felt nauseous and Fluttershy's pretty/a good friend.
At the beginning, I thought this was going to go straight into contrived, cliche romance. You subverted my expectations with something very funny. Nice job!
It's not often you get a story like this, but when you do, you've gotta appreciate it. A-
Premise: 3 / 5 (average)
Writing: 3 / 5 (average)
That makes entirely too much sense, and I can;t believe I've never thought about that. I'll definitely be doing Movie and Dinner dates from now on.
I reviewed this story!
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... Point taken.
You. You're a baker. YOU should know better.
7521878 uhhh rebuttal.... It's pinkie
I had to read this through my fingers >.< pinkie is more awkward here than I will ever dream to be. everything was so deliciously horrifying to watch unfold, and the words "I want to die" slipped out of my mouth a grand total of three separate occasions. I'm glad it ended the way it did and subverted a few tropes I don't like. so uh... brb about to eat some cookie dough.
Pinkie, that's something a not normal person would say