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This story is a sequel to Past Skies
Thousands of years ago, three youngsters roamed the wilds together. Many things happened to them. Some were good, but others are better off forgotten. There are plenty of those. One has just resurfaced, one that Celestia would rather forget.
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I've got to say, this is a good job for your first piece of fiction. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but other than that, good job!
This tidbit, combined with the fact that all three of them seem inexplicably on their own makes me suspicious that something very colossal, and very dark is happening in their world.
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Oh, but there is.
What is the IceStarPonyUniverse, and how/where can I find out more about it?
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Click me!
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I haven't finished yet. The Dark Side of The Sun can be read a a stand alone story (even if Fever Dreams was out you could skip it) since most of my Tia and Lulu stories mention the events that occur in the other shorts and explain basic lore. I hope this helped.
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Fuck you; read the story.
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This is an E-rated story, please refrain from mean dialogue.
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I’ll E-rate you, faggot. >:(
You...
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Er, I what?
Engaging. Lot of questions. Namely, where are these kids parents? Nice touch that Celestia would think the Royal We is how everyone should speak.
Ouch. Very descriptive and heart wrenching.
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Thank you for reading! My first story isn't the one most people go for nowadays, and it usually takes a bit of searching in the author's notes of other stories to find. I don't try and hide it, I'm still quite fond of this story, though it is on the list of the stuff I'd like to re-edit (for eventual print stuff). It just doesn't seem like it's a popular first pick anymore. I'm still glad to see that the detail and impact is still good so many years later.
why do people delete comments before I can see them? :C
Much of this was quite pleasantly lyrical, but a touch difficult to follow. Kinda like a dream or sumpin, eh.
I thought that Discord was the sisters' brother. You said that he had parents of his own.
SSOOOO.....TIA IS COMING INTO HER OWN POWERS....EVOLVING.
SSOOO....MUCH....HEARTACHE !!!!!!!
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My apologies if it was hard to follow. Is there any part that you'd like clarification on?
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My horses can fit so much angst.
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No. No, thank you. Better to leave it stand as it is. If there are no explanations in 'real' life, why demand them here?
I do apologize for ending my earlier comment with the trailing "eh". That sounds rather dismissive, or even downright rude, and I'm sorry.
Understand, please, that 'lyrical' and 'like a dream' are meant as high praise. Perhaps that did not come across.
Excellent story.
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I’m always looking to improve my writing, and I don’t mind giving explanations about things. That’s part of the fun of fanfics — you can just ask the author questions directly.